A/N: I never notice that was the longest chapter I typed, think of that as my sorry and I know Konan may not be that soft but I am showing how these kids can change the Akatsuki, also in chapter one Dei had a ninja tool that was my idea because I used to play fight with my friend a lot and that was how I pictured that fight scene because I'm not good at writing fighting scenes. I may not able to post two fanfiction especially with school coming soon but I will give it a shot but for now here's the story that you are waiting for ;) enjoy. Oh yeah Murasaki is the same age as Sasuke and Naruto and placed in the genin team because she was very talented and in the last sentence Alex called Konan Hahaoya like he said (I made a mistake with it).
Chapter 9:Deadly Attacks, Akatsuki Members
Or Not
Pain's P.O.V
"...he may come off as heartless and some of the Akatsuki as well but they are only like that is because they have had their share of pain in their life, that is why he goes as Pain," I heard Konan explaining something, "I think that you kids can be the ones to soft these hearts, it's already working on mine, Itachi and Sasori's, though Dei also played a part in that. It is the reason that I wanted you kids to be a part of this organisation, I hope that you believe me Alex-Kun," she added, 'Oh him,' I thought. "I think that I do Konan-Sama, uh do you think I could call you Hahaoya?" he asked nervously, 'I'm sure she smiled, she has always been kind and she would appreciate feeling like a mother,' I thought."Yes you may now let us all get some rest Alex-kun, you and the kids have a big day tomorrow," she said as they entered to the room, "You know Hahaoya, I think you are right about us changing the Akatsuki," he stated, 'We shall see Alex,' I thought and drifted off to sleep. The next morning after we ate breakfast we gathered in our training grounds, "Right, each of you will battle Hidan, use your deadliest attacks since he is immortal. Be careful we told him no cursing you but that does not mean he will go easy on you," I said gesturing to Hidan, who's mouth was stitched shut. 'That's a relief,' I thought, "Now who will be first?" I asked as Alex stepped forward, 'Let us see if you are S-ranked level,' I thought watching him intently.
Jiraya's P.O.V
'These kids are really trying their best it's okay to watch, but I could think of other things I could be watching and I would have if Hiruzen-Sensei catch me but it cannot be helped,' "Let's check where she is now, in case she moved. Can you do it Mura-Chan?" Kiba said as the kids were resting, "Yes," Mura said and began to concentrate, "Ning-Chan," he said as she placed the map with chakra strings. "Just as I thought she moved, but it seems we're much closer it's just here, she is in Amegakure," he stated as they woke up and headed out, 'These kids sure are determined, but you cannot just walk in and out of that village as you please, I'll just keep a close watch on them,' I thought and continued to follow them, not easy when you're tailing a sensory unit. "Who are you?" Kiba who was now behind me with a kunai, "I am many things but I am known to all as the great Toad sage Jiraya of mount Myoboku," I said as Kiba lowered his Kunai, "Oh Jiraya-Sama I heard of you, you were lord 3rd's student," he said, "Why are you here?" Ningyō asked, "The third sent you two to bring us back, didn't he?" Murasaki asked. "Well, yes Hiruzen-sensei sent me to keep an eye on you six and it's just me here," I said, 'She could not have seen or heard Kakashi, he's one of the best ANBU,' I thought looking at Murasaki, "Kakashi-San is behind the tree," Murasaki said pointing to where Kakashi was hiding. "How did you know?" he asked coming out of his hiding place, "It's Mura's Kekkei Genkai," Kiba said as they continued moving, "But what if they knock us out and take us home Kiba?" Naruto asked, "They won't Naru, they know we would just leave again so that's why they are following us, to keep an eye on us," Mura explained as we all soon arrived at Amegakure. "Come on," Kiba said and ran into the rainy village with his friends close behind, "Well we have to follow them Kakashi, maybe I can do some research here, while you tail them," I said to him, "I'll send Pakkun if I need your help," he said and took off after them, "Now to do some research," I said and headed out.
Pain's P.O.V
'Hmmm, seven people and a ninja hound came through the barrier and six of them seem to be coming here with the dog,' I thought as Alex punched Hidan, 'Let them come we'll deal with them when the time comes, right now I want to watch this,' I finished as Alex defended against Hidan's scythe and then jumped up, he performed some hand signs mid air and then kicked off Hidan's arm with the scythe. "You're finished," he said as he appeared behind him and stabbed him with a kunai. 'This boy is good,' I thought, "Well done Alex, who's going next?" I asked as Shujin stepped forward he blocked the scythe with his sword and used water jutsu to get him off balance. While Hidan concentrated on the water jutsu he attacked him with his sword, slicing him, "Excellent water jutsu but it can be improved," Kisame said while Kakuzu put Hidan back together, the boy gave a toothy grin, "Next?" I asked as Mizushi-jin stepped forward after Hidan was put back together. She gathered her chakra and then performed hand signs, "Ice Style: Shard Storm," she said as sharp ice shards fell on Hidan, "Great job, you are very talented," Kakuzu said, "Next," I said as Neko stepped forward with Aoi Runa just behind her. "Neko no me," she said activating her Kekkei Genkai, she then charged her chakra and waited for him to make the first move which he did throwing his scythe at her. Aoi Runa meowed at Neko, who simply jumped up as the scythe hit the ground and landed on it with perfect balance, she ran straight to him with chakra that she charged and shaped at her fingertips making it look like she had claws, she stabbed him with her chakra claws and jumped back landing on her feet. "That was amazing Neko, you too Aoi Runa," Konan smiled, "Next?" I asked as Neko's twin, Hyō, walked up with Raion by her side, "Byakugan," she said, activating her visual Kekkei Genkai and getting into the Hyūga style stance.
Kiba's P.O.V
"Akamaru and I have their scents," I said with a small bark from Akamaru and ran ahead with the others close behind, 'So many different scents,' I thought as Akamaru and I got closer, "Just around this corner, wait here let me and Akamaru check it out," I said as we turned the corner the first thing that caught my eye were black coats with red clouds. We were in a training ground and in the centre a girl who had a small lion on her shoulder and looked like Neko but possessed Byakugan was about to start fighting with this white haired guy wearing that coat, Akamaru and I sniffed the air, Tora was there, standing very close to one of those guys, she intertwined her hand with his. 'What? Isn't he supposed to be the enemy?' I thought as the fight started the girl gracefully dodged each hit the guy threw and hit him at his vital points, she then kicked him and he fell backwards, 'She's good,' I thought as she looked in my direction I tried to hide but decided not to since she is a Byakugan user. "Who are you?" she asked making everyone look in my direction as my friends came next to me, "What are you all doing here?" Neko, Hinata and Tora asked as they ran to us, "Well we were supposed to come and rescue you because the Third gave up the search," I explained, "Guess it never work out though," I stated rubbing the back of my head with a grin.
A/N:
Me: Pain you understand technical problems right? I really tried my best and this is the fastest I could post with all the technical difficulties.
Pain: It is okay, just get your laptop fixed.
Me: That's the problem, dad said we can't.
Pain: Okay, try your best maybe it will work out.
Hidan: YOU STICHED MY MOUTH TOGETHER!
Me: Well you'd only be screaming Kakuzu so I allowed him to stitch your mouth, which he can do now as well.
Hidan: *Sees Kakuzu coming* Damn you Ty! *Runs*
Pain: I order you to Review and comment!
Me: No Pain, you must be nicer when saying it, like this: Please review and Comment thank you. *Hidan screaming for help* Did you hear something?
Pain: Nope.
Me: Well TTFN, Ta Ta For Now.
