Chapter Ate The Serimmony 1
STOP REVOFIGN BAD! but than u JASZpAW for tehh godo revewis uve ben levving (Oh yes, thank you Jazzpaw!)

StarPaw skided into de Camp. "FIRSTAR" SHE YOWLED "I ha to tel; uo somesting?"

("Fuck off Starpaw, I'm busy... with Lakepaw, of course.)

"nut ow StarOaw" he sadi "yuve gut to become WARRIOR!' (I totally called it.)

"MOGOSH REALLY creamed StarPaw. (Really did NOT need that image in my mind.)

YEAH SAID firestar "Youv been a war for onll 3.14 dayss butt u are the best apent ice in the cAlan. Ur perfect. We ndd you to help dfeat BlackStar and ShadowclaN. And all teh other calns. Tehy are tyring 2 attack us were in the meddle of a warr. "

"omgosh WE ARE?" scremmed StarPal she sus so surpissed! (Nope. Shadowclan invading the camp every five minutes is just training for incase we actually have a war.)

"Ya DustPelt did while U were away in your walk Rivrclan attacked us." Said SandTrom. She locked sortaf sad she New FireStart lovved Stargleam. But it wass ok she newt wht wus best. (Waitwaitwaitwait... Sandstorm was only sorta sad that Firestar loved Starpaw? And she definitely didn't give a shit wen Dustpelt died!)

"OMGoht" sid StarPaw. "Quickk mack me a warrror!"

("Fuck you bitch go back to the nursery.")
"Oak" said Firestar. (Oak!) He wlaked up to StarPaw. "aLL Cats Gather Round Who Are Older To Cach There One Prey!"

"Tday we are making a new Warrior."

The calnn GASPED! ("That bastard?")

"SarkPaw! StarPaw!: shouted the clan. ("We're going on strike!") They all new infancy it was she whom was beng mad a warrior.

Starpaw was so exited! She'd never bin so hap inner life! (What about when you were out with Firestar?)

"StarPaw….." said FirePaw. He was simile like shed never sent him simle behfore. "Are you ready to become a Warrior in the Name of Starcaln?:"

"Yes!" she shock3d.

"oak." Eh sad. (Oak.) "Then by the powers of Starclan, I gave you this narme. From now on, you will be none as StarPaw for your pel which sings like the starss and ur conectin 2 StarClann. We onner you'r bravvery and" " kindness." (STARPAW! I absolutely LOVE your new warrior name! And also your pelt that sings like the stars!)

"SarkPaw! StarPaw!: shouted the clan. They

StarGleam girned. She wass a Warrior! At least!" (She was an apprentice for 5.14 days, she can't say 'at last.')

"FireScar," she said, cuming over 2 him. (Oh good fucking god.) "I wanna tell u somesing." They locked sirously at him.

"yeah wat is it?" he sad, hop shinning in his eayres.

Dos he knew? StarGlema think.

"Firestar…." She brethed. She cullednt she was actually dong this after so lung.

"I….."

WINDCLAN ATTAK! Shioted a voise from obove the Camp.

It was…. (Onestar?)

HOLYLEAF! (Oh, darn! I got it wrong.)

I workd reall' herd on dis chapter n tired 2 spell good so plzz review NICE!
(YOU HEARD THE LADY, REVIEW NICE! *gets out blow torch*)