Dear FlightFeathers,
I appreciate you being honest with me and giving me a real review, so I'll explain a few things for you, and for anyone else who may have been wondering the same things.
First of all, the fighting in the first chapter between Blossom and Buttercup was merely bickering that siblings will do, hero or not.
Blossom's... crude acts that were mentioned were probably not apart of the character everyone pictures, but good girls have there secrets. So what if I made her a little kinky?
As for Buttercup, a lot of people cuss flippantly, and she wasn't in the best of moods. Seeing Butch and Boomer together disturbed her greatly and she's still shaken up about it. And seeing the resemblance between Butch and her and Boomer and Bubbles, its not hard to see why.
My writing is the one thing I feel I must apologize for. I'm not the best at it to begin with and I'm always too busy focusing on getting my ideas down to take the time to make sure everything came together nicely.
And Brick's killings... Well, he's kinda going insane. Seeing his victims fall takes his mind off everything, makes him smile. I believe its because he's wanted to off himself for a while now, but doesn't for the sake of his brothers. He's seeing himself as a monster and (be that is it may) his subconscious is doing what he thinks is the right thing by putting these girls out of their misery. So far, we've got the druggy party girl and the prostitute dead. Doesn't exactly seem like they were livin' the good life, does it?
Don't worry about Bubbles, she's gonna have some problems soon enough.
Um, I've saved the awkward part for last. Him is raping Brick. He's doing it to keep Brick evil and tainted since Boomer and Butch have already slipped from their cruel nature by falling in love. With each other, but love is love. And love is good, not evil.
And I do hope you read the rest of this story! I've already lost a fair few of the readers, thanks to Blossom's slip of the tongue. (P.S. if you sensitive bitches are having that much of a problem over a three letter word, you've probably got some homophobia you need to see a therapist about.) Thanks for the review and I hope to here from you again in the future!
EveDuncan2
