Sorry for the long hiatus! I've had writer's block forever! Quick question! Would you guys like to see a rewritten/better version of this? I feel like my writing has improved and I could make this story better. What do you guys think?

Sorry for the long hiatus! I've had writer's block forever! Quick question! Would you guys like to see a rewritten/better version of this? I feel like my writing has improved and I could make this story better. What do you guys think?
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