Untold Lies Chapter 9: Fake Identities

Sorry for the long wait, minor technical difficulties have occurred. Oh well, what can you do? Anyway, here is the story. I would like to know if there are any mistakes like spelling or grammatical errors... I have found some in the past. (For AwesomeCoolPerson- Arrowhead can go outside his dreams and into others. Kind of what Starclan does...slight difference though. He can break into others dreams.)


The four cats sat in front of the path that Zee had taken when she brought Horn. The moon was directly overhead, but half of it was covered in darkness. Arrowhead told his mother and his friends everything he saw and did. Rim was amazed that Arrowhead could Dreamwalk. Arrowhead had the perfect plan to get into the mountain fortress. "Are you sure this is going to work?" Thundertail asked.

"If we do this right, then yes." Arrowhead answered.

"Why can't we just fight our way through?" Lilystorm complained.

"There are way to many cats, even for you." Arrowhead replied sternly.

"Just stick with the plan? That shouldn't be too hard." Lightheart said.

Arrowhead nodded, "Remember that when we get there, don't look surprised. Be ashamed instead." They nodded and followed Arrowhead into the maze. good thing I memorized this place He led his friends through the maze and they stopped in front of five guards, guarding the entrance.

The guards looked bewildered to find that four cats had made it through the maze. "Who are you?" One of them asked.

Arrowhead looked at Lightheart and bluntly said, "Sloppy." He turned back to the guards who were staring at them. "We were sent by Streak to see how Zee was handling this place. Where is she, we need to speak to her, immediately." The guards stared at the cats in shock.

"Now would be nice!" Lilystorm rushed. They scrambled away from their posts and ran to get Zee. The four cats walked through the entrance and were secretly amazed at how large and fortified this place was.

The guards returned with Zee leading them. "Who are you? What are you doing here?" She growled.

Thundertail answered, "Streak sent us. We are checking on you and how our special prisoner is."

"He's fine and we're fine. Now leave." She hissed.

"My friend here forgot to mention that we can't leave until we get this place well guarded." Lightheart said.

She looked stunned as she repeated, "Well guarded?" She paused for a moment and then exploded in anger. "I do a great job leading these cats! Who are you to march into my fortress and start giving orders!"

"We didn't say our names? Sorry." Lightheart said, trying to calm her down. "I'm... Bruise." He pointed his tail to Lilystorm. "Snow." He looked at Thundertail. "That's Crow. And that's Spot." He finished as his gaze landed on Arrowhead. "Happy now?" He asked turning back to Zee.

Zee growled and was not convinced. "Why did Streak send you? Does he not trust me?"

"He trusts you, just...he has his doubts about whether you could accomplish your responsibilities alone. He thought you could use some help from...professionals." Lilystorm answered.

"How would you know what to do?" Zee asked angrily.

"Well...for starters. You didn't order the front guards to attack and kill on sight. That was mistake one. Two: you have too many cats on guard at the moment. You need to divide the shifts up evenly so cats can rest. Third and most important: Have four shift changes guarding high valued prisoners." Lilystorm instructed. "I would go on, but you failed the first three already."

Zee didn't know what to feel. Grateful? Furious? Jealous? She unleashed all of her emotions at the same time. "Fine! Do your mouse-brained instructions and then leave!" She hissed as she vanished into the shadows of the mountain cave.

Her cats watched her disappear, but snapped back to reality as they heard Lilystorm's yowl. "I want all of you flea-bitten, mouse-brains to line up!" They did exactly what she wanted. One by one they lined up. "Now I know I'm a new face to all of you." She spoke with authority. "But let's get one thing clear. I'm. In. Charge!" Lilystorm's gaze fell on two of Zee's guards. They were terrified of this she-cat. "You two will be up there," Lilystorm pointed her tail to a small cliff that over looked the maze. "I don't want any cat to find us." They tripped over each other as they scrambled away from her. Lilystorm felt proud as she watched them run, though she didn't show it. She turned back to the rest of them. "I'll be assigning who's on what shift and where. There will be no back talking to me, no questioning where I put you all on guard, and final, absolutely no cat enters the area! Any questions?" They all looked at her in fear. No one dared to say a word. "Good. Let's begin."


I could not resist letting Lilystorm take command. Her personnality fitted it perfectly! This chapter was one of my favorites to make.