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N7warrior93: Thanks, I'll do my best to keep it that way! Also since you are the only one to have said anything about keeping the smuggler and the trooper and since I agree, I will keep them and do my best to write them into the story! Also have a virtual internet cookie for participating in the story's Key Choices! ;)

Revanchists unite: You are quite welcome for the pen name thing, sir! ;) Most of this is all just plan as I write so not many specific plans for HK yet, so nearly everything is open, so opinions are quite welcome! As for him getting reprogrammed by the modern jedi, I'm not sure if I understand what you're saying but I don't think Revan or HK would let him be reprogrammed by anyone else so probably new technology but new programming altogether; I'm not sure about. Tell me if I'm getting that wrong though, I would love some discussion to help spur up some ideas for this! Thanks, I hope this chapter is better length :), took long enough to write it so it had better be ;).

GuestWithIdeas: Thanks, I will do my best to make Malgus interesting and keep what he's doing exciting while not completely screwing over the plans for the new order ;). As for Scourge, I really don't want to try to write him, I already have enough characters as it is, so let's just say he went off into the galaxy on his own to do stuff. It's perfectly fine that you are a new guest! ;) Your name has lots of promise anyway, keep living up to that name of yours!

God of all: Thanks and I will try to get my schedule to be less erratic but like I've said not promising anything.

Superemopowerz: I think I will do something like that, since Revan will have some sort of council position in the new order that will probably be something that comes up and I'm sure he will have some supporters in at the very least the player characters ;).

Since when his Revan immortal? Sorry but I'm a bit confused here. Either way keep reviewing!

Thanks everyone for the amazing reviews! I will do my best to keep improving this story for you all.

In this Chapter you are going to see Revan coming more into his area of expertise, a fleet commander. There will also be a long lightsaber duel, enough said, enjoy this extra long chapter!


Star Wars: A New Age

Ch 9: A New Threat

"Send the coordinates to Thandar and Necarssa, we are probably going to need their help." I decided.

"Coordinates sent master." C2 Replied. "Incoming holoconference from Thandar and Necarssa, master."

"Patch it through C2."

"Any reason why you aren't telling the fleet where to go, Commander?" Necarssa inquired.

"No time to explain so let's just say, Jedi's intuition." I replied. "I will leave it up to you two on whether you wish to accompany me in following Malgus but I do request that you do not give the fleet the coordinates."

"Course I'm with you Barsen'thor, we'll stop Malgus, no sweat!" Thandar decided.

"I trust your judgement sir, I will follow your lead." Necarssa replied.

"Thanks to you both, I'll see you at the coordinates." I replied before cutting off the transmission.

"C2, is the hyperdrive set with the tracked fleet's coordinates?"

"Of course Master!"

"Then bring us into hyperspace and notify me when we are 15 minutes from our destination."

"Your wish, is my command Master, it shall be done to your exact specifications." C2 replied as I nodded before turning to look for my only other companion on board.

Spotting Nadia leaning against the entrance to the cockpit, I made my way over to her.

"Xandon do you know where those coordinates will lead to? Oh I hope nothing bad will happen when we get there but Malgus must have a reason for heading there." Nadia rambled with worry lacing her voice.

"Don't worry Nadia, we will stop Malgus and make sure he can't threaten anyone else ever again." Xandon reassured her. "Now we must have at least a few hours before we catch up to Malgus and I have a few very good ways to pass the time."

"Oh Master you rascal!" Nadia cried out blushing furiously but it looked like she was all for my ... suggestion.

"Ladies first." Xandon stated grinning, hands palmed up pointing towards our shared quarters.

"Well when you are being such a gentleman how can I say no." Nadia replied smiling lovingly at me.

"This time you're going to need to carry me though!" Nadia said as her smile turned into an evil smirk with her getting behind me and playfully jumping onto my back, forcing me to adjust myself and balance her with my hands. "Forward!" Nadia cried with excitement as I did my best to stay balanced following her command as we laughed together, nearly forgetting the life or death situations we would likely find ourselves in soon enough.


8 hours later

"Declaration: Master! We have a situation worthy of your meat bag intervention here." HK's voice rang throughout the speakers in the cargo bay which Rayeda and I had taken to using to spar together.

"I'm on my way HK." I said before I turned to Rayeda who had already stowed away her sabers and had recuperated herself with the force. "Let's go find what has HK calling us for." I said before we both took off running through the corridors of the Foundry headed towards the bridge.

Entering the bridge Revan queried what the problem was. "HK, what is the situation?"

"Statement: Master, I have detected on the Foundry's hyperspace sensors that there is a fleet of starships currently in hyperspace headed our way. They will arrive in 4 hours." HK replied.

"HK, what is the status of our attack probes and station based defences?" I asked.

"Statement: Master, we have at our disposal; 100 bomb probes and 100 attack probes, there are a total of 20 heavy turbo laser cannons with a extremely high yield along each side of the Foundry, these are accompanied by a multitude of light turbo laser cannons on each side, the Foundry's shields are currently being upgraded to republic standards." HK sounded off in a monotone.

"HK, set up what production facilities that are available to create as many bomb and attack probes as possible, set two up to continue creating HK-52 units, we will need them to repel any boarders. Move the Foundry into a defensible position near the debris field of the Star Forge above Lehon and get the shield generator upgraded and ready. I want the attack probes we currently have patrolling around the Foundry, the bomb probes and all of the probes that complete production need to make their way to positions 5 grid units away from the unknown fleet's jump vector and engage cloaking fields." I rattled off as I pulled up a tactical holotable of the solar system.

"Statement: All commands under way Master." HK stated, "Prediction: With the 4 hours we have, we should have 500 HK-52 units prepared for anti-boarding operations, the shield generator will be a Mark 5 shielding system on the Republican Tactical Space Station Shielding system, 500 Attack probes and 1000 Bomb probes will be in position."

"Make sure everything stays on schedule HK." I commanded before turning to Rayeda who was examining the Holotable with a grim looking on her face. "Rayeda prepare yourself, I need you to handle securing all possible boarding locations with the HK-52 units, be prepared for anything, once the battle starts I will join you as soon as I can." Rayeda nodded at this before she and T7 about faced and briskly walked out of the control room. Turning myself back around to face the Holotable, I began to think up every possible outcome for who was coming and what could occur in the coming hours.

"HK, change of orders for the Bomb droids, I want 500 of them to position themselves just inside Lehon's atmosphere."

"Statement: Orders sent Master." I just nodded in reply.

I began to grin as I watched the markers that indicated my units beginning to spread out into a triangle formation around the hyperspace exit vector, surrounding it from the bottom and both sides. 'Whoever you are, I hope you brought a powerful fleet if you want to survive because I'm ready and waiting for you.'


4 hours later

I watched as distortions began to appear under the electromagnetic sensors but not under any of the rest. Curious I turned on one of the probe's external camera feeds. A view of completely empty space appeared showing still no ships. I could sense that something is not right here, where could a whole fleet of ships disappear to, looking one more time at the electromagnetic scanners which showed a continually growing magnetic disturbance, with this I knew there could be only one explanation for this.

"HK, transfer tactical command to Holotable B3." I commanded before the table before me displaying the space around the hyperspace vector beeped in confirmation of receiving control.

Quickly grabbing the icons of 100 of my bomb probes and dragging them right into the middle of the electromagnetic disturbance before spreading them out in every direction.

Watching them approach their destinations explosions were suddenly visible on all of my sensors from a few of the probes before these explosions became even more numerous.

My theory proven correct, I quickly grabbed another 300 of my bomb probes and sent them straight at what is now starting to resolve into a fleet of Imperial star ships.

The probes heading at full speed started to hit more and more of the cloaked and uncloaked imperial starships. I watched as their formation began to get more and more spread out, then suddenly a number of other large imperial starships uncloaked obviously not liking their chances with their shields down against suicide probes. With this new coordination the Imperial fleet began to rip through the remaining bomb probes I had sent at them, quickly grabbing another group of 300 probe droids I spread them out and sent them at the Imperial fleet again.

The damaged Imperial ships were quickly destroyed by exploding probes cutting down the Imperial fleet's numbers down to about 100 cruisers which were spread out in a loose formation around a single Harrower-class dreadnought in the center. All of these ships quickly let loose with their turbo lasers and launched fighters, quickly making short work of most of the remaining probes headed their way.

With their confidence restored the Imperial fleet split up with the Harrower and 40 escort cruisers staying where they were to provide cover while the remaining 60 cruisers cautiously made their way to where my remaining 300 bomb probes and 500 attack probes were waiting for orders.

Smiling inwardly at their splitting up their forces and the way they concentrated everything on one target I grab all 500 of the attack probes and send them straight at the 60 cruisers and the fighter squadrons escorting them. Just behind them I keep the remaining 300 bomb probes, staying just out of range of all of the Imperial ships.

The 500 attack probes had taken out half of the imperial fighters but the imperial fighters had managed to take out all but about 100 attack probes, grabbing the remaining attack probes, I drag them down to lure the imperials away from their cruisers before I grabbed 100 of the remaining bomb probes and put them in the path of the imperial fighter squadrons and immediately blowing them up taking out the rest of my attack probes, the 100 bomb probes and the rest of the imperial fighters.

Sending the remaining 200 bomb probes at the 60 escort less cruisers I waited till the imperial cruisers started firing at the probes before moving my attention to the 500 bomb probes I had waiting down below by Lehon, grabbing all 500 I sent them full speed straight up into the middle of the formation of the Harrower Dreadnought and it's 40 escorts. With their attention focused on bombarding the 200 bomb probes attacking their allies at long range they never saw their demise coming.

Utterly smashing through their formation, half of the bomb probes blew up turning the Harrower and it's escorts into a huge debris field.

With the remaining bomb probes I had I sent them all to finish off the 60 dwindling cruisers still desperately fighting off the agile probes that had been harassing them.

With a final brilliant explosion the last of the Imperial Warships were turned into debris.

Sighing I closed my eyes and sighed at all the lives I had just taken in the span of about 30 minutes.

My prayers for the lost lives were interrupted by HK's voice.

"Statement: Master we have multiple boarding parties which have managed to establish a foothold in the west hangar and are pushing the HK-52 units stationed there back."

"Can we vent the hangar?" I asked.

"Statement: I Already have Master, but all of the Imperials have vacuum sealed suits and have just recently cut off my access to that section of the Foundry."

"Where is Rayeda?"

"Statement: Meat bag Rayeda and the Tin Can are currently heading to the West hangar with a platoon of 12 HK-52 units."

"Alright, I'll go meet up with them, HK handle the deployment of the HK-52 units from here on out."

"Condescending Statement: Of course Master, they are my little brethren, they need my meat bag killing wisdom to get through this mundane task."

Ignoring HK's comment, I ran out of the control room and pulled out my double bladed light saber, preparing myself for anything that could happen.


"Master Xandon, we are 15 minutes from entering the system designated by the coordinates." C2 stated over the intercom.

"Thank you C2, Nadia and I will be right up." I said before recomposing myself.

"Time to get going then Master, the Galaxy needs us again." Nadia teased me pushing me out of our quarters and towards the cockpit.

Arriving at the cockpit, I sat down at one of the sensor terminals and waited for us to drop out of hyperspace.

"Leaving hyperspace Master; in 3... 2... 1... Entering normal space, all systems active." C2 announced.

Wasting no time I took a scan of the surrounding space for Malgus's fleet. I quickly found it since we entered real space right in the middle of it. Normally this would force us into immediate evasive manoeuvres and send us into the fight of our lives but this was no normal circumstance. All around us was the wreckages of Malgus's entire stealth armada. Nadia and my own responses to this were our jaws dropping like rocks, the question of how this could happen when we likely dropped out of hyperspace just a bit after them was mind boggling. I only snapped out of my awed and scared state when Thandar and Necarssa dropped out of hyperspace and contacted us.

"How did this happen!" Was the first question out of both of their mouths when the communications link was established.

"I really have no idea." I admitted extremely worried. "We should scan the surrounding area and try to find out what did this."

"Affirmative, running scans now Commander." Necarssa replied before cutting the link along with Thandar after a quick nod.

After a few minutes of scanning the system Thandar found something.

"Barsen'thor! My sensors are picking up a massive space station embedded in a equally massive asteroid sitting by the primary planet. This thing is pumping out energy levels that are off the charts!" Thandar's voice said as it came crackling over the Comm. Line.

"Necarssa, Thandar, begin a slow approach, shields up but weapons powered down. Perhaps whoever is in that station won't want to fight." I said.

"Yah sure after they just wiped out an entire fleet, they don't want to fight, that would be the day." Thandar declared sarcastically.

"Actually, that fleets destruction was necessary to maintain the secrecy of this Station." A voice declared before a figure materialized in the holoconference.

"Who are you?" Thandar inquired, curious as to who just hacked into their holo frequencies with such ease.

"I am Revan." The figure replied simply.

With that one phrase Necarssa, Thandar and I all started scanning the figure that had intruded upon us. He was about 6 foot, wore long black robes with red cloth tying it together and chains placed at strategic positions to allow for more options in CQC. The man was clearly a skilled and clever warrior. Add a certain Mandalorian mask and he would look exactly like the Revan of legends, I concluded.

"You actually are the Revan." I said slowly, regaining my composure trying to figure out what was going on here.

"Yes, that is correct Barsen'thor." Revan said before the transmission flickered slightly and Revan appeared again slightly dishevelled and panting slightly. Blaster fire and lightsabers could be heard in the background.

"I am assuming that you are in possession of that massive space station Revan, what is the situation onboard right now?" I asked.

"You assume correctly, Barsen'thor." Revan replied before spinning and cutting down a sith who had snuck up on him. "We are currently fighting off multiple boarding parties from the remnants of the fleet that you have no doubt seen. We are barely holding out at the moment, Darth Malgus has also boarded, Master Rayeda Sett is currently dueling him."

"We have locked onto your location and are on our way now Revan." I replied while signalling C2 to dock near Revan's coordinates.

"Much appreciated Barsen'thor, I'll see you when you land then."Revan said before the transmission flickered again then cut out.


I somersaulted backwards as I felt the heat of my opponents blade skim across my face where my head was only milliseconds before. Falling backwards into my somersault I gathered the force around me before unleashing it as I came out of my roll, sending my opponent flying backwards crashing into a squad of his men.

Taking the moment to gather myself and assess the progress of the battle. I knew there was going to be boarding parties when I came down here to route the main landing force, what Revan nor I realized was that somehow Malgus managed to touch down about a battalions worth of Imperial soldiers and a number of Sith Royal Guards. Our only saving grace was that none of his more heavily made transports filled with War Droids made it. This still put us at a stalemate. Malgus had us completely outnumbered but we had more effective troops with the HK-52 units. The advantage had begun to shift as Malgus entered the fray, cutting down HK units all around him with ease while I was doing my best to hold off a number of Sith Royal Guardsmen. Thankfully Revan arrived soon with reinforcements allowing me to hold off Malgus to give Revan time to turn the battle in our favor. So now I just need to keep going at Malgus and keep him busy until Revan can afford to give me a hand. 'Easier said than done but I always enjoy a good challenge.' I thought with a tired smirk even in my situation.

Malgus grunted as he began to stand up to come at me again. Calling upon the force again I quickly recuperate my spent energy and renew the trauma trance I had put myself into earlier to ignore the multiple wounds I had already taken.

Bringing up my two sabers into a fighting position I cockily beckoned to Malgus as he brought his single Crimson saber up and leapt high and came down upon me slamming his Crimson saber against my crossed Copper and Purple sabers. Predicting this exact move due to Malgus's extremely predictable style to start a battle, I unleashed a Force Impulse shock wave I had been building, sending Malgus flying backwards while I leapt after him coming down in a overhead double slash right where Malgus had been a moment before. Sensing the attack from my right, I rolled underneath it right past Malgus and came out of my roll swinging both my sabers for his kneecaps. Malgus however just managed to jump over the attack before unleashing a torrent of force lightning which I managed to bring up my purple lightsaber to block before I threw my copper saber at Malgus forcing him to cut off his lightning to dodge out of the way. Gripping my purple saber in both hands I spun and swung at his chest using my momentum to force him off balance even as he blocked the swing. Undeterred I spun around again and came at him with a upwards swing forcing Malgus to jump backwards as I used his retreat to call my discarded bronze lightsaber to myself and unleashed a flurry of strikes upon Malgus coming at him every which way keeping him on the defensive.

I could sense Malgus's frustration as he tried to break through my force barrier which was preventing him from influencing me much with the force, which I continued to reinforce. I knew however that my time was limited as Malgus had resorted to Soresu and was conserving energy while I attacked him every which way with my Juyo form which kept him from easily overpowering me with either speed or brute force and even with Juyo's techniques to prolong the user's strength, I began to feel the strain as I continued to call upon the force to sustain my ever draining reserves to continue my relentless assault. Gritting my teeth I continued to give it my all. 'Revan you had better hurry up because I'm not going to last much longer here.'


I closed my eyes as I hoped to everything that C2 hadn't just hit any allies in that skidding landing in the West hangar. Giving a moment to attempt to bless whoever C2 had just hit with the Defender corvette I opened my eyes before moving towards the opening ramp with Nadia, Thandar and Necarssa following close behind. Both Thandar and Necarssa had agreed to board my vessel for the landing since there was no longer any need for extra space superiority and they probably didn't want to scratch their own vessel's paint. Taking my first step onto the space station I looked at my surroundings, it was a absolute carnage.

Both sides had mounting casualties, piles of scrap parts on one sides, scorched and severed limbs on the other. Even with the horrible sights and sounds both sides kept fighting although from what I can see Revan's side is made up all droids other than him and Master Sett.

Revan himself was fending off about a dozen Lightsaber wielding Royal Guardsmen while even more closed in. Master Sett was dueling Malgus by herself and keeping Malgus on the retreat but it was obvious that she is tired.

Quickly making a decision, "Necarssa, Thandar, Nadia, support Revan against Malgus's troops, I'll help Master Sett against Malgus." My group instantly complied and moved to their assigned task but not before I felt Nadia's mind brush against mine and somehow almost give me a spiritual kiss for good luck.

Grinning to myself I pulled out my single green lightsaber and charged off in Malgus's direction.

Attempting to give Master Sett the upper hand as quickly as I could, I quickly formed a disruption bubble around my hand as I ran before flinging it at Malgus sending him off balance. Malgus's weakness was quickly capitalized on by Master Sett who I quickly reinforced with mental barriers to free up her own will power and quickly giving her a boost to her energy. She then jumped on Malgus practically a dancing blur at this point with her renewed energy. Within seconds she had tripped Malgus and was about to gut him before a dozen Sith Royal Guardsmen jumped in and parried her attack and forced her to fight them all at once. Meanwhile, Malgus quickly got up and capitalized on Master Sett's inability to stand in his way and charged at me.

Drawing on the force I enveloped myself in the force like a cushioning armor that will slow down any blows that get too close. Allowing the force to flow through myself and energize me I met Malgus's charge with my own bringing my green saber to clash against his crimson saber. Using the force to hold the saber lock I enveloped a nearby cargo crate and sent it flying at Malgus who rolled backwards out of the saber lock before slicing the crate in half to allow it to pass around him harmlessly. Turning to face me Malgus growled in frustration and stuck out one of his hands and began to fire a torrent of lightning at me, bringing up my hand I formed a absorptive cushion of the force which caught and rendered the lightning harmless. Undeterred Malgus stepped up his attack and soon the torrent became a raging storm of lightning forcing me to bring up both my hands to create a wall of the force to catch all of the chaotically striking lightning.

Malgus began to walk towards me unrelenting in his continuous lightning assault, nearing me he readied his lightsaber before swinging it to cut me down.

Detonating my force shield to blow Malgus back and cut off his stream of lightning I escaped death by just a hair.

Malgus taking a step back to gather his power began to crackle with electricity and soon electricity from the space station itself began to be drawn towards him.

Attempting to stop him I unleashed as large of a force push as I could within a couple of seconds, Malgus however merely takes a step back before deciding he had gathered enough energy. Slamming his hands down to the ground lightning raced along the ground straight at me electrocuting a number of both his and Revan's troops along the way. Not liking the look of the lightning shockwave headed my way I immediately dived out of its path, right as I landed off to the left the ground beneath me erupted into a storm of lightning.

I screamed in pain as the lightning coursed through me ripping through my body relentlessly before I was spared from the constant pain as I felt myself pulled from the vicinity of the lightning storm before landing at the feet of Master Sett. Attempting to push myself up I allowed the force to run through myself to relieve some of the pain. While the pain slightly numbed, my muscles however were utterly fried and I was forced to lie there and wait until the force could patch me up some more. Looking up I watched in horror as Magus stalked towards Master Sett and myself while she fought off the last five Royal Guardsmen.


Malgus is approaching behind me, I need to finish these Sith Guards quickly. Thirty Metres. My purple saber swings up to intercept one of the Guard's crimson sabers before my bronze saber stabs straight past the Sith's guard stabbing him in the abdomen. I swing around slicing off another's head before catching the remaining three's sabers in a saber lock in a crouched behind the neck block.

Twenty metres, this will be close. I swing around sliding under the three blades I had blocked taking off the legs of one of the guards, quickly decapacitating him to finish him. Lunging at the last two guards I launch into a flurry of slashes and stabs before kicking one to the ground while the other runs. Where?! The Barsen'thor!

Ten metres, I'm out of time. I leave the downed sith leaping at the one running for the downed Jedi landing in front of him I block a series of strikes before running him through with both my sabers then using the force to throw him aside as I brought up both my sabers just in time to meet Malgus's sabers.

Malgus quickly fires a bolt of lightning at me but I bring my lightsaber up and block it. Using the force I throw one of the bodies of the dead sith at Malgus before dashing towards him. Approaching him I throw myself at him with a series of acrobatic spins, each of which included my sabers coming down at Malgus from every angle. I began to push Malgus back, pressing my attack I continue to clash against his saber before the force shows me an opening in his guard. Capitalizing, I swing my sabers around slice straight through his saber's hilt, sending the weapon flying out of his hands in pieces.

Bringing my lightsabers up to arm level pointed at Malgus I prepare to end him if need be. "It's over Darth Malgus-" I start before the force warns me of a threat.

Whirling around I see the last Sith Guardsman stabbing towards me before feeling a burning sensation on the side of my chest. Ignoring the pain, I swing my lightsabers in an arc, decapacitating the Sith even as his saber burns into the side of my chest before finally deactivating.

The pain forces me to fall to my knees biting back tears, before I am sent flying across the hangar. The hangar wall rushes forward to meet me before everything goes dark.


"Rayeda! I yelled as I watched her slam into the hangar wall. Cutting down another sith with a spin of my saberstaff I turned back towards Rayeda and saw Malgus walking towards her prone body.

"Malgus!" I yelled as I covered the distance between myself and him within a second before sending him flying with a blast of force.

"I will finish what so many failed to do Revan, I will destroy you, no matter how long or what it takes!" Malgus growled after seeing me stalking towards him.

"You are finished Malgus! Your fleet and now your troops are in ruins!" I yelled at him gesturing to the corpses and firefights going on around us.

"They served their purpose of discovering your continued existence and soon your existence will be over forever!" Malgus declared before slamming his fists to the ground sending a electrical shockwave in my direction.

Dashing towards Rayeda, I grabbed her prone form and dashed out of the way just in time to escape the electrical shockwave. Looking back toward where Malgus had been, I just caught a glimpse of Malgus's personal Fury-class interceptor fly out of the hangar and soon after jump to light speed.

Sighing at this new threat to their secrecy, Revan carried Rayeda over to the back of the hangar where three of the newcomers were gathered just finishing off the last of the invading imperials. One of them, a jedi padawan by the looks of her saw the Barsen'thor and immediately rushed over to him, anxiety pulsing from her signature in the force.

Turning back he made his way to the smuggler and soldier of the newcomers. "We'll discuss recent events once we have taken care of our injured companions, help your friend over there out and follow me to the med bay." I said before heading for the exit out of the hangar as the three complied with my "Suggestion".


Well I hope you all enjoyed this especially long chapter. Tell me what you think and what I could have done better, I feel that some of the parts of the big fight scene could have been better but I just don't have the time to redo a lot of this, so sorry, I'll try to do better with fights next time but tell me what could have been changed and how, thanks!

One more thing, I'm getting tired of calling the New Jedi Order; "The New Jedi Order". So I would like a name for them, maybe they won't even be called jedi anymore or something, maybe they will revert back to being called; "Je'daii". Who knows, Please review and suggest names for the new order, thanks! Cya next chapter!