this is basically the same chapter i posted last... just with more detail I am deleting the old version of chapter 8/9 and posting this in its place... chapter 9 is going to be posed very soon after this (and i mean it this time)
Chapter 8
Tobias POV: The Proposal
Tobias POV: later that night after lunch, time for dinner
I was shaking. Like ligitly shaking. Tonight was the night that I would finally continue my life, like a real man should.
"Hey Tri-" I stopped short when I looked up to find my devastatingly beautiful girlfriend soon to be (hopefully) fiancé in front of me. She was in a knee length black dress, her hair done in a complex looking up do. She kept it light on the makeup though, and I appreciated that.
"Do I look that bad?!" She exclaimed nervously blushing and I was still at a loss for words. it felt like I was in a daze and all I could feel was love towards this girl in front of me.
"Oh-um-I uh... You look hot." I scolded myself for not telling her more, but I don't think I could do that, because there were no words to describe her. She blushed and smiled and I took her hand in mine, leading her down the long corridor.
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"So Tris are you enjoying things so far?" I murmured close to her ear. We were sitting in a restaurant, at a booth table. Both of us were on the same side and were very close together.
"Well Tobiassss" she paused and trailed off, slowly dragging out the S in my name. "It's all very lovely but... I am wondering: why the fancy dinner?"
"Well Tris that's a great question, and I have my own question to answer you with." I bent onto one knee and smiled at her while taking a deep breath. "Tris.. The love of my life and my saving grace, will you... You know.. Like marry me?" I was suddenly at a loss of words, the whole speech I had prepared in my head was gone, when I looked up and saw her face. She tipped her head thoughtfully, and smiled at me.
"Well Tobias I think that might work, but I might need to talk to my other boyfriends first." My face went pale and my smile dropped. A million thoughts racing through my head at once. boyfriends!?
"Wha?" Thats all i could utter in complete shock.
"I'm joking, I'm joking!" She jumped into my arm and I spun her around in a tight hug. I felt her soft lips by my ear, kissing me once and then a sweet whisper.
"Thank you for keeping it simple."
"I wanted to keep our abegnation roots in tack." I murmured to her and then kissed her face repeatedly. Over and over, completely numb to anything else around me.
thank you for reading and i am very sorry that its been a while! I will defiantly start posting more often. comment any spelling/grammar/comments down below and i will answer them in the top of the next chapter
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