Hello everyone! I know this has been done a few times, but I truly hated how they all would turn out, so here's my attempt at it!
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Bella's POV- Forks
The ride was so silent. I felt terrible! I must have upset him. He had touched me though. Maybe I was just moving too fast for him. I tucked my hands under my legs and leant against the door, as far away from Edward possible. He noticed this of course.
He didn't do anything though, except lean away from me. Now we were both nearly falling out of the car. This was stupid. My newborn anger flared and I grabbed my leg. That hurt, I winced. Edward looked over with concern quickly before looking away again.
"What is your problem!?" I couldn't stop the question as it rolled off my tongue.
He didn't answer of course. Fine, I could be quiet too. As soon as we got home I stormed past the living room where Jasper, Emmett and Rosalie were and retreated to Alice's room. She wasn't here. I didn't care. I paced for a few moments. I didn't want to be here anymore. I couldn't pass the sleepover though, Alice could never forgive me. I sighed and pushed open the window.
Edward's POV- Forks
"What were you thinking?" Alice was roaring at me. From her mouth and her head. I was begging to hate my gift.
I shrugged. "Bella is young. She doesn't know what she wants."
"Is that what you're worried about then. That she doesn't like you the way you do?" I sensed she wanted to tell me something, the thing that she had been hiding. I nearly saw it when she covered it again. Alice sighed. "Work it out Edward. Before it's too late." Alice showed me a vision of hers then.
A young girl, dancing. Laughing at something a boy said. She leans up and kisses him, whispering to him "I love you."
I snarled. "What is this?" I ran my fingers through my hair to distract myself. Who was this boy?
"Bella will fall in love with someone else Edward." Alice grinned in triumph before turning on her heels and walking away.
Bella's POV- Forks
I absolutely loved the new balance being a vampire gave me. I jumped out of the window and landed softly on my heels. It was a long drop from the Cullen's home. Much higher than my one had been at Charlie's and Renee's. I felt a longing for my mother. I hardly ever depended on her, but she certainly had a better idea about boys. Sighing I took off the heels Alice had dressed me in and ran. I didn't really know where I was going. I just knew I wanted a few minutes in the fresh air.
I wondered whether Alice would be too mad if I dirtied her dress. I very much wanted to go hunting. I grimaced, she would definitely be mad. I kept running further than where w had hunted before. I caught the scent of a lovely meat-eater. I dared to investigate it. I wouldn't attack it. I just wanted to see what it was. Probably a mountain lion. I let my senses range out. I smelt the lovely earthen scent a forest had after it rained. I loved this smell. I wondered why there were never any perfumes based on this. I suppose human's would never smell the layers I could.
I finally found the scent again; the creature was fairly far away. I grinned and ran. I didn't bother about the dress as I felt it stretching and possibly ripping. I ran fast and hard, taking the chance to jump rather than step. I reached a ravine and didn't even stop as I leaped over. I stopped again to track the scent after I was further in this side of the forest.
I found the scent again, but there was something else. I wrinkled my nose. This scent reeked. I didn't much want to chase this meat-eater if his friends smelt like this. Laughing quickly I turned to head back the way I came.
There was some kind of padding though. I hadn't heard a sound like this before. I turned curiously. Then I screamed.
Something huge leapt out of the forest. It slammed into my side. I got out of the way barely and skidded along the ground crouched. I didn't want to fight. I wanted to run.
The creature that attacked me resembled a wolf. It looked, well, like a werewolf. I couldn't help myself when I laughed. How amusing it was that werewolves existed. I suppose I never really considered that I was a vampire. The creature attacking me stopped too.
If it was a werewolf, could it understand me? "Hello?"
The wolf tilted it's head before reeling on its back legs and snarling. I didn't move though. If he wanted to kill me he would have. The wolf paced back and forth, unsure. I decided it might be best if I assumed a defenceless position. I sat down on the floor and started drawing in the dirt bored. Well I wasn't really, I was extremely curious.
This wolf, it should have scared me. It was almost the size of a car, maybe bigger. I thought back to when it attacked me. Its fangs hadn't touched me but its claws had. That's when I felt the pain in my leg.
I drew in a breath, teeth gritted, and swung out my leg too look at it. I was stunned at first, nothing had ever been able to hurt me. But here it was. This wolf had cut into my leg. I was scared then. I got up immediately. The wolf wasn't anywhere to be seen. I turned to run. My leg wouldn't have any of that. I fell to the ground with a gasp.
I backed up a tree defenceless. I was going to die. I suddenly realised it. I had to want Edward somehow. There were beasts that could kill us. How could I get back?
It was too late though. The wolf returned now with another. A rusty coloured wolf to my shock he was even bigger than the other. The big one walked towards me. He didn't look like he wanted to attack me. What could I do? I could try to run again. I looked to my leg. Definitely not an option.
As I looked to my leg the wolf did too. He then shared a glance with the other wolf for a few moments before darting into the woods. The other wolf snarled and paced in front of me.
It wasn't long before I heard movement from the forest. Must be the other wolf. I turned to the ground. I didn't want to see my death again. "What are you doing here vampire?"
That was odd. Since when could wolves speak. I looked up and there he stood. Jacob Black.
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