Ok the chapter has a lot of teasing so just to clarify mmmmm translates to moaning comes up a lot and I thought I would make that part very clear
Previously
Eddie: you are going to be the death of me
Loren:I told you that's the plan
Loren turned to leave when Eddie said
Eddie: and Loren
Loren: yeah
Eddie: Game on!
Now
Mel walks up and interrupts the conversation
Mel: Loren I have more clothes and where's Eddie I have to kill him
Loren looks in the dressing room and sees Eddie shake his head no. Loren is thinking if he wants a game his got one. Eddie is hiding behind the door Loren puts her hand on his chest inside his T-shirt knowing Mel can't see anything because her shoulder still behind the door anyway
Loren slow gliding her fingertips over Eddie's chest she is close enough to his breathing speed up but Mel can't she continues to caress his chest and abs while talking to Mel she trying her best not to laugh at Eddie's expression and thinks to herself he is horrible at not moaning I hope he does Mel's would hear and know where he is and kill him and that would be funny to see
Loren: why do you want to kill him?
Mel: because he sat the clothes I told him to try on there and disappeared
Loren: oh
Mel: so do you know where he is
Loren still caressing his chest: no
Eddie lets out another moan a little louder this time
Mel: did you hear something?
Loren: No. maybe Eddie went to the men's dressing rooms
Mel: maybe… are you okay your face is bright red
Loren: I'm fine must be the physical activity of changing clothes
Mel: ok
Mel went to leave when she remembered she had to ask Loren about last night
Mel smirking: so how was last night?
Loren smirking: I don't know what you're talking about
Mel: so you and Eddie didn't sleep together
Loren blushes because eddies listening: can we talk about this later
Mel: if you promise to give me every single detail
Loren: I will now go look for Eddie
Mel turned to look for Eddie
Eddie pulled Loren back into the dressing room and pushed her against the door
Eddie and Loren start another smoking hot make out session
Person: are you alright sweetie
Loren pulls away from Eddie but Eddie traps her against the door and continues to slowly kissing her neck knowing it will drive her crazy why she has to keep up an actual conversation without moaning or reacting
Loren: mom I'm a fine …mm mm I will be out in a… mm minute
Nora: are you sure you ok sweetie you voice seems a little shaky
Loren: I told you mom I'm fine
Nora: ok sweetie just hurry up we have other shops to visit
Loren:…
Nora: Loren?
Loren: I will be mmmm as quick as I can
Loren listens to hear Nora's footsteps when she thinks the coast is clear she pushes Eddie away
Loren: you do realise if my mom found out you were in here she wouldn't have left us alone in a room every again I by the way your face is bright red
Eddie giggled: must be all the physical activity …. From changing of course and (putting his hands on her waist) your mom trusts me so it isn't anything to worry about
Loren: I'm starting to think my mom shouldn't trust you at all but think of this from her point of view if she caught us she would find her 18 year old daughter in a changing room if her 22 year old boyfriend
Eddie: I see your point
Loren: I'm going for real this time
Eddie: I don't want to go out there Mel wants to kill me
Loren: is Eddie scared?
Eddie: yes no offense but you best friend is terrifying
Loren laughs: just try on the clothes before she finds and you will be good
She turns taking the tops she wants to buy with her
Eddie takes the clothes out of her hands and runs to the cash register knowing Loren wouldn't let him buy her anything but he's was still determined to pay for these clothes Eddie gets to the cash register first but Loren was very close behind him Eddie handed the sales guy his platinum card and the tops Loren get her card and the sales guy just stares at both of them
Eddie: Loren let me buy you a few tops
Loren: Eddie I can pay for them my self
Sales guy: your. You're ...Loren Tate and your Eddie Duran
Eddie puts his hand out to the sales guy shakes it
Eddie: and you are?
Sales guy: Liam
Loren: it's nice to meet you Liam.
Eddie: well Liam I'm paying for this
Loren: no I'm paying for this
Eddie: no I'm paying for this
Loren: no I'm paying for this
Eddie: no I'm paying for this
Liam: why don't you just half the price
Loren and Eddie look at the sales guy and think over his idea
Loren: no I'm paying for this
Eddie: no I'm paying for this
Loren: no I'm paying for this
Eddie: how about I pay for these and you can pay for my clothes?
Loren: deal now pay and go try stuff on
Eddie pays for Loren's new tops Loren goes into a dressing room to put one of the tops on and her sunglasses so people won't recognises her she goes to Eddie's dressing room to see what she getting him
Loren: three tops Eddie really you bought me like 12
Eddie: and a pair of jeans. Nice glasses by the way
Loren: thank you. Now go get more clothes
Mel: did someone say more clothes
Max: I hate to complain actually I'm afraid to complain after what Mel threatened but can't we get out of here if been in this one store for over 45 minutes
Nora: you think that's bad Mel had me and Loren in Zara for 2 hours
Eddie: 2 hours
Loren: 2hours and 13 minutes actually
Mel: that was just the best day you look so good Loren the top is matching the dark shades I approve but you (pointing at Eddie) didn't try any of those clothes on
Eddie: I did I'm going to go buy them now
Mel: ok I will let you off the hook this time Duran
Loren and Eddie walk to the till so Loren can pay for Eddie's tops after that Eddie changes his clothes and the puts on the glasses
Max: so we can leave now
Mel: yes we can go
Eddie: get me a new phone
The go to the apple store
Max: why don't they sell pears here?
Everyone laughs at max
Mel: very funny
Max whispers to Nora
Max whispering: I was being serious
Nora: I explain later
Mel and Adam go over to the genius bar so Adam can prove he's smarter than them Nora is playing with an iPad while trying to explain to max the apple and pear thing while Eddie and Loren are looking at phones
Loren: this one is blue like you last phone
Eddie: I guess that one will do
Loren: I guess for someone who was super happy to get a phone you don't seem all that happy
Eddie: I don't like iPhones
Loren laughs: me either but it is just a phone to keep you going until we get home
Eddie gets the phone and everybody leaves
Mel: is it any good
Eddie: I have twitter I'm fine
Mel drags everyone to at least 70 more shops right now there in guess
Nora: so much for lunch it almost 6
Mel: how about us girls get really nice dresses and the guys get really nice suits and we go have a really nice dinner instead
Eddie: I like that idea
Adam: so do we split up or wait
Mel: probably quicker to split up but I don't know if I trust you boys by yourself
Eddie: we will be fine
Nora: so where are we eating now
Eddie: I had a reservation for Del Posto I could change it to 8:00 the dress code started at six so be careful they are really strict on it
Mel: well go then we have more shopping to do and were getting ready in Loren's room so find somewhere else to change
The guys leave the Mel had to pull Loren away from Eddie. The girls went to a few shops and found the perfect dresses the boys found different things max went with a suit without tie. Eddie got dark blue jeans a black shirt and a bomber jacket with leather sleeves (I'm bad at outfits I could describe the girls and I had no idea what Adam would wear so I will leave that to you imagination)
Loren's room (the girls are getting ready)
Mel was doing Loren's make up and Nora was doing Loren's hair.
Loren: shouldn't you be getting yourselves ready
Mel: look at me I'm ready so is Nora
Loren: and you two look beautiful but I can do my own hair and make up
Mel: yes you can but we can do it better and think of it this way every time I have done your hair or make up and choose your clothes Eddie has noticed you Eddie's concert the contest. Shall I continue?
Loren: no but speaking of clothes are you sure this dress is ok
Mel: is beautiful
Nora: it is Lorenand your hairs done
Loren: ooh can I see
Mel: no not until I have finished your make up
Loren: are you almost finished the guys will be here in like 10 minutes
Max's room (the guys are ready and just talking)
Max: so Eddie what happened?
Eddie: can we leave it till later I don't what to start telling the story without finishing it
Adam: we should probably go or will be late
Then Max's phone beeped it was a text from Loren
Loren-italic'sMax- bold
Hey Max I wanted to do something for Eddie like a welcome back thing and I was wondering if you had Eddie's friend Ian's number
Yeah its 555-068-789. Are you thinking party or a dinner or something because if it is a party I could invite some of Eddie's friends from high school
I was thinking a dinner type thing if it was a party he would have to tell what happened do a lot of people but if you think a party would be better we could do that
No a dinner is fine I think that would be really good
Eddie, Adam and Max arrive at Loren and Eddie's room
Eddie, Adam, Max: you look beautiful
Eddie: you all look beautiful
Loren: you don't look too bad yourself
Mel: I will agree with Loren on that one you three look acceptable
Nora: shall we go
Everyone pairs off Mel & Adam Loren & Eddie Nora & Max as the walk to the limo they arrive at the restaurant to see paparazzi waiting
In the limo
Eddie: someone from the restaurant must have tipped off the press that we were coming here
Nora: we could go somewhere else
Max: we can't let them control where you go and don't go
The get out of the limo the paparazzi takes picture of all of them but focuses on Loren and Eddie
Loren: can we run for cover or do we have to stop and pose
Eddie: I would prefer to run but Jake and Kelly would kill us for no taking advantage of the situation Eddie says the last part sarcastically
Loren: they never have to know
Eddie: yeah good point let's run
Loren and Eddie started to run to the restaurant but the paparazzi still asked Loren and Eddie questions
Pap 1: Can we have a kiss for the camera?
Pap 2: Are there any wedding plans in the future for you two?
Pap 3: is it true that Chloe might have something to do with your mom's accident Eddie
I'm so so so so sorry that it's taking me this long to update this chapter need some drama and I could figure out what it came to me eventually
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