Pinefur of DragonClan- you are so kind!
SilverTailedWarrior- thank you, I'll try to.
SnaketailTheFirst- I'm not exactly sure about the mates anymore, but Brightpaw will be explained after you read this chapter.
Redstar-leader-of-thunderclan – Thx, keep on reading!
Author's note: I think I got some of the ages wrong
Chapter 10: Un-named (I couldn't think of a name)
My pelt ruffled into the winds as if they were about to rip off completely. I was so excited; it was the day of my first apprenticeship!
I was looking at Graypaw and Ravenpaw, who were SO eyeing me with jealousy. I decided to be smug; I mean a cat can only live once, right? ((Unless you're a leader, but that doesn't count)
"Wow, Sandpool, I mean our wonderful friends over here, aren't even warriors, and we have our fist apprentices?"
She smirked and nodded, "I remember that days when we were apprentices, don't you, Dustheart. Such a long, long, long time ago."
"Oh go jump off a cliff or eat some Crow-food." Graypaw retorted. He. It'd fun.
Graypaw. Graypaw. Graypaw. Graypaw. Graypaw.
"They can eat each other!" Ravenpaw added.
"Ravenpaw" Sandpool commented "don't try to be funny, 'cause you're not."
I laughed.
"Just ignore them" Graypaw breathed under breath, but he is much too loud, which I'm sure everyone figured.
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The dim sky was setting faster than Sandpool sinking her claws into the first catch of early New Leaf.
Note: I'm sorry for skipping Firekit's ceremony, but I forgot the words :(
"Graypaw, Ravenpaw, please come forward."
The two excitedly scurried to the High Rock. I found my self suppressing a yawn.
"Do you two promise to uphold the warrior code, even at the cost of your life?"
"I do" Graypaw squeaked
"I do" Ravenpaw said, with shivers in his voice.
"Then from this day on, Graypaw, you will be known as Graystripe. StarClan honors you for your bravery."
He licked her shoulder, his tail twitching. I'm pretty sure I wasn't so cowardly to do that.
"Ravenpaw, from this day on, you will be known as Ravenlight. StarClan honors your honesty."
"Ravenlight, Graystripe!"
I found my self chanting along. Must be the really-responsible-grown-up-warrior-in-place-of-Firestar-thing.
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"Dustheart! Dustheeeeeeart!!
"Whermmphh?" I mumbled. To my surprise, it wasn't the usual Sandstorm at my waking.
"Holy StarClan, Firepaw, what are you doing here?"
I saw the little orange kit pawing at my face. The nerve of the non-perfect Firepaw! To come into the warriors den, and ACTUALLY start scratching at his mentor.
"I wanted to see the kits!"
"And you woke me up because…?"
He mumbled something along the lines
I-dunno-I-kinda-wanna-to-and-didn't-wanna-go-alone-and-you-were-here-anyways-so-yeah
"Well, you're up anyways, so you might as well come with me!"
"Heh…"
"Please, Dustheart??"
"Oh, alright!"
I got up to walk, feeling half-awake. I bet Sunkit, who acts waaaay older than her age is a much easier apprentice. Sandpool is just plain lucky.
We sat down at the nursery, when Brindleface scooted over.
A young version of Thornclaw and Brightheart came to join us, their eyes opening, and letting out muffled squeaks of joy.
And I looked at the four adorable kits.
There was Ashkit
And then beautiful Fernkit. Seeing her there made my heart melt. I miss her unbelievably, but getting to know Sandstorm, well, I would be able to live without her anymore.
Anyways…
There was the dead kit, he looks healthy now, Mosskit; I think that was his name.
And oh.
There was a Cloudkit.
Brightkit peered closer.
And again, the world was in perfect unison.
Well, at least for now.
Author's note:
I apologize again for skipping numerous parts. I'm sorry for not updating; I have serious writer's block.
And if you didn't know Brindleface had another kit, you should reread the first series. I was said before Cloudkit was adopted.
Tada! Now that Cloudkit and Brightkit can be happy, it is well taken care of.
And by the way, Cinderz won!
I have special plans for young Fernkit!
