well here a chapter it a bit short but the real chapter sort of move the story on quite far and i would have miss the chance to put some stuff the what was going to be chapter 9 will now be chapter 11 or 12 it a good chapter too.
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Ch 9
Naruto had managed to sneak off, though he wasn't unnoticed by the group. That's why we find Kiba, Shino, Sakura, Ino, Hinata and Choji sitting in a classroom and the golden trio quickly setting up an extendible ear into the infirmary.
The first word drifted through. "... You put me in hospital for over a week, now you flipping slit my stomach open for god sake!" snapped Draco.
"Can't believe you're still mad. You put me in bed many a time," said Naruto.
"That's hardly my fault. You were the one you bought the whip in the first place." replied Draco.
"Well you should learn to shut your mouth then, not like that's why I'm here," said Naruto. "Look Dracey you need to think of you future. Which side is best for you, which one do you really believe more?"
"You want me to become a goody little two shoe and become bum buddy with Harry and Dumbledore." snarled Draco. "I think not."
"You don't have to be friends with anyone Drac, just be on the right side. Do you real think the Dark Lord has much of a chance against the Leaf?"
"Oh no, otherwise they will send some more children. Really, why should I fear someone like that?"
"The very fact that we don't see the Dark Lord as a big enough threat to send anyone over 20 should tell you all you need to know Draco,"
"The Dark Lord is the single most powerful wizard, now that Dumbledore is passed it. Do you really think you can defeat him, Naruto?"
"With ease. He is nothing. He is slow and weak, even with my body falling apart as it is. Even on my death bed itself, I wouldn't even break a sweat against the so called 'all powerful tom riddle'." said Naruto charmingly. "I have four 6 year old academy students which would prove more of a challenge."
"Are you really being serious?"
"We are a war-like people. Do you really think anyone from a peaceful place like England could beat one of us without help from lady luck?" asked Naruto. "Think about it, Draco. Your opinion does not really sit with the Dark Lord. You're not a death-eater and you don't really have anything against mud-bloods. It would suit you better being on the good side, just think about it, OK?" the sound of footsteps signalled the end to the conversion.
"Well, he's being free with the misinformation I see," said Ino.
"I'd say it's nothing new to Draco anyway. I think he would already know from spending time with Naruto from before," replied Kiba.
"And trying to bring Draco to our side isn't a bad thing," said Choji.
"Malfoy is scum. He's hardly going to join us and, if he does, it will be only for himself anyway," said Ron
"No you didn't listen, did you," said Hermione, "I think there's a good chance that he may join us not necessarily be friendly, but join us because it what he wants to do."
Naruto took the breath from most of the hall as he walked in the next morning. He had chosen a very unusual school uniform, at least for a boy. His jumper v neck was low, his skirt was short, his socks long, and had wrapped his arms around one of Shika, while playfully kicking one foot up, making his pigtails flow out behind him like gold streams. He made a bee line for Hinata and so did most of the other female shinobi, who all huddled around him, talking loudly and laughing about thing the rest of the male students could only guess.
"Watch him," were the words which spooked Kiba out of his musings. He was wondering where Naruto got his energy from, he had been looking half dead for weeks but today he was overlyjoyfulyexsighable, a word which Kiba had long ago made up to describe Naruto. The voice was Shika's, who had sat down to his left.
"He looks happy," said Kiba.
"His emotions are not that stable. What goes up must come down and the higher it goes, the harder it'll fall," said Shika.
"What do you mean? I don't think I have ever seen him down, so to speak. Angry, tired, hell even quite, but sad?" replied Kiba. He knew enough about Shika to know that he didn't say things without meaning, however finding the meaning may take some time.
"Naruto is good at hiding. Well, he was, but he's falling apart. Watch, we will soon have one of Naruto's little accidents. You will find out what going on and I won't be able to stop him. I have failed every time so far and in the state he will be in he will tell you everything and anything,"
No one really seemed to question the fact that Naruto wore the girl uniform. The day when on and the emotion change came quick, at about 6:30, and it was hidden well. In fact, if Kiba was not doing as he was told to, he felt he wouldn't have noted the different between the real and the fake smile on Naruto. And then, at 8, Naruto slipped out quietly. Kiba let him go, sending out a quiet message for the other shinobi to gather. Maybe they could find out was what going on now.
"Harry, get the map and tell me where Naruto is going," he said, standing and looking at Shika, who was sitting on the window seat while looking out at the sky.
"He's already in a tower on the other side of the castle. I don't know how he got there so fast though," replied Harry bent over the map. And so Kiba send out the message to meet them at the tower on the correct floor and set off with the other Gryffindor shinobi and the golden trio.
Kiba pushed the door open to see an almost completely black room, broken only by two blue dots, which were Naruto eyes and were down low on the opposite wall.
"I didn't think it would be you to be honest," said a harsh voice.
"Light if you would someone," said Kiba stepping forward and feeling the slick liquid under his feet.
The light came on as the knife dropped from Naruto's hand on to the bloody, red flood.
and there you go once again i'm looking for long lasting beta readers so if you feel luky and very undieing... please.
