I fixed some of my mistakes in my other chapters. You were right my grammar really sucks. They aren't really good but you can understand better. Anyway Ukira didn't defeat Naruto at all I mean he wasn't expecting that attack from her so that's why he didn't move when she attacked. But if he had known he could have move and defeat Ukira. I thought I made that clear but I guess I didn't sorry. Please review
(Uzumaki's house)
"Ukira-chan wake up we're going to be late"Kenji yelled
why does everyone has to wake up early? Ukira wondered
maybe it's because they're not lazy like you her inner answered
who are you?
your inner
WTF my inner?
yeah you inherited it from your mother she has one too
oh great more freak traits from my mother
hehehe
shut up I better get ready
(donwstairs)
"Ukira-chan you haven't change yet?"Kenji asked a little worry after all they only had 30 minutes to get to school.
"relax Kenji can't you see? it's raining so they know some students are going to be late"Ukira answered taking a tomato out of the fridge
"what do you usually eat for breakfast?"Kenji asked
"orange juice and I don't know whatever my daddy makes"
"do you always eat tomatoes?"
"of course they're the best fruits ever"
"Ukira-chan they're vegetables"
"no they're not"
"yes they are"
"not"
"yes"
"not"
"yes"
"not"
"SHUT UP"Tsunade yelled
"Tsunade-san what are you doing here?"Kenji asked
"well your father had to go to the office early and your mother had an emergency in the hospital so I have to take you to school"Tsunade answered
"oh I see"
"now Ukira get ready you too Kenji it's raining so take a coat or something"Tsunade ordered
(15 minutes)
"that was fast"Tsunade said
"let's go Tsunade nee-san"Ukira said very happy. It was expected cause Ukira was always happy whenever Tsunade was around. She was her idol.
"oh and Kenji Ukira is right tomatoes are fruits"Ukira smirked
(Konoha)
"Tsunade nee-san do you want to train with me after school?"Ukira asked
"maybe I don't know if I have time"Tsunade answered
"I'll wait for you in the training grounds at 3:00 if you don't come it's okay"
"Tsunade-san do you know about Ukira's condition?"Kenji asked
"yeah I heard"
"you know I'm here"Ukira said very angry.
how can they talk about me like if I'm not there? I hate that
maybe they're worry
they're not they just feel pity and I don't want that
you're like your mother you never listen to us
SHUT UP I'm nothing like her
"I'll go to school alone thank you Tsunade I'll see you later"Ukira said
"wait Ukira-ch.."Kenji couldn't finish cause she was gone.
"let her go Kenji you shouldn't be mad at her"
"but she just left like that?"Kenji protested
"yeah but think about it the only person she loves is not with her anymore and the person she hates the most is living with her and we were talking about it like if we feel pity for her"
"oh I see I'll talk to her at school"
"yeah you should do that see you later Kenji"Tsunade said smiling
(school)
I'm so stupid I shouldn't have yelled like that
yes you're really emotional
not you too
anyway you should say sorry to them
no way
you know the Uchiha pride is very bad for you
it's not that it's just that I don't think Kenji will forgive me
you know he will now put a stick on your ass and stop being so stubborn
I really hate you
"Ukira-chan?"Kenji said breaking her out of her thoughts
"yes Kenji?"Ukira asked a little frightened not looking up
what is he going to say?is he going to break up with me?
he should
thanks that helps alot
it's true you're very mean and a liar
WHAT?
yeah do you remember yerterday?
shut up
"I'm sorry"Kenji said sitting beside her
"I'm sorry to Kenji"Ukira said but it was more like a whisper but Kenji heard it.
"it's ok mm..do you want to go to the hospital later?"Kenji said
"yeah I haven't been there"Ukira said very sad. It was really sad remembering about her father.
"look it's Ayumi she's coming this way"Kenji said trying to change the subject
"Ukira guess what?"Ayumi asked blushing. She doesn't know yet about Kenji and Ukira.
"what"Ukira asked not really caring .
"there's going to be a dance and my mom is going to buy me a dress she's taking me to a salon too can you believe it?"Ukira asked really excited
do I have to answer?
I think you do
"that's great"Ukira answered
"yeah can you believe it? my mother and I are having a better relationship"
can't she be more stupid?
Ukira stop spacing out or they're going to think you're a freak
"that's good"Ukira said hiding the blush.
"mmm Kenji do you...umm?"Ayumi was trying to asked.
OMG is she going to ask Kenji out?
nooooo
I get it there's no way I'm letting her asking him out
I'm with you in this one sister
that bitch but I know he's going to say no so I won't do anything
good thinking
"Ukira-chan do you wan to go to the dance with me?"Kenji asked turning around facing Ukira. He didn't quite understand what Ayumi said but he didn't care at all.
"I don't know I'm not good at picking dresses and all that stuff"Ukira answered her inner was laughing right now.
in your face bitch
you got it
"it's ok we can get Tsunade-san to help you"
"that'll be great"Ukira said for Ukira Tsunade was the best person. In her point of view she was strong, beautiful, persistent but she's sweer caring all at the same time and she was always willing to help you no matter what. For Ukira Tsunade was what she wanted to be.
"I'll be going"Ayumi said but there was a hint of anger.
she deserves it for trying to take Kenji away from us
yeah but we shouldn't laugh at her I mean it must be really bad to feel rejected
yeah but you'll never feel like that
how do you know?
cause you're beautiful strong you're everything a boy wants
yeah whatever
"Ukira-chan are you okay?"Kenji asked waving his hands infront f her face.
"of course"
"you have been spacing out alot lately"
"hehe it's ok just thinking about some stuffs"
freak
"shut up"Ukira muttered
"huh?"Kenji said
"haha nothing let's listen to what the teacher says"
hahahaha in your face
shut up I wish you could disappear
oh come on you know you like me after all now you have someone to talk to and I can guide you when you want answers
like if I need you
look at the bright side when you want to talk to someone but you don't know who I'll be here for you I'll be like a mother
I DON'T NEED A MOTHER
relax ok like a sister
fine
you know I know how you feel about your mother
you don't so shut up
of course I do you idiot I'm you
it doesn't matter
Ukira don't you think you should stop being like that?
like what?
everytime someone talks about your mother you starts yelling and cursing like if they said it to make you suffer you know talking about problems sometimes helps they just want to help you if you keep like that they might leave you one day
silence
and what about when they talk about your dad? you know they don't talk about him to hurt you they just talk about him to let you know that they care early that was really horrible Kenji just wanted Tsunade to know maybe cause he want her to cheer you up but you only left they're the ones that should be mad not you but they're not cause they love you Ukira can't you see? you think everything is againgst you when is not people love you not just your father and you don't have friends cause you don't let anyone near you
more silence
I think you respect Tsunade not because she's pretty and all that's stuff but because she's strong after what her father did, she doesn't yell at him like you do with your mother she doesn't curse him she's not depress when someone talks about him and you want to be like her you want to face your mother like is she was a stranger you want to be strong to keep going with your life like Tsunade has, Ukira if you want to be like her then you should try to accept your emotions let go of all that hate and anger, live happy life if what your mother did didn't exist like your mother is dead and the one you're living with is a stranger and you treat her like one
Ukira could feel tears running down her face but she didn't stop them cause that's what she wanted to do. She wanted to cry she wanted to let everything out all the tears and suffering she has been keeping. Her inner was right she has been doing everything wrong. She had thought that by keeping her emotions would make her strong but she was wrong it only made her unhuman. That's why she didn't have friends she never let her emotions out she always kept them to herself thinking that people will see her like a strong person and they would respect her but it wasn't like that they only saw her like someone who didn't have emotions. They thought thaat she wasn't really strong and she became cold because of what her mother did.She could feel more tears runnign down her face just thinking about this but she needed this.
Finally someone notice Ukira crying and it was Shikamaru.
"Uchiha Ukira is something wrong?"Shimaru asked looking curiously to Ukira. By now everyone was looking at her.
"Ukira-chan what's wrong?"Kenji asked concerned.
By now Ukira couldn't help it. She started crying loudly and more tears were coming out. She leaned on Kenji's chest and cried on him. Kenji didn't know what to do he has never seen Ukira like this. The only time he saw her cry she wasn't crying as bad as this.
"Uzumaki Kenji I think it'll be better if you take Ukira outside"Shimakaru suggested. Kenji nodded.
(outside)
Kenji was tired I mean having to carry Ukira wasn't so easy. She might be skinny but she's heavy.She would have punch him for saying that but right now his only concern was Ukira. He took her to the park that he first saw her.He put her under a cherry blossom tree. Ukira hasn't stop crying she didn't even talk. She stayed quiet but the tears never stop from coming.
look what you did now everyone must feel sorry for me
Ukira you know you needed this so stop whining and just shut up
fine
By now Ukira was only sobbing.
"Ukira-chan are you okay now?"Kenji asked a little hesitating of what Ukira might do.
"I'm-sob-fine"Ukira answered
I better shut up or Ukira will kill me Kenji thought but Ukira is not okay then it's decide it even if it means my death I'm going to make Ukira feel better
"Ukira-chan you can tell me anything"Kenji said
"it's okay Kenji I'm-sob-better now"Ukira said
are you sure?mabe you should talk to him he might help you clear things in your mind
naah it's okay maybe having you isn't so bad at all at least you won't tell anyone what I think
aww is the little Uchiha being sweet to me
shut up
Ukira smiled.That confused Kenji first she was fine being the same Ukira he knows then she started crying like if they had told her that her father died later she was smiling like if nothing happened.He'll never understand her.
"thank you Kenji"Ukira whispered loud enought for Kenji to hear
"you're welcome..umm..maybe we should go back to school"Kenji said
"no I want to stay here to think"Ukira said
"ok"Kenji said getting ready to leave, he thought that Ukira didn't want him.
"stay here for me Kenji please"Ukira said
Kenji didn't know what to say or do. He just sit where he was before and Ukira leaned on him. He was really confuse now.
"Ukira-chan would you tell me what is wr.."he saw that Ukira fell sleep on him.
(later)
"Kenji Kenji wake up"Ukira said shaking Kenji
"5 more minutes"Kenji said turning around. A vein popped on Ukira's forehead.
what is it with this idiot?
I have an idea
really tell me
whispering inside Ukira's head
I like it
"OMG you're such a cute boy better than KENJI"Ukira said
"WHAT? who?"Kenji asked wide awake
"hehehe finally you're awake"
"that's low Ukira"
"anyway let's go"
"where?"
"training grounds"
(traning grounds)
"Ukira you're late"Tsunade said
"I'm sorry Tsunade-san but something happened"Ukira said
"it's okay now let's train"
"about that?"
"yeah?"
"I have to go to my house maybe we'll train another day Sakura must be worry sick now"Ukira said
"oh ok see ya later"Tsunade said
she finally learned Tsunade thought
"I'll see you later Kenji oh and Tsunade-san can you go to the mall tomorrow to help me pick up my dress?"Ukira asked
"of course"
"arigatou Jane"
I hope you like it please review
