Explaining!

I edited all of Paroxysm, rewrote a bunch of parts, added some scenes, merged some chapters. Which means, that the chapter count may be odd, and some things may not be where they were before. Sorry for the confusion! But Paroxysm was seriously in need of some TLC. xD

Things I changed:

Shuujarou's age. Originally, Shuujarou was seventeen years old. In the newer version, he is twenty-three, and his military rank is more realistic.

Setting. The original storyline took place somewhere in Kyoto (I never specified, really), but this version mainly takes place in Kumamoto City, Kumamoto Prefecture, Japan.

Kyuui. Kyuui, sure, she's a bit annoying, but I toned her down. A LOT. xD I really couldn't stand how very Mary-Sue like she was.

Naraki. Shuujarou's father died in the original version. In this version, he is alive and continues to command the military.

Mortality. In the original, Shuujarou died, and Akane discovered him randomly in the Soul Society (which made no sense), but in this version, he was the only soldier who had a trace of life left, and being the good Samaritan that Akane is, she decided to save him, and he was never, in fact, dead. So he is completely visible to Kyuui and all other humans.

Pairings and shit. I had some original pairings in mind, but a few have been reworked/switched around. Main pairings you ask? Well, there's the Shuujarou/Akane/Kyuui love triangle thing, and then there's Noboru and Haiso, obviously. Haseo? I haven't figured that out yet. And hell, Airika just loves her own face ;D

Overall quality. Before it was iffy, and kind of cliché at points. I reworked a lot of the things I didn't like or just downright hated, (like Kyuui's psychoness, it NEEDED a limit), and a lot of the spelling/grammar errors have been fixed. Hopefully, now, I'll be much happier with the way it is.

Anyways, while I've got your attention, I~

Love all of you, who read and review Paroxysm, or favorite me as an author, or anything =D much love!!

And don't miss the next chapter.

(Whenever I actually get around to writing it)

~Sil