P.P.S It's A DISCLAIMER!

If you hate disclaimers that are also rants, so do I unfortunately we have come to this.

This story will be changed from T rated to M-for mature, adult situations. If life in general triggers you well I suggest to exist this story now, you don't have to read the disclaimer. The people who are left I don't know if you read the revamped clique version it's still up just encase you want to read it, unfortunately the original version isn't I am sorry. A user named Wily Caryatid left a comment one day that not only irked my soul at 13 or 14, but also severely depressed me. No matter what I did or how ever many times I revamped the original version my confidence wasn't there. And the comment read.

First of all, in chapter eight you described Alicia as having "ebony skin" which . . . ? What? Alicia is white as hell, "ebony" usually refers to ebony wood and usually means BLACK. Again, Alicia is white as hell so why would her skin be so dark?Like, I know Lisi Harrison describes her as having "naturally tanned skin" but it's obvious Lisi Harrison doesn't know shit because Spanish people are pale as fuck. They're WHITE. She's probably thinking of Mestizx Latinx people, but we are not the same. Alicia is white and unless she has a weird genetic mutation, she has white skin (perhaps a bit olive toned, but that's doubtful).And, yay, accessorizing Spanish language in chapter ten so that Brielle can cuss someone out. Really? Why is this the first time we've heard her speak Spanish? It's bad fucking enough you have her called the "Latin princess" (wtf? How is she Latin?), then this. And please don't tell me she's a Mestiza Latina, because if she is I will be so fucking mad at the cariacture you have put her in, I can't , please don't say "of color" it sounds way too close to "colored" which is completely inaccurate and offensive. She is a woman of color, a person of , you obviously are misogynistic with your excessive usage of the infamously sexist slurs "bitch", "slut", "whore", etc. You obviously DO have a hatred towards women if you truly believe that a girl who sleeps with a lot of people is a "slut" (and, based on your writing, I'd say you do). And, lol, you think maybe girls see each other as such because of stories like this? Because of how you're writing out these characters? You can't say "I wish it was different" and then actively promote this sexist way of thinking.

I think posting this comment was disgusting. You should of PM me that would have been more respectful. Since you wanted to make accusations that were very out of pocket and publicize them for what ever reason I do not know if it was for clout. Though we can settle this publicity at 21 I can maturely put you in your place taking back my confidence in myself. Lisi Harrinson and me are two different people. This has always been an AU with characters that are OOC. Alicia in The Clique is very white washed she also ignorant to her heritage and only attempts make mention to the fact that she's Hispanic only when her looks come into play or after she has returned from Spain. Now in my fanfic I wanted to change her character and characteristics-instead of tanned skin I had originally planned for Alicia to have ebony skin along with Brielle in the story its mentioned they look like "twins" or "siblings". Not all Hispanics are pale there are some who have dark skin, or look like Native Americans or Hawaiians or they are tanned. We're a rainbow. And being from Chicago the clique to me wasn't diverse and I wanted to change that in my story. ( Side note:Now since that fanfic I have changed my mind and I know it says two Instagram models as there inspo for Brielle and Alicia I've now settled on Cierra and Savannah Ramirez). The "accessorizing the Spanish language" in that chapter well if you read the story Brielle and Alicia are very similar, however, in The Clique Alicia doesn't speak Spanish. In the original fanfic Alicia lies about being fluent in Spanish to Brielle and was often confused when Brielle spoke to her trying to play it off. It was the first time you hear Brielle actually speak and it was only a few lines in the earlier chapters she didn't have a part to play. As the story progressed you were going to be allowed more of an insight into her character that was all. Now I am unsure of what a Mestzix is or Mestiza if you wanted to explain to me what that was I wouldn't oppose of it I mean I looked it up and was still unsure on it. Brielle is Colombian which is why she calls herself "the Latin princess" she's just proud of her heritage another contrast from her and Alicia. And I believe Colombia is in Latin America or if you prefer central America (correct me if I am wrong) so that's how she's Latina. Lastly, can I say lastly? I am not a misogynist. I don't hate women. Yes I do think girls see each other as "sluts, whores, bitches, etc." because of wide set media throughout the early 2000s. Slut shaming was a huge and it still is today do not get me wrong. There are ignorant people in the world. I was ignorant to somethings and still are. No one's perfect. I feel like where the difference in my stories are there reasoning it doesn't make sense why they feel a person who has wrong them is for example a whore. And I want the readers to be like really? Honestly that makes her a whore? You also have to remember I'm writing this from a thirteen or fourteen year old mind set their cognitive thinking has not formed completely. No lie I clicked your username and I read you bio. I don't know if you left this comment because you felt insecure. It was not right. You could of instead of tearing me down you could have assisted in helping me become a better writer. I should not have had to disclaim that I don't hate women or that I am not stereotypical.

For the people in the back this is your warning if underage sex, colorism, racism, rape, molestation, incest, foul language etc. offend you or trigger you this story is not for you I am sorry. I just don't make content for you.