For all my gamers out there ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ
[Update 1.2]
- Fixed unnecessary dialogue
- Cleaned up grammar/sentence structure
- Reduced filler details/pointless words
- Upgraded details so that they interconnect
• If a detail seems pointless, remember "it's a surprise tool that will help us later!"
- Attempted to make story consistent, added multiple manga characters
- Gave the Wattpad story a long-needed overhaul
• For those that prefer Wattpad, it is no longer a two chapter mess
- To old readers, start it from the top! Everything's been changed up!
A/N: Seriously though, all jokes aside, it took two weeks but I edited everything from the beginning. I took the serious reviews to heart and really went back and read my story. Good Lord, I'm so sorry you all had to put up with that ( ・ั﹏・ั) I realized how bad it was and OOF, let's just say ya girl dun goofed guys. But hey! I fixed it didn't I? And I actually finalized my outline for the story, I know what I want to happen, how it's gonna happen and when it's gonna happen.
I'm pretty stoked to be sharing this with you guys so...yeah.(๑̵ᴗ̵)ﻭ
I've also gotten back onto my Tumblr account (ThatCoolMother), so if you all want some visuals and other neat stuff to go along with the story, go check it out! Warning, it is super bare and I've only got one thing posted but I will be more active on that sight. I find it much easier and more convenient than Instagram, although if you all prefer it, I'm in that too (ThatCoolMother).
Thanks to all the critical reviews, fuck the haters凸-_-凸, like I said I'm just glad to be sharing my idea.
À bientôt! - Mom
