greetings fellow bronies and pegasisters. welcome to chapter 9 of my life as a brony. as you can see its been taking me awhile to come up with new ideas and so far i have gotten many coments on the iron pony chapter so i think i'll continue from there.
?:when is thy going to introduce thee.
Me: right sorry. everypony today i have with me princess luna.
Princess Luna: salutations to thee.
anywho... lets get to the comments. oh and just so you know these are comments for chapters 5-6
guest: get shadow the hedgehog to blast them.
okay the only problem with that is...SHADOW THE HEDGEHOG IS NOT IN THIS STORY AND NEVER WILL BE!
Princess Luna: calm thy self raze.
Me: your right princess. i'm sorry guest for yelling.
any way on to the last comment that is also from guest
Guest: i would wear a sparkly dress.
k... not really sure where that answer came from, but who cares.
now on to the chapter.
Princess Luna: Raze may i do thy honors.
Me:hhmm... sure why not?
Princess Luna: let us start thy chapter.
Disclaimer i do not own MLP:FIM, kingdom hearts,hotwheels, fireheart is owned by OnYx176, any of the songs or iron man. i do however own Raze,Sapphire,the two keyblades, and crystal the dragon/cat.
and now let thy chapter commence.
chapter 9: the sonic repulsor blast
i woke up and slowly looked around."hold the phone why am i still in the glowstick?" i thought.i slowly stood up having pain everywhere including my head.
"Ow, what happened?" i asked myself.then it slowly came to me.
"Right the party." i said to why do i hurt so much?
"Oh well." i told myself. i walked out the door locking it behind me. i'd clean up the mess later. i started to walk in the direction of my house, when i heard someone or something scream. i ran into an alley way and pressed a button on my saddle bag. instantly metal started to come together around my body until i was covered in a full metal suit. i then flew off toward the source of the scream. i saw... rainbow dash calling for help when there was no trouble to begin with. i landed silently behind her and decided to get some revenge. i tapped her shoulder causing her to jump a foot of the ground. i fell to the ground laughing my head off.
"Hey! aren't you supposed to be a hero?" she said a little ticked that i frightend her
"I'm sorry but someone called for help and i'm here to help." i told her.
"Well false alarm, besides i just wanted your attention." she said.
"Well you got it now what do you want and this better be good." i said menaceingly.
"I bet you can't even do a sonic rainboom in that hunk of junk!" she said. i could see she was challenging me.
"Tell you what i'll make you a deal: if i can you never call for help unless its a real emergency." i said.
"And what if you can't?" she asked. i could see she wasn't interested.
"if you win i will reveal who i am." i told her. i could see how the gears in that head of hers were turning in overdrive thinking of all the publicity she could get not to mention the chance to be on live televison.
"Deal?" i asked.
"Deal!" she confirmed.
"Mares first." i said. one second she was there the next she was hurtling toward the ground. i had JARIS zoom in and i could see the air litterally trying to stop her but she just went faster. eventually she broke through and colors went everywhere. i just stood there amazed. she landed next to me and patted me on the back.
"Your turn!"she said. i could sense how confident she was. well that was about to change.i activated all four propulsors and flew 40...50...60...70 feet into the air. i then de activated them and started to woosh toward the groundi activated the propulsion to speed my self up and as if on cue the wall of air appeared. i put propulsion on full blast. and sped up even more. the wall getting narrower and narrower. c'mon c'mon i wispered to myself. i needed more speed.i activated my back up power and the propulsion beams instantly went from light blue to bright white. i looked at how fast i was going. 300 MPH. cool. 20 feet away from the ground the wall broke and i completed the sonic rainboom. the only difference between mine and rainbow dash's was mine was a mixture of gold red and white.
i instantly put my hooves beneath me to stop but i was going too fast. i hit the ground so hard i was creating a trench while moving. eventually i tripped and went flipping through the air. i then landed face firstin the dirt. a shadow fell over me. great lets have rainbow dash show up to rub it in my face.
"Uh hey mister are you okay?" rainbow dash asked.i got up and dusted my self off.
"yeah i'm fine." i told her.
"well mine was better." she started to brag.
"well a deals a deal." i said.i started to take of my helmet but rainbow dash stoped me.
"no you don't have to. i'll admit that was pretty awesome."she said. wow rainbow dash actually complimenting me. i've heard everything.
"Thanks, well gotta go,if ya wanna race give me a shout." i said and took off.
well thats it for now. let me know if you have any thing you want me to add.
this is raze silverwing signing off.
