Hola! Yes we actually saw some Edward! I know and now we see him all over the chapter and we swoon! Also, I just wanted to tell you if anyone has any advice on the story it would

be REALLY welcome! This the first story that I've really gotten into. I'm thinking about two new ones after this… once we get towards the end I'll give you the choice of which one to

do first… Anyway you do know that I don't twilight right? All right good now I will begin to type!

EPOV (I'm trying! If you don't like it tell me!)

I stared down at her face in awe, it was the most beautiful thing that I had ever seen. Perfect, pale ivory, skin that showed features reminded me of those Grecian paintings of half naked goddesses dancing

to lute music. I was quite ashamed to admit that I was very disappointed about the fact that she was fully clothed. It showed her perfect curves, she wasn't a toothpick, but she wasn't too big either, with a

perfect hour glass figure, a long neck, wide hips, but not un-normally wide, and a very, very, very nice chest. She also had the most perfect red lips, that were very kissable. My eyes moved to her hair, it

hung around her face and stopped just above her elbows and glittered with red in the sunlight. I finally moved closer and closer to her eyes first looking at her perfectly arched eyebrows, then at her

eyelashes, so thick and dark then finally into her captivating chocolate brown eyes, so deep and expressive that I felt like I felt like I was falling into them. Bella Swan, the one girl that I had ever kissed, well I

guess I had kissed other girls, but they were boring, trying to shove their tongues down my throat, when I kissed those lips I felt like I could kiss them forever.

"Are you alright?" I breathed, my hands tightening. She lifted her head completely to look at me her own hands became limp against my chest. As she stared back at me I was certain about who she was.

Bella Swan, the girl who had left without saying goodbye.

BPOV

I looked up at him; he had the most perfect features, from which I could not look away. His bronze hair had grown out; it hung in front of his eyes now. He had grown tall, and very well muscled, so beautiful

that it hurt to look at him, but his beautiful eyes, green fire, already hypnotized me. I stared at him for a long moment before hesitantly asking, trying to prove that my mind hadn't created him out of

loneliness. Out of longing that I could only begin to recognize.

"Edward?" I whispered. His eyes (even though I had thought it an impossibility) brightened.

"Bella?" He said, slightly louder than I had. So either I had gone completely bonkers, or things had actually gotten better, drastically. Being bonkers seemed more likely at the moment. But I would fantasize

just a little bit more, before I wake up and dispel the most perfect dream, the one that I had always wanted. I smiled at him.

"What are you doing here?!" I exclaimed.

"I go here"

"Your joking" Nope. I've cracked. He stared at me like I was crazy.

"I mean, I go here too!" I said feeling to feel a rush of warmth in my cheeks, the shock of it only made me blush harder. He stared down at me and then showed me that one part of him was still the same,

by smiling that adorable crooked smile the way he used to. I smiled back at him, I liked the way it felt so effortless, so easy.

"Well I should- um- get to class" I said embarrassed as I slipped out of his arms, I looked around the courtyard to see a bunch of girls in cheer uniforms waving at me giggling and smiling. I smiled and waved

but took the first chance to turn back to Edward to see him frowning dismally; I then realized that several of the girls were smiling at him, not me. Oh god, some things really do never change. I smiled at

him happily as his eyes widened with confusion.

"Well, looks like you need to go catch up with your fan club. Sit with me and me Emmett and Jasper at lunch, if Alice is here she's welcome to come too" I said smiling at him. He looked hurt.

"You're not going to help me?" He said looking like I had just drowned his puppy or something. I giggled.

"Did you ever help me with Mike?" I said smiling at him. "I love paybacks" I muttered under my breath as I started walking towards my first period classroom when I heard him chuckle.

"Yeah, so do I" I started to turn to ask what the heck he was talking about before I felt a hand on my hip. I looked up. Speak of the devil.

"MIKE?" I gasped. Great. And I was staring to like it here. He had grown up all right, I guess. But there was something in the way that he looked at me that made me feel like something to eat. He frowned,

obviously he didn't remember me. But he smiled anyway.

"What's cooking good looking?" He whispered thickly, just like the counts in the romance novels. Unlike the seduced characters in the books, I snorted.

"Other than the worst pick up line that I have ever heard?" I snorted loudly shoving past him, hearing the laughs of his buddies.

"Oh The M-Dog loves a challenge!" Oh great! This will be wonderful! He calls himself M-dog! And he thinks I like him! I pretty much stomped to first period.

First was Social Studies which I was honestly looking forward to, it was an interesting class. The school is a paperless system, all notes are on laptops, and projects go on flash drives, which is perfect, I am

built for a paperless system. I have horrible handwriting, and I either lose or crumple every piece of paper put in my hands. But I am however, excellent with computers, I type so fast that sometimes my

fingers are a blur. I can't lose files that I've saved, and I can do everything at the same time on my Mac. My beloved computer, affectionately called Mac or Macky, or by Emmett MACdonald. I opened it and

started emailing Alice to tell her the news, better yet I thought to myself, I'll call her. I pulled out my cell phone we had recently gotten a new phone plan so I had a blackberry storm. I realized before I hit

speed dial that I still thought that I was dreaming slyly making sure no one was looking a pinched my arm. Hard. OW! Nope not dreaming. I nodded and hit speed dial one. Next to me a phone rang.

Alice it's Bella, pick up your phone! I'm waiting! You still haven't picked up? What the- "Hey Bells!" The person next to me said cheerfully. I turned and grabbed that person's nose. It was how Alice and me

used to greet each other. They automatically grabbed my nose out of reflex. I then found myself looking at my best friend. Who had every right to hate me.

Hi hope you liked it, and I wasn't joking earlier about the whole advice thing, I don't have a beta reader and I am trying to rewrite one of the greatest love stories ever written, and I can't do it alone. This

isn't just my story, if someone gives me advice then I use it. I believe that the readers should always get a say in the story. So the reviews are encouraging and I know this sounds weird but I NEED criticism!

It's how I learn. Also I know this is short but that's the way my stories are, lots of short chapters. But I'm planning on having thirty-five to forty chapters. But I am trying to update fast so cut me some slack

please! Also that stuff in italics was Alice's ringtone. By the way I just finished Pride and Prejudice and loved it! You can tell so many authors got a lot of inspiration there! I think I might base a story off of it…

what do you think? It would be after I finish this one of course… what have you read lately? PM or review on it.

Emily