I am sorry to say this but I'm going to be scrapping this story, I thought I had it going in the right direction but I've already noticed a lot of mistakes on my part in the story. I was hoping for this story to be my first good one but I guess I just was trying too hard. The kinda upbeat news for those of you who liked the way this story started off, I'll be doing a revised version of this story, a few changes here and there, and I'll start it off from a earlier point, plus I think it would make more sense for some more background on Taka other than the long explanation. So I'll be redoing the entire story and posting it up soon. I apologize for screwing up the story so bad and making it seem blah, I hope that the new version will have a lot more success than this one did.
Thanks for putting up with my mistakes, hope you read the new ones.
Ja ne!
