Prompt 9
Thing A - Equestria at War
Thing B - Mechs & Robots

(One day I may have fun with AU stuffs. But for now here's a prompt taking place in the Alternate Universe of Equestria where War exists. For this prompt, Events of Season 6, 7, and 8 won't exist, but the Season 8 Villain will.)


I've awakened with minor pains on my sides and back, finishing my sleep. It has been three months since I was prisoned after a simple misunderstanding, right upon my arrival to Equestria where it has Giant Mechs piloted by the Mane Six. Found guilty for the accident they won't believe, and sentenced to be stuck forever in a cell inside Tartarus.

I was visited weekly by the Royalties, getting information out of me while I was being honest. They refused to buy what I told, and after my repeated honesty one of their leader, Princess Celestia, used a Memory spell to drag out as much information. This repeated each week after I tried to be honest. They even bought forth the Mane Six, Applejack knowing if I'm lying, which doesn't work in their eyes. Even this Purple Alicorn's memory spell finds the same.

I got up and crossed my legs, and my arms. Meditating on something else involving the path to freedom. I kept my mind on persistance, refusing to give up on hope.

I can see farther, a large door to tartarus opens, revealing three incoming guests. The ponies in gold armor wielding spears. It took only a few minutes until they reach my cage. I stay put with arms crossed and legs crossed, waiting to see what they will do.

I watch it open the cage with their magical levitation.

"Human." the Stallion in Armor says, "In the name of Princess Glow, you are to be sentenced to Death Immediately." and I then find myself binded by levitation, legs and arms spread out. One guard from left goes to middle position with spear raised, aimed for my head and preparing to thrust it into my head. I continue to struggle even though my arms are never strong against magical levitation, desperate on not giving up and desperate on my persistence.

But my death never came. Black bug-like horse came and delivered a fierce bite to the attacker. Blood squirts out as the executioner screamed in pain. It flies, dragging the attacker back and the other two turned around to find lasers coming to them. Green lasers shot out and the Guard puts out a barrier to block it. That however gets shattered when the other Bug pony thrusted the blade, shattering the magic barrier like broken glass.

"CHANGELINGS!" the last Guard Mare shouted, before picking up the spear via levitation, preparing to charge, but then the tall bug pony kicked it into the air, before flying up and using the hind legs to grapple that Target. I turned my head away when I hear a sound of fleshy ripping. Wow, that was Brutal. I turned back to see those Changeling things they called salute.

"Open all the Cages. We shall deliver a diversion." it say, which I assume would be female. It turned to look at me, and it looks shocked, "A skinny ape in tartarus? Now why would they put you there?"

"I'm a Human." I answered, "And it's because they won't listen a word I say." I crawled out of the cage and stand up, "Still, I wonder what they mean Princess Glow. Isn't Celestia in charge of this stupid land?"

"You have missed it then. Celestia was assassinated." she said, "I am Queen Chrysalis, mother of the Hive, and we are part of the Anti-Equus Alliance, swore to bring down the Bigoted Brat that is Princess Glow."

"Wait, you're referring to Cozy Glow, right?" I answered, "I do remember almost landing on her when I arrived."

"Your highness!" one Changeling guard comes in. It looks buffy and has multiple small eyes, and top jaws razor, spiky, pointy, "Equestrian Mechs approaching from the South."

"Then it's time for us to leave." Queen Chrysalis said, and turned her attention to me, "You will come with us. Equestria is no place for non-Ponies like you and us. The law has already passed to forbid all non-humans from entry."

I turn to the guard, "Isn't there a Pony Mech I can Use for now?" I asked, "I have experience in piloting various mechs thanks to school."

"Yes, but don't get too excited." he said, "It's only fit for rookies."

"It will do for now." Chrysalis said, "Now let's go."

We march our way out to the gate of Tartarus, but I turned my head to the left to see another Mech. It looks like those Super Robots from Japan.

"Wait a minute. I recognized this one." I said, running to the multi-colored robot. Legs are blue and yellow, Red Chest and Helmet, and a sheathed sword. It is indeed from one of my childhoods. A Mega Thunderzord.

"A Super Robot?" Queen Chrysalis said, "How it get inside Equestria?" ignoring the question I jumped inside the Super Robot. The Cockpit has changed however, being the same as other Military Mecha series. I turned it on and started feeling myself being pulled as I get the Super Robot onto its feet.

"Wow, almost like in the Power Rangers show."

"Can you get it up to speed?" Queen Chrysalis asked, "We'll meet you outside with our Mechs."

"Yes ma'am. Take your time though." I said before making good use of my mech piloting skills. I walk it to the large door, using the mechanical hands to keep the door from closing, while seeing dark grayish mechs rising. The legs are thin, but good enough to keep it standing. The mechs that are menacing with bug-like heads and body having small razor blades.

Then there are the four-legged mechs, ressembling a pony. It opens the hatch for the cannons. It started firing lasers.

"Retaliate! Now!" ordered the Queem and the four jumps into the air, before opening their guns as well. Green plasmic lasers fired from the mecha-sized muzzles, those Pony Mechs did not last long. More comes and I let them engage in space combat, while one on the bottom comes galloping torwards me. Yellow armored onto the Purple, the gun-like forming a beam lance.

"I will kill all non-ponies!" It sounds like Twilight, and she doesn't look happy. I managed to dodge with a single jump, before it turns around and opens the jet wings. Using the Thunder Saber just unsheathed, swinging it diagonally upwards to right as that mech of hers charges right for me again. It bounced her into the air and to the rocky walls. I do the pose to light up my thunder saber, before launching cutter-shaped projectiles. One hit is enough before it flies away.

"You have caused too much trouble! I will never forgive you all!" I watched the horn glow up, preparing to fire a destructive beam. One fire and I use my Thunder Saber to parry that move. Laser Sparks flow as I did so, and with a push of my saber sends the destructive beam away. A warning siren chimes in my cockpit, I turned around to see an enemy pony mech that dashed to my behind, which angers me that this thing is something I hate. I swung my Thunder Saber and cut the Pony Mech's head off, before both of those explode. "You really are Cold-blooded!" shouted Twilight, "Have you no shame?!"

"Shame?" I said as I charge up for a Thunder Fireball attack, "I consider this a Payback for all the Hell you put me through. It's your own fault for refusing my honest words and honest memories."

"You evil human!" shouted the Alicorn Pilot as I fired one, which forced her to put up a Magic Barrier, smoke comes out to see her mech unharmed from my attack, "In the name of all that's Harmony, I will eradicate all the Humans!"

"Harmony through Genocide?" I said with sigh, "Words from a Zealous Templar Knight, wanting absolute justice by destruction."

That angered her, and she's about to prepare another beam as she let out a roar, and Just when I'm preparing another Thunder Fireball Attack to counter that, yellow rapid beams comes out from the sky. I look up to find a Dark Grayish-Blue Space Carrier flying.

"Too late for that, Element of Magic." said Queen Chrysalis, as she and her colts flies into wall formation. "You there, what is your name?" and she points at me.

"Dirk. Dirk Keikoku." I introduced,

"Dirk Keikoku. You have proven to shown potention of a Soldier." Queen Chrysalis said, "I hereby make you a new honorable member of the Changeling Swarm." and looks like this just happened. I am now part of Enemy Faction hated by Equestria who also hated me.

The Space Carrier lowers for the Hangar Hatch to open, and one by one the Changeling Mechs jump in before I go in last. When I came in, I wasn't expecting other Super Robots like this one. Only two, but I was told there are Super Robots outside Equestria, ones disliked by Princess Glow. Either way, I am ready to take on Equestria's mechanical army. I'm Dirk Keikoku, soldier for the Changeling Swarm, and for the Anti-Equestrian Alliance. Let's see them Ponies try to kill me.

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Reading Level: 11-12th Grade

I write like: Agatha Christie (Third time I analyzed it)