AUTHORS NOTE! OKAY MOST OF YOU SAID VAMPIRE BELLA BUT… I GOT THIS REVIEW FROM ender'sGame15 THAT HAD MY ORIGINAL IDEA… SO HERE IT IS HOPE YOU ENJOY!
Alternative ending to NM chapter 9 (aaahhhh so much suspense!)
I opened my eyes as the fire stopped. I was still in the cafeteria, Edward and Alice's face was looking down at me in confusion. "What?" I asked. My voice sounded like bells.
"Bella?" Alice asked. Edward looked too stunned to speak. What was happening?
I looked into Edward's eyes and winced at the sudden pain, but it went as quickly as it came, so I thought nothing of it.
"What?" I asked again as I sat up, everyone in the cafeteria was looking at me. Shit did I have spinach in my teeth again? Why was I sitting on the table? Wait no… I hadn't had any lunch and then Edward came and proposed… the memories flooded back to me. Victoria. Jacob. Video. Fire.
Fire. Why was there no fire? The change takes about three days not what looked like 5 minutes. Then I realised that I could see everything. Every little dust mote that infested the air. It was amazing. I could see every flake of paint on the opposite wall, I could decipher each and every scent from another. I felt waves of strength wafting through my muscles. Everything.
Just then the door slammed open wide, showing Emmett. Everyone stared at him, including Edward and Alice. "What'd I miss?"
I was the first to laugh, breaking the tension. The rest of the Cullens started to laugh as well at Emmett's confused expression. Then he looked at me. "WHY ARE BELLA'S EYES RED?" The laughing stopped abruptly as my eyes went wide.
Edward turned to me, "I don't understand," we both whispered. I smiled at him when he ran his fingers along my cheek bones.
"You should be writhing in pain right now. Either that or trying to slaughter the whole school," he told me. At this realisation, I took a deep breath. I felt Alice resume her death grip on my arms, as I tried again. Nothing. I looked at Alice, telling her with my eys that I was fine, but the same pain as before swept over me.
"Well…?" Edward looked at me.
"Nothing," I stated, "I mean I can smell them, but… not in an edible way. Y'know?"
"Amazing"
"I'm hardly amazing, Alice!" I giggled. The Cullens stared at me in awe.
"I didn't say that, Bella," she told me. "I thought it."
I just stared in confusion until my vision was swept away from me and replaced with another picture. The Volturi. Here, in the cafeteria in 3…2…1. My sight flooded back as I whispered to Edward, "They're here"
I was gonna stop here but because I love youz all, Im goin to keep goin! Xx :)
"What?" Alice asked. Just then Aro walked through the door.
The pain came when I looked at him like when I did, Edward and Alice. The other students didn't dare say a word as I got up to greet him. I knew he meant no harm- Jane on the other hand wanted to slaughter us to the death. Lovely.
"Aro," I greeted him. The Cullens stood behind me, surprised.
"Bella. Immortality suits you, dear. My guard is outside, but we mean no harm, just a warning. You have revealed us to the humans, they must be changed or killed," he told me, his blood red eyes gleaming.
"Isn't there some way we could settle this? What if they are okay with it? They won't tell anyone, if they do then Alice will see and we will do something about it, Aro. I won't let your secret be revealed to the outside world," I told him sincerely, looking deep into his eyes. He seemed mesmerised, almost like he was hypnotized by my voice.
Weird.
"That would work well for us, young one," he answered, almost robotically. If this is my power, I am cheesed. He took my hand, and kissed it. But I barley registered that, his whole life flashed before my eyes. From hazy human memories to crisp and clear vampire ones. But this was his power. He let go of my hand and tore the pictures away with him, he bowed his head, "We will go now."
"Master!" a voice called from the door. "You can't possibly be considering that we leave them when they have broken our one and only law?" I looked at Jane as she flitted to Aro's side, causing gasps around the room. Again, I was met with the slight pain at my temples and Jasper looked at me, probably wondering- like me- why this was happening.
"Jane. We have made our agreement. We are going home, dear," Aro told her as she turned to look at me. Her power failed, again when she stared at me. I wished that for once she could go through was she puts others through most of her day, for pure satisfaction. Suddenly she was there screaming on the ground, in obvious agony.
I tore my gaze away from her to look at Aro in confusion, but as I did, her screams subsided. "Power absorbing and manipulation, fantastic powers you hold, young Isabella. I wonder would you consider joining my guard? You don't seem to be affected by the humans' presence. I do believe the change took all of ten minutes," he looked to Edward for conformation, to which he nodded. "Your scar opened, I've only seen this once before. Your heart is still beating as well… I wonder…"
"Impossible! You can't be serious, how could that be?" Edward chimed in.
"It's the only possibility, young Edward. Bella, here, is still part human. Now would you please consider joining us?"
That was a lot to take in… So what erm, I have two powers and counting because of one and I'm part human because my heart still beats and I have self-control. Not to mention the Volturi want me on their guard. Wow.
"No, thanks. I think I'll pass, Aro, but thanks for the offer," I told him.
"Pity. Your mental shield still is holding well, isn't it though?"
"Yes. I still can't use my power on her," Jane said from his side.
"Interesting. We will be in touch. Thank you, we will go now," Aro said, turning.
"Thank you, for your visit," The Cullens and I said simultaneously.
Mike leaned over to Jessica and whispered in her ear, "Creepy…"
I giggled, and turned to the school. Oh, god, they're staring… yes, they are. Crap, what am i supposed to say, 'Hey I hope you're okay with the fact that we're all vampires and I'm half human. Let's go to class!'? Yeah, right.
I was about to open my mouth when Lauren screamed, shit. Rosalie turned to her, "Super-sonic hearing, bitch! You scream, it's ten times more high-pitched in our ears, so calm the fuck down! We won't kill you! If we wanted to we would've done a long time ago!"
"W-w-what? You mean… you w-wont k-kill us then?" she asked quietly.
"NO! We are VEGETARIANS! Why in Carlisle's name would we eat you?"
"Well… you are vampires…" Jessica murmured.
"I'm also psychic!" added Alice, joyfully. She was enjoying this waay too much.
Sorry I haven't updated for so long! School just started back and I have had HEAPS of homework! Ill try to be faster… love youz all
Peace Anna-Bella…XD
