ok its like 3 am i just have to write this!!
and posted at 5 am!!
Chapter 9!!
w00t
replay
(dead silence)
"..."
(w/n: Kiba left cause Hana called and said he had to do something O.O)
ding dong
"wonder whos that?" Hinata said
Hinata ran to the door but who could be stnding there??
"Naruto?"
end of replay...:(
this chapter is rated M for the bad words!!
"Naruto??" Hinata said surprised
"hi Hinata" Naruto Said
"ww--what are you doing here Naruto-kun??" Hinata wonder
"i was just passing through and i wanted to give you this pulls a box out...here its an birthday gift" Naruto handed the box to Hinata
"th--thanks" Hinata said and bowed
"look inside it" Naruto said
"oo--okay" Hinata said
hinata opened the box and found a necklace
"wow...um...thanks Naruto-kun" Hinata said
"no problem!" Naruto said
"it really pretty almost like the one kiba gave me" Hinata said
"HUH?!" Naruto thought
"wh--what do you--uu mean almost like the one kiba gave me?" Naruto said
"ooh well kiba gave me kinda like this...but it was gold and it said i love you on the back of it" Hinata said
"oooh" Naruto said
"its okay...ill guess i will have two of them...i hope its okay? :)" Hinata said with a smile
"yea its fine" Naruto said
"you know Hinata i really lov--" Naruto said but was interrupted by the door bell
"ooh that must be Kiba-kun" Hinata ran to the door
"Naruto you idiot!! she could have found out that you love her!!" Naruto yelled at him self queitly
"eeeh?...why are you here Naruto?" Kiba wonder
"Notting just came to drop off Hinata's gift!" Naruto explained(very scared of Kiba glace at him)
"okay -.-" Kiba said
"thanks again Naruto-kun" Hinata said and bowededededeedededded
"bye" Naruto walked out the door
Ramen shpoop
"aaaaaaaagggghhhhhhhh you idiot!!" Naruto munble to himself
damn it what if Kiba didn't ring the door bell right then??...what if she heard me?...what will Kiba do...to ME!...and Sakura?...why...why...why her!!...know she liked me for a long time...before she that kiba loved her...god...i am such a fuckin jerk (hahaha XD jerky...not the time to be laughing!! ;slaps self;) i didn't even know that she felt that way...about me...fuck i am such a asshole...but that day when everything turned around...everyone knew thats she was never going to be the same...ever again...
(flashie backie)
"Naruto? can i talk to you for a sec?" Sakura said
"sure!" i said with a big dumb smile
"i--i really like you Naruto!" Sakura said blushing (i couldn't really understand her)
"huh?" I wonder
"i--i sa--said i--i re--real--ly l--like y--ou Na--Na--Naru--to" Sakura's face turn red
i started to blush too
i--i like you too Sakura...(w/n; oooh god overdose!! drools)
me and sakura hugged for a long time but then i heard a queit sobbing behide me
i turn i saw Hinata there crying
i asked her whats wrong..but she just ran away...i told Sakura to wait here so i can see whats wrong with hinata
i ran...and...ran...and found her slumped over a log sobbing
it started to get cloudy and thundery (i don't think thats a word but...okay)
i asked again whats wrong?...but still no answer just more sobbing
but then i heard Kiba voice yelling for Hinata
i yelled that she was over here...5 sec later i saw him glaring at me
i was clueless to was going on
but then...Kiba ran towards me
i tried to douge but he punched me right in the face
i went flying(no joke)
YOU FUCKIN ASSHOLE DO YOU KNOW WHAT THE FUCK YOU DID??
HELL NO WHY THE FUCK DID YOU PUNCH ME??
CAUSE YOU MADE HINATA-CHAN FUCK CRY WHAT ESLE??
I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT I DID TO MAKE HER CRY!!
HINATA LIKES YOU CAN'T YOU SEE THAT??...OF CORSE YOU CAN'T CAUSE YOUR AN FUCKIN RETARD...SHE LIKES YOU...BUT YOU NEVER FUCKIN NOTICE HER BECAUSE ALL YOU NOTICE IS SAKURA THAT BIGFOURHEAD BITCH!! SHE JUST ASKED YOU OUT BEACUSE SHE KNEW THAT HINATA LIKED YOU!!I TRIED TO MADE HINATA BE HAPPY BUT SHE DOESN'T LOOK HAPPY AT ALL!!
I DON'T GIVE A FUCK ABOUT HINATA!!
YOU ASSHOLE
me and Kiba fought...i collapedmy head was bleeding i don't know how (gawd violence there O.O)
he notice that hinata ran way when i said i don't give a fuck about her
he ran after her
i felt dizzy
(end of flashie backie)
oh my violence this time!!
lolz...lot of darma yesh i know its a story with the beginng in the middle
next chapter is going to be Kiba's POV
--xMochi Inuzukax
