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Chapter Eight -And the darkness starts to rise

Dr Mar Londo slammed an angry fist down on the computer's keyboard and almost ripped it away from the wall as the screen told him he had no way of getting off the planet.

After he had managed to get away from the Legion he had immediately went to his hidden base and started a mad search for all hidden ships. Only to discover that all of them had been destroyed or had simply vanished, he was stuck on a hostile planet that no doubt wanted to kill him, it was either face the legion or the pathetic creatures he had ruled, and neither was appealing.

"Seems Brin was more cunning than I thought. Fancy doing that to the man who created him." Dr Londo scoffed and started to check his inventory in his laboratory. Over the years all his inventions that were the up most important had been stashed away in this hidden base, a precaution just in case any of his creations had gone…..haywire. His hope of finding something useful was quickly diminishing as all the items would stand no chance against the Legion or his son. That was until his eyes caught one particular item that he had already out into use.

The jungle was in fear as a loud dark laugh echoed through the land, and the creatures moaned out in warning to their protector that something was coming.


Tinya was sitting on the ledge of the waterfall looking up at the stars and moons of Rawl and she sighed in joy at the feeling of peace and serenity that washed over her as she sat. She had never felt so calm before in her life and she was soon forgetting everything that had been going on in her life. Her mother's insistence on leaving the Legion, the pressure from Cosmic Boy about being the political representative, the harshness from other Legionnaires about her family's influence, Ultra Boy. Her only reminder was Brin as he sat down and checked all the maps he had of the area.

Her calmness was quickly squashed as the forest started to moan and screech and she felt her skin prickle. As if there was danger coming their way. Brin immediately appeared behind her and was on full alert as he searched the area. He let out a low howl and soon received a reply. Tinya could only watch in amazement as he communicated with the forest.

"Damn" Brin muttered turning back to the cave and slamming a fist down on the wall, Tinya jumped in shock as the wall created a neat little craves where his fist had been. "DAMN!"

"What?" Tinya said standing up, "What's wrong?"

"DAMN IT!" Brin snarled and he stormed back into the cave, Tinya could only follow as Brin started to curse and punch holes in the wall in pure fury. Tinya watched and stood near the opening of the cave, waiting for him to cool down, if he didn't she knew she had to intervene before the cave collapsed from his onslaught.

"DAMN IT TO HELL!" Brin snarled out picking up the maps and slamming them back down on the floor close to the fire.

"Are you going to tell me what's wrong?" Tinya asked still near the opening. Brin's head snapped up and his angry gaze fixed on hers, Tinya refused to be intimidated and squared him up.

"Nothing that concerns you." Brin snarled out and his face was suddenly thrown to the side. He held his cheek and looked back at the very angry girl.

"Listen here puppy." Tinya spat out, "I am here to help and I am not going to be treated like I'm the bad guy here alright? Learn to control that temper of yours or I'm leaving to find my friends and I will tell them everything." Tinya emphasized on the will.

"You wouldn't dare." Brin spat back out.

"Try me." Tinya said and he glared at her.

The room crackled with anger and chemistry as their eyes met both refusing to give up and neither prepared to back down and loose. Brin needed to win this and he stalked towards her, she backed away, knowing that it was dangerous but refused to leave his gaze.

It wasn't until she was backed up against the wall that she figured she should relent, the last time he had up against a wall he had punched her in the stomach. She couldn't help but place a hand over her stomach; Brin caught this movement and winced inwardly at what she was doing.

"Listen princess, you have no idea what my father is like, he's cold, unfeeling and cruel all rolled into one evil package. And right now he's planning something big, big enough for the whole entire jungle to react like that." Brin said trying to cool down his temper.

"It's Tinya not princess, Puppy." Brin growled at that, "And you listen to me, I will not take you getting angry at me other something that isn't my fault nor do I like being treated like an invalid. I am in the legion of superheroes I deal with your father's types everyday."

"You know for a princess you're not very delicate."

"And for a puppy you're not very obedient."

Both glared at each other while trying to control their breathing and keep their anger in check. Their eyes never left each others and Brin started to feel uncomfortable with her eyes meeting his squarely, he felt like he was getting pulled in to those dark depths of hers. He felt his head get closer to hers and glanced at her soft pink lips, she bit her bottom lip and he suddenly wanted to taste that lip, taste both of them. With that sudden thought he suddenly pulled away and jumped to the other end of the cave trying to make sure there was enough distance between them as possible.

Tinya felt her legs go as soon as he had pulled away and she sunk to the floor, not even noticing the painful stabs from her damaged shoulder as she slid down the very unforgiving wall. What was that just now? What the hell was that? Her face felt….flushed, she raised a hand and placed it against her cheeks, and she could feel the heat burning through her gloves. Her breathing was unsteady and she wanted….no she needed to know what his lips felt like. At that thought her eyes went wide and she looked over to see Brin gripping the wall with his back to her. Dear god was she attracted to that….to that…..angry puppy? She didn't know all she knew was that she had wanted to kiss him right then and there.

Brin dug his claws into the wall to try and keep himself from going back over to her and kissing her. This was wrong. This was very wrong. He didn't have time to focus on someone else, much less a girl and much less the stubborn, yet gentle and kind and very appealing girl that was currently within his reach. His grip on the wall increased as those thoughts went through his head; she was in his reach, in his grasp. No. He needed to stop he was sounding just like the man that had done this to him. He took a slow breathe in and released his claws from the wall. He could do this, he had control and dear god he was going to use it.

Brin turned round to see her on the floor, hand covering her mouth. He smelt the air, she wasn't scared. Confused, angry and….something else he couldn't quite put his fingers on but she wasn't terrified of him. He was strangely happy about that. He moved away from the wall and slowly walked to her. It was only when he stopped almost directly in front of him did she look at him.

"You alright?" Brin asked, his tone gruff

"Yeah. I'm fine." Tinya said, "That was….interesting."

"You can say that again." Brin muttered, "We better go to sleep soon, we need to leave this place at sunrise tomorrow. My father is probably looking for me now."

"Fine." Was all Tinya could say. Brin looked at her before turning round and settling at the other end of the cave he turned so that his back was to hers and closed his eyes.

Tinya watched as he walked away and settle on the floor. She felt….oh heck she didn't know what she felt, all she knew was that she was confused with this….person being so close to her. One minute their fine, next their arguing and then the next….the next minute they were on fire. She lowered herself to the floor wincing as her right shoulder scraped itself along the wall. She was going to have to change her bandages by the feel of it tomorrow. Maybe Brin's eswell. She closed her eyes and soon fell asleep.


Prism looked at the screen and almost punched it with all her might, it was only the 'don't' from Brainy that stopped her from doing it. She had hated Dr Londo earlier now she despised him. He had made sure all the information on his experiments were hard to get into and hard to read and understand. All she knew was that man was a monster.

She pushed herself away from the computer and stood up, she'd leave brainy and Vi to deal with this they knew what they were doing and no amount of help from them was going to get her to understand half the crap she was reading. She walked out and told the two left that she was going to join superman and Cam in the brig and help them there. It was the only use that she was going to be.

She arrived on the brig and noticed that Cam had fallen asleep she sighed softly and smiled, bless Cam. She grabbed a blanket from one of the many stash holes Brainy had made and threw it over him. Superman looked up from where he was sitting and gave her a weak smile.

"Hey."

"Hey yourself. What happened at getting info off the computers?" Superman asked her.

"Urgh. Hard, complicated, unable to read. Left Vi and Brainy to it, I was only hindering them anyway." Prism glanced at what Superman was doing.

"Trying to find where it could have taken her?" Prism asked

"Uh. Yeah but it's harder then I imagined. The beast….I don't know to be honest." Superman confessed, he rubbed his eyes.

"Well the only thing I do know is Tinya is safe with what ever is opposing Dr Londo. Be that the beast or his son. I just wish I knew what was going on." Prism watched as Superman gave a loud yawn. "And I think it's time for you to sleep." The amusement was hard to hide in her voice.

"No I want to finish this off. I'm trying to find a pattern in the beast's movements, find a spot he aims for more." Superman had to hold back another yawn.

"And you can do that tomorrow when you have a refreshed mind." Prism said.

"You sure you'll be alright here?" Superman asked.

"Yeah if I need anything I can always ask UB for it. Not like he deserves sleep." The bitter tone was evident and Superman winced

"Don't be too hard on him. You know what she's like." Superman said standing up.

"Yeah I know but it's easier to hate him, he's in range, she isn't. And he's not the one hurt." Prism said looking out into the windows only to see her reflection staring back at her instead.

"I'll see you tomorrow." Superman said and she waved at him.

Prism sighed and slumped down into a nearby chair, patterns huh? Good idea but that could take weeks to figure out. Brainy was probably thinking along the same lines, if he was then in the back of his mind somewhere he was trying to calculate it. Prism didn't think it was going to work though; something about this beast made her think it didn't make patterns.

Glancing at the computer desk she reached up and switched the transmitter for Tinya's communicator on, they had tried it earlier but to not effect. Something about this place didn't like technology. She was going to try it again though in hopes it would reach her or Tinya suddenly came into range. It was going to be a long night but Prism didn't have any other choice.


Thinga are hotting up........i bet your all hotting up eswell............should i make them kiss? Should i leave them and you wanting more? Should i be bad and turn this into an M? Let me know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm no where near finished on What if Chapter 9 so bear with me

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