Yo Akio here bringing you Naruto The Neglected Prodigy chapter 8. In this chapter has what shade1998 suggested which I really liked the idea of a shit load of ninja wires.

I was thinking of making naruto have some type of bloodline in this chapter but I don't know which one so I will postpone it into a later chapter so now is the time to suggest which one you want:

Sharingan-

Rinegan-

Mokuton-

Or should I make my own bloodline-

Or none-

well review you got this whole week to decide so just review once you decide on which one I should give naruto or if you don't want him to have any. Okay onto the story.

Chapter 9: Naruto's counter attack

"NOOOOOOOOOO!" Naruto screamed as he shook her body back and forth and begging her to come back to him but got no response back. He laid ryuzetsu back down and just then speed that would even put the Hiraishin to shame he rushed at the person who 'killed' his ryuzetsu and beheaded him.

Naruto turned to kakashi with so much killing intent that it caused most of the people over there to drop to their knees and the waves in the ocean was more crazy then it already was. The sky started to darken and drops of rain began to fall bit by bit.

The fight was resumed when naruto with his new found speed charged at kakashi and began circling him. Kakashi was having trouble keeping up so he summon four clones to surround him. Naruto kept on running until he saw an opening and broke through the clones defense and ninja wires came out of no where and struck the clones feet and neck.

"your good" said kakashi as he let his sharingan eye see the world " but not good enough" with that he was able to see narutos movement and smirked ' I got you now' he thought as he looked to naruto's leg and threw a kunai with explosive tags but to his horror his leg was pulled up from the ground and he threw the kunai into the air. ' what happened I could have sworn I got him' the thought.

Naruto smirked ' thanks to this unlimited ninja wire gloves you won't see whats coming' he thought as he started a taijutsu match with kakashi when he was caught off guard.

WITH TENZO

The fight with the clone army was finally over but with a cause 2/3rds of his men were killed. " I'm sorry but we have get back there is a prisoner escaping from here that is very dangerous we would like you for you to assist us on recapturing him or kill him on the spot" tenzo said.

The guards leaders thought about it for a couple minutes and decided to help them " men our battle is not yet finished it looks like someone is trying to escape from prison and any able body will help us get this criminal" he said as they began to run to the direction of the attack and where the huge explosion from earlier was.

SOMEWHERE ELSE ON THE ISLAND

" Danzo-sama said wait until they are all weakened and then strike so the battle will be faster, if possible danzo-sama would like for us to kill kakashi and take his sharingan along with shisui's but for shisui wait for him to use the evolved sharingan" said a root ninja that was leading a 5 man squad.

BACK TO NARUTO

Kakashi even with his sharingan was barely making out all narutos move. Naruto used some type of invisible wires every time he was caught off guard which resulted in a painful fall or lots of scatches around his body but the most noticable cuts was at his mask.

"you know kakashi I've always wondered what your hiding under that mask" naruto said as he dodged a ninjato " that reminds me isn't shisui on your team, Hey shisui!" he shouted across the bloodied beach to his friend.

"what!" shisui shouted back.

" have you ever seen kakashi without his mask" he asked and he received a no and asked " would you like to see what he looks like. Hes probably really ugly, thats why he wears a mask" he taunted kakashi.

Kakashi scowled and smirked " Your so weak that you can't even protect the girl you like" he said now that was just going crossing the line. Naruto killer intent began to rise even more and hes faster then before " uh oh" was all he could say when he saw naruto.

Naruto's eyes was over shadowed by his hair and he said in a low tone " don't you ever say that again" before he vanished.

Kakashi looked at his right hand that was now gone. " I will make you suffer as slowly as I can so you can all the pain and before your back up reaches here you will be scene without head, both arms, and legs" he said as he began torturing kakshi with is unlimited ninja wires.

With that naruto slowly tortured him from small cuts to big cuts. Kakashi having enough of this activated his mongekyo sharingan and tried to pull naruto away into his own dimension. But failed bitterly because he couldn't keep up but got an ace up his sleeve still. He looked down to the downed form of ryutzetsu and dodged the wires and use chakra enhanced running and grabbed her with his left arm kunai on mouth pointing at her neck.

" come any closer and you won't have anything to bury" he said, just when he said that his stomache was in immense pain he looked down and saw a kunai in his stomache and he looked at where the hand came from and saw the girls eyes opened wide and continued to stab him mercilessly. (I told you I had a plan with her)

Just when she was about to deliver the final blow kakashi was moved away bye a wood release. " how dare you do this to senpai" he said as he got kakashi and checked his condition. " men attack them now!" he yelled.

Bye that time shisui was done with his portion of anbu and came to aid naruto seeing that there reinforcements have arrived. " well the whole party is here now" said shisui.

Naruto,Ryuzetsu, and Shisui got behind each others back and naruto said "not quite there is a squad of 4 kage level anbu somewhere and I think they are waiting after we're all exhausted and then they make there move or either that or they are just here to observe". Shisui was surprised that he didn't know this sooner.

"you've improved your skills naruto" he said as the group of anbu and guards started attacking and yelled " Fire style 4 o'clock" and they jumped in time just to the fire jutsu they used hit each other.

Tenzo by now was losing hope of loosing left made an excuse that kakashi needed medical attention stat and left saying that he'll be coming back.

A couple more minutes later there were a lot of headless anbu, burnt, or head a hole in there chest. Loosing hope they tried to escape but a rain of kunais stopped them and killed them right away. The guards seeing the battle not turning in their favor retreated a few minutes back to treat the woundeds.

"So you finally decided to show yourself" stated naruto as he got his ninja wires ready. The others did so as well but with different weapons. " I see so your from root, so danzo is the one to blame for this and the 'Hokage'" he said disgustedly " how low will that village will fall" with that the battle began.

PORT VILLAGE

Minato and Kushina just finished what they were doing just when they were about to get up and shower kakashi's ninja dogs mainly pakun had a panicked look on his face he doesn't even care if both the humans were naked. "big trouble the assault on the island was a failure and kakashi is very injured missing his right arm and had multiple stabs on his stomache some how he survived but he might never be able to be a ninja again we still don't know for now" the dog said fast.

At the end of the story minato kept on narrowing his eyes on the report " and what of the others?" he asked calmly. He sent his best anbu's out there they can't be all dead,right?

The dog looked down saddened and said" no one made it except tenzo, the others died of in the battle with the clone armies and naruto's friends".

Minato took out a scroll and began scribling something on it and said " take this to konoha and tell them to do this immediantly and tell them I will be back by morning.

BACK TO THE BATTLE SCENE

The rain stopped pouring and the morning sun began to rise and there were dead bodies all over the beach. " what should we do with this last root" asked shisui as he tied him down.

"I have a messege for konoha maybe he can deliver it for me?" he looked at the anbu and he nodded. " Tell konoha that if they ever messes with us this isn't the damage it will be it will be far worse then this. Tell them if anyone from the leaf are to attack any one of us and that person hurt or not we will go there and level that place down and the existants of that village will be gone without a trace and yeah they can put us in the bingo book it'll be funner that way" he said as the root anbu wrote everything down and nodded. "NOW LEAVE!" naruto yelled the anbu even though he wasn't supposed to have emotions left as hurry as he can.

Naruto sighed and remembered something " ARE YOU ALRIGHT?" as he began to look for any visible wounds on Ryuzetsu and was confused " how did you survive I was sure the kunai hit your heart." he asked.

Ryuzetsu looked at her chest and pulled something out, it was a beautiful golden lighter that naruto stole from the guards. " It hit the lighter that you gave me for my birthday"

FLASHBACK

'crap its ryu-chan's birthday tomorrow what should I get her.' he thought and then saw something shiny from a guard walking by and used his ninja skills to steal it from them. 'ah a golden lighter and its made of gold perfect gift for her' he thought.

The next day naruto woke up early and got his present and found a box to put it in.

When Ryuzetsu woke up he was sitting on the ground with foods he stole from the kitchen."Happy Birthday Ryu-chan!" he said as he gestered for her to eat it. When she was done they were let out of their cell and began their pranking acts.

When they were in the chambers they laughed at what they did to the guard. Naruto decided it was a good time to give her the gift he got her.

When she opened she gasped at the beautiful golden match and hugged naruto with a deathly one and got a string and strapit around the hilt and put it around her neck.

FLASHBACK END

"In the end it was you who saved me" she said as she hugged naruto. Naruto blushed and hugged back.

But then a cough broke them apart and blushed " I know you two want to rip each others clothes out but we're not off the island yet " he said.

They got on the three man boat and left with a big bang behind with naruto's last explosion on the prison.

CHAPTER END

WHAT DO YOU GUYS THINK AND DON'T FORGET TO REVIEW FOR WHICH BLOODLINE NARUTO SHOULD GET

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