Sorry I wasn't able to update sooner, but the way I upload my things couldn't happen over the weekend because I was somewhere where I couldn't do it. Sorry! Anyway, here is the REVIEW (note the singular) reply:

Vamps-with-Wings: As far as I know, that's how bullets behave underwater. And yes, she should.

Okay, now on with my second shortest chapter!

9

Angel had been tied up, beaten with various objects and had even experienced some of her primary feathers removed (extremely painful by the way, so be glad you don't have any). She was wreathing in pain from all of the torture, and didn't even know who it was that captured her, or why? But she still had hope. Hope that Max would come and kick this evil person's butt. But hope was all she had.

An evil looking man walked into the room. Angel knew that it was the master of the plot.

Angel put a sneer on her face as he walked by. When he stopped by her, she already knew who it was, and not by reading his mind. She put on a face full of hatred as she jeered, "Well, if it isn't Ter Borcht in the flesh. What have you in store today?"

"Hello, Subject 11," he replied with an evil grin on his face, not fazed by the angry Angel. "If vou are vondering vhy vou are here, vou vill be very amazed by vhat I've done."

"Great!" Angel retorted sarcastically. "Another long story to keep me company!"

"I vill ignore vat comment and vet vou live. Anyvay, vhen vou menacing vinged bird-kids destroyed Itex, I vas very appalled by vhat vou did. I svore revenge von vou menacing bird-kids, and vhat's vhen I scheme and come up vith vhis idea.

"Virst, I had to find vou menacing bird-kids. Vhen, I had to kidnap von of vou to get your leader. Vhen, I had to split vou up, vich the Voice did very nicely."

Angel gasped at this, shocked at his last remark. Angel though, Does this mean…

Ter Borcht, reading the look of Angel's face and mind, said, "Ves! I control de Voice! And vour little friend shall vall upon de top of my accomplishment! I even separated her vrom her vast protection!"

"You never get away with it!" Angel exclaimed. In hindsight, she saw how much of a cliché those words were and slapped herself in the head.

Apparently, Ter Borcht didn't notice that, or wanted to show his latest creation, because he said afterwards, "Ves I vill, and my new army vill make sure!"

Angel let lose after that. "What's it made of? Flyboys and M-Geeks and Erasers, oh my! Max has already defeated them in the past and will defeat them again if it means saving the Flock. She can even do it by herself, so take that!" Angel held a victorious smile after that, but Ter Borcht's smile was unwavering, and Angel knew that wasn't what he was talking about. Her depression level skyrocketed when he spoke again.

"Oh, vho cares avout vose pathetic wastes of time van money. I am talking avout the new generation! Let's see vour vittle Max takes vhese on…"

The new army walked in and, after on glance at the evil army, Angel knew that even Max couldn't take them on alone. Please don't come Max! It's not worth it!

I didn't get any evil masterminds (or reviews for that matter), so I used Ter Borcht from MR3.

Before anyone flames, Angel is not going to die! Just to make that clear. Sorry, but I can't update again without a evil army idea, because that is what stars next chapter. I can almost guarrenty that this will be the only time I demand reviews before I do a chapter, even though I want them. So I'll try to update soon, but how soon solely depends on Y-O-U!

Polodo