Dream of Death chap 9
Midnight: Hi guys! I hope you saw my new story, Karma! So far people like it, but I need more opinions, so please check it out. Also check out my other story, Fairy Tale Series Part 1: Cinderella. I need more opinions on that one too!
Cookies: Yeah, well anyways, we will now...
Sour: Since we neglected to do it in a long time...
Midnight: Respond to last chapters reviews!
Vampireluver23, I'm so glad you like it and that you decided to review! Unlike some people who just add you to alert, or favorites and don't tell you what they think, and what they want to happen! Yeah that's right I said it! And you people know who you are! All it takes is 3 seconds to leave a simple review! Just tell me what you think by PMing me or leaving a review! Don't worry, I'll update more often!
Handsomeangel, I know it was my funniest chapter! Tell her don't cry, Yasu is only being, well... Yasu. He doesn't like her that way, tell your friend that if Yasu were there he would not be able to resist her smexiness! lol! (Brackets are the best! Woot! :) (: YOu can make smiley faces with them!) I totally think your right, probably half the people who got that text were priests! lol! :) (:
Anonymous, Oh my gosh! YOU TOTALLY WIN THE CONTEST! YOU'RE RIGHT! IT'S THE GENTLEMEN'S ALLIANCE CROSS! YOU GET TO BE IN MY NEXT CASE! I totally wish you had an account though, then I would know who's character I was writing, so please give me a character and make up a user name!
Crazylittlecheezer, Thank you! I will update soon! I read your stories too, I loved them! Plz update them soon too! :) (:
xSapphirexRosesxFanx, I don't think Yasu is a jerk for kissing her, he's making Naru jealous so that they'll realise their feelings for eachother! It's his plan, only the kiss wasn't supposed to happen, and it was a freak accident that only happens once in a life time. But in my story, once every chapter! lol! JK! :) (: I know, it's really funny watching Yasu tease Monk!
Cross your Heart for me, I'll add you and the winner of the contest into my next case, and maybe someone else who I promised a while back... I know, Yasu is super awesome! He's cute, funny, and awesometastical (as handsomeangel would say about Lin)! And your sooooo right! Naru needs a taste of reality! *Sour, and Cookies get bored then start randomly yelling at Naru and Mai, "Wake up and smell the roses pretty boy! Mai likes you and you like her! So go make out or something!" Mai blushes and throws her alarm clock at Cookies, and Naru comes and tries to attack Sour with a chainsaw, but that's her territory as a serial killer and so they are equal...But then Naru uses his PK and KO's Sour, while Cookies and Mai laugh, then Naru KO's Cookies and Mai sees that he is about to collapse so she tries to help him, but then as Naru's PK KO's him, he KO's Mai by falling on her! While I just sit there and laugh then yell "In the end, I still win!"*
Fairy of Music and Literature, You are right, it's Shinshi Doumei Cross, but I wanted the name in english. And the hint I gave you was the name Shinshi Doumei Cross. I love Arina Tanemura too, BTW!
Missyangel87, I know Poor, poor Mai! She's always the one left out of everything isn't she? She doesn't even know that John, sent that picture to everyone cuz guess what? Mai TOTALLY NEVER EVER DOES THIS! She fell asleep. I know, Karma has gotten Naru for not telling her how he feels!
Reishilovesyaoi, Well if you really want to know what happens next... I could tell you in this review, or better yet, I could do the disclaimer than start the chapter! WOOT! :) (:
All: We don't own Ghost Hunt! Or Maora and Haine!
Some Motorcycle Durby, at the same time,
Madoka's POV
I was just doing an exteme backflip on my motorcycle, when the most funny thing ever happened! I got a text from John! I opened my phone, and started driving with my feet. I am an amazing driver! It was a picture of Mai and Yasu kissing! Well, that was odd and it ruined my plan for Mai and Naru! Well Naru is certainly going to have a fit when he sees this!
Oh well, at least I won't be the one who has to deal with a cranky Naru! Then her phone rang. It was Naru. And he sounded cranky. Too late.
"Madoka, we have a case that we need help with. So get your lazy but over to ...(wherever that mansion is)... and bring some info about it."
And before she could say anything else, he hung up. Wow...I guess I shouldn't have laughed. Well Karma's a bitch, (no one ever said that it was or wasn't true) next time I won't laugh, but hey at least Karma is hitting Naru hard too!
General POV
But then it started to rain, with thunder and lightning and it got all muddy and Madoka fell off her bike. Then she was all muddy too! She went all chibi and yelled "CURSE YOU KARMA!"
Then lighting struck a nearby tree, causing it to fall and crush her motorbike. "AWWWW CRAP!" she shouted, "now I have to walk..."
So she got up and randomly walked through the woods, not knowing how close she was to the mansion.
At the Mansion,
General POV
Maora and Haine had shown the SPR to their rooms and had the servants help set up the base. Naru divided the SPR into teams and gave them jobs. Ayako and Masako were to do rounds to see if they sensed anything, while Naru and Lin interviewed everyone in the house. Monk and John were to do temperatures, while Yasu and Madoka (who still wasn't there) were to do research on the house. And Mai would stay with Hinata, keep her safe, watch for signs of possession, ghost's controlling her by threats and just so she had something to do.
(A/N: We will start out with Ayako and Masako.)
Ayako and Masako's Rounds,
General POV
They walked out of the base. This house was huge, it would take them at least an hour to finish rounds. The mansion had 5 floors. They decided to start at the top.
The top happened to be the attic, which was pretty creepy. This house may have been new to the Tachibana family, but it must have been years old. The attic had very few windows, making it dark and creepy. They walked around all the rooms together, knowing better than to separate. They sensed nothing in the attic.
They went to the next floor. Nothing there either. The third floor, nothing. fourth floor, zippo, zilch, nadda, and zero! Finally they went to the basement.
It had no windows, and only a few bare bulbs to give off light. They walked around and never sensed a thing either and decided to head back to base. Just as they reached the stairs, the basement doors slammed shut and the lights started to flicker. Then the lights went out completely. Suddenly banging resounded off the walls.
Masako and Ayako clung to each other. Masako whispered "Something evil is here..."
Then something cold touched Ayako's shoulder and she screamed.
Naru and Lin's interviews,
General POV
Naru and Lin had to interview Haine, Maora, Hinata, 8 maids, 4 cooks, 2 butlers and 5 gardeners. First they interviewed the owners of the house, Maora and Haine. They didn't get anything useful out of them, only the same thing as last time. Then he interviewed the little girl, Hinata. She was just like every normal little girl.
Nothing appeared to be wrong with her, but he sent Mai with her just in case. Then he interviewed the maids all at once.
All of them experienced activity. A lot of them had been locked in a room before, but the strange thing was, they had never been alone when they were locked in. There was always a child crying quietly somewhere in the room, but when they looked no one could be found. Other times, when there was violent activity, the ghost would sound different. It would say terrible things about finding someone and killing them. Or about how it would take revenge on Sokka and Shiara.
Then Naru interviewed the cooks. Similar things happened to them, but they knew more, because they lived here too. Sometimes the crying child would say "I don't want to play this anymore!" or "Please let me go!" or "I don't want to die!"
Same things with everyone else.
Monk and John
General POV
They had checked all the rooms in the house to report their findings. They had started from the bottom to the top of the house, so they wouldn't have to follow Ayako and Masako around everywhere. The basement was much colder than a normal basement. It was so much colder that you could actually tell with out the thermometer. Then there was Hinata's room. There was the kitchen. And then the Attic.
Suddenly, just as they were about to enter the base. A piercing scream rang throughout the house. It was Ayako's scream.
(We'll skip Madoka and Yasu for now, cuz nobody wants to know about the boring research until it's important)
Mai and Hinata
General POV
Mai adored the cute little girl. She had black hair, cute green eyes, and was super adorable! She was only 7. Mai sure hoped she wasn't possessed or anything, because she really liked the little girl. They were in her room. Mai and Hinata were playing tea party (classic little girl game! lol! :) (: ). They were really having fun when Hinata suddenly burst into tears and cried out "I know everyone thinks I'm possessed, but I'm not! I'm just forced to learn a lot at home and act mature there! But Hinata and Maora told me I could be whoever I wanted, so I decided I wouldn't act the way I was expected to anymore! I would just be me and do what I want to do!"
"It's ok! I believe you. You wanna know a secret?" Mai comforted the little girl.
Hinata brightened immediately. "Really? You believe me? And yes I do wanna know!"
"Of course I believe you! This is the secret: A lot of the people I know want me to act more mature, but I still just be me! Even if I'm a psychic and I have dreams about things related to our cases, doesn't mean I have to be cold and heartless! You can be whoever you want too! All you have to do is tell your family how you feel. They should listen and love you anyway, even if you're not what they expect! I miss my family a lot. When I was young like you my dad died. Then when I was a little bit older my mom died. But I pray to them everyday, and I think their listening right now!"
"I believe you!" She said as she gave me a hug. Suddenly a loud scream pierced our ears.
Then a terrible cold voice said "Come out Shiara, or else these innocent people will get hurt."
Midnight: OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHH! Another cliffhanger!
Sour: You know, if you keep doing that, people will hate you. Besides that chapter was way too short!
Cookies: The cliffhanger is to keep the readers interested!
Sour: I wasn't talking about the cliffhanger, I was talking about Midnight's OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHH! Another Cliffhanger! retarded act!
Midnight: Hey! Well anyways this chapter is short cuz I have to go 2 bed now, so GOODNIGHT!
ALL: GOODNIGHT! PLZ R&R!
