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here is ur new chap

i now ki short h

plz manage with it

Plz plz read

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Freedy : bataiye na sir

Daya : m baat kruga...(freedy hug daya in happiness)

Freedy : par kal aab so jaiye...

Daya : tum jaa rhe ho...(the tone in which daya speak have 1000 of feelings which make difficulty for freedy to answer)

Freedy : sir m duty par hu (he dnt want to deny)

daya : plz freedy ruk jao na ...m akela kya kruga...plz (freedy is about to deny) use m sambhal lunga...(freedy try to deny but failed)

Both talk about the last two years

Freedy tell him about last 2 years

Now its turn of daya

Daya : kya btau m tumhe ...abhijeet hi meri jindgi h jb vo dur tha to m jii hi ni ska..m to thik se hosh m bhi in 2 sallo mein bas 4-5 din m aya hu...or vo bhi raaj ki vjh se (abhijeet on gate now he is listening daya...bt daya dt aware about his presence) pata h freedy raj bhot acha ldka h...bhot caring h...bhot payara h...dil ka bhot saaf h...uske sath baat krke mujhe bhot acha lgta...jab vo paas hota h to ek skun sa hota h...or aab to hamari dosti bhi ho gai h...bhot khyal rkhta h vo mera...bilkul aise-jaise mera koi apna...bhot massum h...use gussa bi aata h...par us gusse mein bi pyar care or concern hota h (this is the limit of abhijeet's pesience...he is boling in anger...he get hurt...he want to cry...he want to shout...he want to scold...he want to hug ...he want to slap...he want to ask questions...he have thousands of feeling...he want to do so many thing & he did nothing which make him more and more angry...daya's line are revolving in his mind )

boss tum na duniya ke sbse ache wale boss ho

tu jindgi h meri mere bhai

tere bina sab kuch suna-suna lagta h yaar

boss tum na bhot ache ho

abhi tumhari jagah mere dil m koi ni le skta

And then

raj bhot achaa inssan h

bhot payaara h

bhot careing h

masum sa

aisa lagta h jaise mera hi koi apna h

uske guse m bi care hoti h

aab to humari dosti bi ho gai h

abhijeet in anger (like daya) : apna huh...vo apna ho gaya h or m ...m dushman ho gaya hu...uski daant mein care dikhti ...us se dosti bi kr li...vo payara h ...masum h ...caring ...huh caring my foot...(he is full in flow) are jo apni maa ki kadar na kar ske vo kisi or ki kadar kya krega...huh...(while composing him self ) par mujhe koi fark ni padta...mera us dhoke baaz insaan se koi rishta ni h...koi ni h vo mera...jo chae kre mujhe koi farak ni padta...

(he stoped with a voice) : fark padta h (he turn to saw the source of voice & saw person)

Abhijeet : tum...

Person : haa m

Abhijeet : tum yha kya kar rhe ho freedy

Freedy : vo daya sir ko pani chaiye tha

Abhijeet in teasing tone : oo tum kyo aae...vo uska dost...kya naam tha uska...ohaa raaj...vo aajata ...caring...masum..pyara...uska khyal rkhne wala...uska apna...jis ke saath rhkar use sakoon milta h

Freedy : sir aap galat samajh rhe h...

Abhijeet in anger : oo to aab bhi m hi galat hu...(in teary tone) mujhe chod ke chala gaya vo...meri kya galti thi...meine to nhi kha tha na ki chala ja...janta tha vo ki nhi jii sakta m uske bina fir..fir..bhi (now tears are rolling in his eyes) khta...tha ...hmesha saath...sath nibhauga...(he is sobbing) hamesha saath rhne ke waade kiye the...2 saal freedy...2 saal m kabhi use mera khyal ni aaya ...meri yaad nhi aai...bache ki trh rkha tha meine use...uska khane- pine ka kharcha...uski shopping ...uske gifts ...har chiz...ek khroch ni ane di apne hote hue...aapni jindgi mana use...chota bhai kha...vo..vo janta..tha..freedy...m maar jau ga uske bina...use pata tha ki m darta hu akele pan se...mujhe ek lhaash se insaan banaya...mujhe rishta diya...pyaar diya...ahsaas diya...khusi gam payar dukh har chiz se wakif karwaya...or jab use lga ki aab m uske bina nhi jii sakta ...mujhe uski aadat ho gai h ...to chod...chodkar..chala gaya...mujhe fir se ek lhaash bna diya


other side daya

daya is sitting on bed : ye freedy kha rh gaya...pani lene gaya h ya bnane gya h...m dkhta hu jakar...with this daya left


daya (while finding freedy) : kha gya ye...when he saw freddy ...

Daya : ye rha ...(he is about to call freedy when he saw abhijeet )

Daya in his mind : koi official baat kr rhe hoge dono mujhe ni jana chaiye (he is about to left when he listen abhijeet's voice)

Abhijeet to freedy in harsh tone : par aab m us se sirf nafrat karta hu...i hate him...(abhijeet is full in flow he event dnt aware that daya listening him) mera aab koi nata nhi h us dhoke baaz se...(the word 'dhokebaaz' cut daya heart in piceses) tum khte the na ki uske yha se jane ki jrur koi vjh hogi...(with painful smile) m btata hu ki vo kyo chla gaya

Isliea kyoki use bhot bada buisness man banna tha...(daya shocked and hurt by abhijeet thinking) use paisa chaiye tha...naam ...shorat chiye thi...hakikat to ye h ki vo kbi mujhe dost manta hi nhi tha...mujh se dosti to sirf post ke liea (daya is like his soul left him) mujhse dosti ka dikhawa kiya taaki vo khrcho se bach ske...uske khane-pine se leke uski shopping tak ke kharche m udhata tha...sab shi bolte h ki vo matlabi h ...jalta h vo mujh se meri kamyabi se meri khusiyo se...aaj-tak sirf usne fayda uthaya h mera...meri dosti ka...mere bhrose dushman ko m apna dost samaj baitha...pata h sb mujhe khte the ki daya manhoos h bhoj h mujh par bt m ni maana par aab pata chala ki vo sab sach hi khte the...(daya's face is fully wet ...he is feeling like he lost everything today...he left from there immedatly with much strgul)

Freedy saw him going at a time abhijeet also left

Freedy in teary tone : hey bhagwan ye kya ho gaya...daya sir pata ni kya-kya soch rhe ho (with this he left for daya's room)


in daya's room

Daya remembering abhijeet's word

daya mere bhai mere dost mere yaar meri jaan...tujh par meri har khushi kurban...

Daya in acting : waah! Waah!...waah ! Waah !

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Abhijeet : kya hua daya...kyu pareshan ho...agar tumhe mera yha rhne ka faisla pasand ni h to ...m chla jauga wapaas apne ghar chla jauga...

Daya immedatly : nhi-nhi abhijeet aisa ni h baas

Abhijeet : to fir kaisa h daya

Daya : vo..vo..(with a deep breath) m manhoos hu...janam te hi apne maa-baap ko kha gya...khi meri vajh se agar tumhe kuch ho gaya to

Abhijeet : daya...khabardar jo tunhe mere dost ko manhoos kha to fir kabhi... vo bhot acha h...sajhe

Daya : ek baat btau (abhijeet noded) sab mujhe manhoos khte h ...bhot bura lagta h (and a tear fall from his eyes)

Abhijeet immedatly hug daya

Abhijeet : fir kabhi agar koi tujhe kuch khe to tu mujhe bta dena m sambhal lu ga use...ok

daya in tears : par aaj kise bolu m abhijeet

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Abhijeet to shopkepper : ye lo

Daya : are tum ne kyo paise kharch kiye m de rha tha na

Abhijeet in lovely tone : kal hum dono bhai bne...or bade bhai ke hote chota paise de ye acha ni lagta

Daya : dekh lo abhi agar mujhe aadat ho gai to

Abhijeet : to mujhe bhoot khushi hogi

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after completing case (raj jangal ke bhoot ka)

Daya : boss tumhare khnde kaise h

Abhijeet : kyo mere kandhoo ko kya hua h

Daya : are aaj tumhare kandho par m jo khda tha kitna bojh udaya becharo ne

Abhijeet : tu mere liea bojh nhi h daya or na hi kbi ho skta hSmjha...kbhi khud ko mujh par bojh maat khna ainda se ok

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When freedy touch his shoulder

Daya : dekha tumne...tum galat the vo badal gaya h

Freedy : nhi sir ...unhone jo bi kha vo sab sirf gusse m bola

Daya : aab vo hi hoga jo vo chata h and he left

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the end

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ye bhot galat baat h

mana ki pichla chap short tha

bt iska matlb ye ni h ki aap rvw krna hi band kar do...plz rvw

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or haa i know ki ye chap short h

iske liea kaan pakad ke sorry

bt m phle se bada likha h

kya kru bhot bussy hu

aaj hi rvw dekhe 7th chap ke

to aap sab ke khne par update de rhi hu

sorry once again

bhot bussy hu yaar

5-6 dino se aaj ff open kiya h

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regular rvwers bi gayab h

plz aise maat kro

rvw to do

views or visitors to badhe h

or rvws ghte h

thats nt fare

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chlo socho kya aab daya chla jaega humesha ke liea...

Galti h abhijeet ki ya nhi

Nxt chap will intresting

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thx to all reviewers

and sorry fr short

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ok

bye

tc

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arzoo