Ok so this chapter is going to be longer! Just as my awesome reviewers asked for! And thanks to my beta DefyingGravity95 and NotQuiteHumanAnymore, they are helping me with my grammar and spelling errors.

Naru: Yeah now people will be able to actually read your story…

Me: *Sigh*

Naru: It's a good thing you're alive, but why do you still have duct tape on your mouth?

Mai: If you haven't noticed I am not alive, or in the story, so the duct tape will remain, until further notice…*tears apart Naruto manga.*

Me: hsgggs hhsgbhsujzjh sjjsjdjj!

Iin: I am not allowed to tell you what she said...lets go with she is...upset...

Me:hahjd hdhsic dhfbhh sijfrhfg rhfburfjd sjdfrbbfr! Hadgashhhhhhjk

Lin: She said 'Now you have my readers helping you Mai! **********...

Lin: Yeah I can't say that...

Naru: Doesn't she need to, you know, eat and drink?

Mai: Maybe but oh well, she can just wait…I WANT TO LIVE! You don't understand Naru you are alive. You don't know how we dead people feel…

Gene: Yeah us, poor poor dead people…

Mai: When did you get here?

Gene: Just now, anyway on with the story….StandInTheRain17 does not own Ghost Hunt in any way, shape or form.

Naru POV

The clock would not move any faster, no matter how much I willed it to. So I tried to focus on my work, I was almost done, at least until my father gave me more 'needed' work. Although, I can see he is just trying to stall me, luckily the plane tickets were already purchased. And as I predicted my father came in.

"Sorry Noll, but I have some more paperwork for you to do; well I'll just leave you to it then." He said making a hasty retreat. The glare I had given him, probably said 'I am so not in the mood, leave or I will kill you.' So once again I looked at the clock willing it to move faster. Six more days, please be alright Mai.

Mai POV

The light started to get brighter and brighter until I could no longer look and had to shield my eyes. Once the light died down I opened my eyes and I was amazed at what I was looking at. It was the most beautiful meadow I have ever seen. Every kind of flower you could imagine, it would be in this meadow. You could hear the birds singing and the wind rustle through the trees. The sun seemed to be shining in every direction, making everything look even more stunning. I didn't know what to do in the meadow, so I did what I always did when I was clueless I sang a song. And just as I was about to, I heard someone else sing. I was mesmerized by the song. It sounded so familiar.

(A/N: I do not own this song, obviously. Lucy by skillet)

Hey Lucy, I remember your name...

I left a dozen roses on your grave today;

I'm in the grass on my knees, wipe the leaves away;

I just came to talk for a while,

I got some things, I need to say...

Now that it's over,

I just wanna hold her,

I'd give up all the world to see,

That little piece of heaven looking back at me;

Now that it's over,

I just wanna hold her;

I've gotta live with the choices I made,

And I can't live with myself today...

Hey Lucy, I remembered your birthday...

They said it'd bring some closure to say your name;

I know I'd do it all different if I had the chance,

But all I got are these roses to give,

And they can't help me make amends...

Now that it's over,

I just wanna hold her,

I'd give up all the world to see,

That little piece of heaven looking back at me;

Now that it's over,

I just wanna hold her;

I've gotta live with the choices I made,

And I can't live with myself today...

Here we are,

Now you're in my arms;

I never wanted anything so bad...

Here we are,

For a brand new start;

Living the life that we could've had...

Me and Lucy walking hand in hand,

Me and Lucy never wanna end!

Just another moment in your eyes,

I'll see you in another life,

In heaven, where we never say goodbye!

Now that it's over,

I just wanna hold her,

I'd give up all the world to see,

That little piece of heaven looking back at me;

Now that it's over,

I just wanna hold her;

I've gotta live with the choices I made,

And I can't live with myself today!

Here we are,

Now you're in my arms;

Here we are,

For a brand new start;

Got to live with the choices I've made,

And I can't live with myself today!

Me and Lucy walking hand in hand,

Me and Lucy never wanna end!

I got to live with the choices I've made,

And I can't live with myself...

Today...

Hey Lucy, I remember your name...

When the song ended, I was in an almost hypnotic state. Why had that song sounded so familiar? Like I had heard it my whole life, but I couldn't actually recall a time I had heard it. Then the world started to spin, like, literally. My body was still, but the meadow began to circle around me until it turned into a forest. But this forest was dead, I looked around and had to stifle a scream. All around me on the ground lay human bodies, all bloody and cut up; the blood making the ground red. There were human limbs strewn all around me. I wanted to close my eyes, but it was like I had no control over my body. Then I started to walk, and no matter where I went bodies littered the ground. And the further I walked into the forest the bodies were in worse condition than the previous ones; these looked like they had been torn apart by an animal. Then eaten and, then left to rot in the sun for a week. The smell was so rank I threw up, then I started to dry heave, as there was nothing left to throw up. I looked to my right and saw another body, but unlike the others this one was moving, and all its body parts were in the correct place. I ran to him, not caring that I did not know who this person was or why they were here in the forest of dead bodies. I was going so fast I ran into him nearly knocking him over.

"I'm sorry!" I said to the stranger as they got their balance, while steadying me as well. The man's grip was firm, and when he backed away I got a good look at him. He had black cargo pants on with a black overcoat, he had a hood that covered his facial features, but by just looking at him I could tell he was in about his early thirties and he had a lot of muscles.

"Why are you here? Why am I here? What is this place? How did I get here?" I just kept rambling off questions, not even caring that he would probably not answer them, I was just glad to not be alone.

" You should know why you are here, Mai. And if you do not I suppose I will just have to jog your memory." The hooded man said. But I slowly backed away, my face painted with horror. I screamed so loud I could have been heard throughout the whole forest. I knew that voice it was—

Gene POV

I was in the astral plane when I heard a scream, a very familiar scream at that. I wanted to run to her, to help her but it was like I was a prisoner, I could not move from here, and go there. So I sat down, and prayed to any god that would listen to protect the unfortunate brunette girl. Noll hurry up…

Monk POV

I looked down at the flowers in the shop, trying to decide what flowers Mai would like. We had to set up Mai's funeral... The word still sounded foreign. Now that I think about it I didn't know that much about Mai. I just knew that her parents died when she was younger, and she lived on her own.. I never asked any personal questions, I mean hell we didn't find out she was an orphan until the bloodstained labyrinth case. How could we call us her friends? Oh God speaking of friends, we weren't her only friends. She had friends at school. How would I tell them? I mean I didn't even know them! Just some stranger telling you your friend died, yeah that would go over well. I chuckled humorlessly. The lady at the counter gave me a questioning glance, I just smiled. I looked back at the flowers, I couldn't do this, I couldn't bury a friend. I quickly left the flower store, trying not to let the grief take a hold of me again.

Unknown POV

"She may prove to be more powerful than we first thought. No matter, she can still be broken, and that I will gladly do myself." I looked around the room, I saw a chorus of head nods and I knew I had them all wrapped around my finger. No one will stop this, for it has already began.

Oh no! Who did Mai see? Who is this unknown person? What does Gene know? Why is Naru not doing his paperwork?!

Naru: You know Paperwork isn't everything

Me:*looks at Naru, eyes bulging out of head.*

Naru: What life is all about tea, really

Mai: Figures

Me: ahd shd jkaj djsidj hhhhsua hdhghgdhsg

Mai: What she said was, 'you were in this chapter please let me go'

Mai: No I just don't want to, I like being in charge!

Naru: Mai with you in charge the world will burn down

Mai: *throws pillow at Naru*

Naru: Did you just throw a pillow at me? *Rolls up sleeves* Its on

Mai and Naru *Pillow fight*

Me: hdhha hdddg djjdjf ahdsagjkd ajshj ajdjga haookdhd ajdhasj

Lin: She said 'Please review and save me from these crazy people!'If you review I will update faster!"