Hi guys~ I actually started this earlier but... Things happened. Anyway, I'm not gonna chat on and on about my daily life. So... Let's start with the story as quick as possible! There might be MORE mysteries coming UP! BE EXCITED! Maybe NOT.. Anyway, again Just ignore this and go ahead to read to rest! ~EmandM6


Chapter 8 review

Maven was going to handcuff Tris!

"FREEZE!" I shouted


TRIS POV

It was Maven. It was Maven who kidnapped me. It's totally obvious because he smells like tomatoes. That's how Maven's twin sister, Elara, smells like. Maven is Elara's puppet I know so. I doubt that he can't even throw a proper punch if Elara wasn't commanding his every move. Sometimes, I even feel bad for that poor puppet boy. But now, the only thing I feel is anger. Anger. That is exploding out of me like a erupting volcano. I fight, Try to get away from his, Maven's devil grasp. I struggle. His hands clasp around my neck at some point. I can't breath. The edges of my vision goes dark. I try to blink it away but I can't. This is the end. I feel as I feel cold metal touching the side of my head. Gun. Then I hear Maven ice cold voice that makes me shiver even though my face is burning red. "Don't move." Maven whispers. I feel my heart stop.

The next thing I know is that I have my hands raised high. Maven still has a gun pointed to my head. Now he's making me face the bloody wall. I do as he say. What can I do at this moment?

FOUR POV

Tris's face is covered in sweat. I'm desperate to wipe it away. Make her clean again. I shout, "FREEZE!" at Maven. He just keeps on trying to make Tris stand still or whatever. Oh hell. I want to crush the bloody hell out of him. I want to...

"Four!" I hear Tris faintly scream. Tris. If I don't save her now, she is going to die. That is not gong to happen with me still breathing. I turn invisible. As much as I want to kill Maven, this is not the time. I need to save Tris first. I punch Maven hard in the jaw. The impact knocks him out cold. I love it. I love the shock that goes through me as my fist connects with Maven's jaw. Without giving anymore time to enjoy this satisfaction, I run, I fly. I fly towards Tris. But something stops me cold. It's Maven's hand. One clasping his jaw. One grabbing my arm as hard as he can. What..? I thought I was invisible? Is he...he can't be...but?

MAVEN POV

I knew that Four was one of my kind. I knew this since I fist met him at this Dauntless compound. He looked like he was a new-born. Which I was too. This fact, was what I knew. Nobody else knew. Not even my annoying little sister, Elara. She is impossible. I only stick with her because I don't know how to hide my abilities like Four, I don't know how he does it. Because I have powers, I can see other Vampires invisible as well. Sometimes it's really annoying. They are everywhere.

But now, I know what I've done to Four. I'm going to ruin his life just like his father did to me. By killing his girlfriend. That's why I grabbed his arm as if it's the last thing I do. Tris and Four both looks stunned. Tris must have known who Four was, because he is invisible at the moment. Awww but Four's punch is deadly strong. I'm certain about this making a bruise tomorrow. Then I'll have to explain it to Elara...

FOUR POV

Maven is a vampire. Maven is a...?

TRIS POV

Maven is grabbing on to something invisible. That must be Tobias because he just disappeared. But how could this happen? I can't even see him. This might only work if he himself was a vampire. This must be true because Maven is smiling like he just tasted heaven and no one else did. I hate him. But is he a...?

FOUR POV

I turn off my invisibility. I don't know how to describe it so I'll just saying 'turn off'. But as soon as I had Tris looking at me from my back-holding hands- I demanded, "Maven are you...?" He cuts me off with a grunt. "Yes Four, I am. Thanks to your wonderful father..." "WHAT" I yell. My father. Who kicked me out. My father, who could't control his thirst enough so that he had to bite his one and only son. My father, who tries everything to keep his job at the government. Turned someone? That's impossible!

TRIS POV

Who is Tobias's father? If he is the one who turned Tobias into... this I swear to god, I will crush his skull. So I ask him. "Who is your father?" Tobias quickly answers, almost yelling, "His name is Marcus. Leader of abnegation. He turned me into a vampire."

That's impossible. Abnegation leader? The most selfish one? This can't be true, but Maven nods in agreement. I start,

"Tobias..."

Thank you! I will try to update another chapter some time tomorrow!