Hello readers of FanFiction or something. I am making a comic on DeviantART soon, in the beginning of June. So go check-out the comic if you are reading this in 2015 or something. Maybe I gave up or I am still doing it. I hope I am doing it. But thank you for your view. I wish to get more reviews. MOAR REVIEWS!


Daxter tapped his foot, waiting for Maxseen to start the training. Daxter growled to himself and looked at Jak. "Let's just leave, this girl is killing me! We've been here for almost half an hour, come on Jak." Daxter was about to leave until Maxseen stopped him in his tracks. Daxter backed up because she was too close. She looked stunning. Beside the point they were supposed to go hurting.

Daxter set his hands on her shoulders, she looked back with big eyes and a smile. Daxter shoved her in the water. Jak's eyes widen up as Maxseen hit the water. Daxter peered over the edge. "Next time don't dress up, just get clothe for running for your own life."

Maxseen looked up. "Next time?" She smiled.

Daxter rolled his eyes and continued towards the door. At least they could hunt for some metal heads for trying to fingure out the Dark eco monster inside of him. Jak ran up with him, along with Maxseen wet head to toe.


Daxter dumped the dead body of the metal head in the sea. Of course he took out the gem before he did. Max was more scared than brave. But she was just pretending so Daxter could save her. Whenever she did this he just pretended to be busy with a metal head.

Jak seemed to be annoyed as much as Daxter was. She was a huge chatterbox, and she was still talking.

"Oh my Precursors, that was fun was it not? We have to do this again. But we have to be totally alone because your friend Jak isn't helping me, she kinda annoying. Always talking like she's royal, blah blah blah. Unlike you Daxter, your my hero. I really-"

"HOLLY CRAP SHUT THE FUCK UP." Daxter yelled at her, sparks bursting around the air. "Jak can barely talk, because she was a mute. So stop lying." Daxter turned around and growled, growing his fangs out. "PLUS, I DON'T LIKE YOU. SO STOP IT."

Maxseen looked blank as a board. Than she blinked a couple times. "As I was saying." Daxter groaned as she went on. "We should go on a date."

Daxter looked at her. "NO."

Jak began awkwardly walking away slowly. "Uhhh... B-i." Jak studdered, than ran off.

Daxter looked back, she was fast. Than he looked back at Maxseen, a dark figured poured down over her. A shadow of a huge metal head. Daxter jumped over her and punched it. He got on top and hit it with his knuckles. He took the metal head's gem and stood up.

"Daxter?" Maxseen called.

"WHAT?!" Daxter elled annoyed more than ever now.

"There are some more..."

Daxter turned around to see at least a dozen. "Yea, let's run." Daxter looked at Maxseen.

Daxter ran with Max tripping a little behind.


Running from the metal heads took a gokd thirty minutes, and killing them took ten minutes. So it wa getting darker by the minute. Daxter finally got Maxseen to go home, so now it was just Jak and himself. It was time to try to get a room instead of sleeping on a roof.

They would do it do it again, but it was starting to rain.

Daxter was looking at the houses. It was kinda pointless, since every single room was taken. Jak walked around pointless now. Everything was taken, even a cardboard box had a person living it in. It has a bunch of kanga-rats running around it too.

Daxter stopped looking and walked in to an alleyway. "This is pointless Jak, all the rooms in the slums are either taken or filled by bugs. We should just go back to the roof." Daxter leaned against the wall. One of the bricks caved in. He jumped back.

"What the?" Daxter questioned.

A square lifted up off the ground with stairs under it. Daxter looked at Jak. Then went down, the hatch shut behind them. It was dark. "Jak, look for a light switch." Their hands brushed against the wall, Daxter felt paper and picture frames. He finally found one and flicked it on. "Woah..." Daxter awed.

Papers across the room talking about the baron and his plans. Markings everywhere with red ink. It usd strings and pins. It was everywhere, and it was huge. Taken photos of Erol and Baron Praxis, and Daxter. Arrows pointed to him with the words 'Dark eco' by it in the precursor language.

Jak walked to the pictures of Daxter, he was beaten and tortured in most of them. Jak turned to him. ""Dax-x..."

"Don't look at her like that." Daxter growled.

Daxter looked around, everything had dust on it. Nothing has been touched, the person only added the pictures, but they stopped. No one has been here in three monthes about it.

Daxter took down the pictures of him and put them on a shelf. He turned to Jak. "We've got a place to stay, now go to sleep." Daxter flicked off the light and layed on the floor. Jak did too, but wondered who would take so many pictures? Why woud they?

It was odd enough that they didn't know, maybe Daxter did?

She heard light snoring from Daxter. She got up and picked up the pictures. She turned on the light and looked at the pictures, studied them.