This fan fiction is a hurt/comfort love story between naruto and hinata. The story starts at the time period of around when he is 12. Lemons maybe in later chapters, don't worry I will have warnings… naru/hina in later chapters. In this chapter I am most likely going to go into detail about Naruto's training in hell and him coming out of it.
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Back from hell!!
So you think you are ready for this hmmm? Well I won't doubt you boy… I believe you have great expectations for the future… and I will do anything but stand in your way… the great mortal fox said as he walked towards the bright room. Once you go in there will be no coming in nor out of it until the element has been successfully gained… do you understand?
"I am ready damned fox stop pressuring me! I think I'm going to have fun in this lil room" Naruto said as he contemplated on getting to destroy army's of foul demons from the underworld.
Hehehe… as optimistic as always I presume… well without further ado I will take my leave… as soon as you enter that room the doors will be sealed and escape will be impossible. The mortal version of the fox said as he vanished into smoke.
"Damn… where's that baka gone? I seriously hate it when people just disappear like that… so rude… damn people why don't you show your true body's once in a while!!" Naruto screamed but then looked a little stupid as he realized that he makes clones as a fighting style and that he hardly never fights with his real body.
Naruto approached the door and pulled the handle of the mysteriously glowing door, Naruto opened the door slowly as he adjusted to the light of the room. He stepped inside the 'coliseum' as it were and noticed the bystanders watching from the platforms above. He noticed many a foul demon looking at the boy whispering stuff and looking rather shocked. All of a sudden a giant booming voice shouted out…
Quite!!! In my coliseum! Yes this is the boy that you all speak of… he is here today to master the element of darkness… and why should I not exploit this battle for my minions to watch? Enjoy as I set some of my weaker demons in first just to try out this little morsels strength shall we?
Naruto looked up and noticed the mortal kyuubi no-kitsune. The demon fox sat down on a royal throne as a rather pretty looking demon (as pretty looking as demons go…) started to cool him down with a fan.
"Oi!! Damned fox! I am not a morsel!" Naruto exclaimed as he was obviously hurt by the phrase.
My apologies young pup…
A few of the demons in the audience seemed to snicker at something as Naruto just ignored it thinking they were laughing at the fox being shouted at.
"Don't sweat it fox… now let me smash some demon skulls!" Naruto said as he jumped punching the air with his fist.
At that moment about a 100 small demon like creatures scurried into the room. They were no bigger than a microwave. Naruto just burst out laughing at the demons as hey swarmed into the room.
"So I have to fight a bunch of little bittie bugs? Man I am gonna squash these like ants!" Naruto said as he jumped into the air making 20 shadow clones.
The Naruto clones all used the same hand signs as spirals of earth flew from the ground impaling there respected targets. This all happened in a matter of 5 seconds as the Naruto clones vanished into smoke and the real Naruto floated gently to the ground.
Well it seems that was a little too easy… I mean Maikuro Konchuu's (micro bugs) aren't the strongest of underworld demons… so I guess next round!
A bunch of thrall like / goblin like / tribalish creatures hopped out into the room fully equipped with wooden spears and bamboo chest plates.
"Like bamboo will stop rasengan… and come on it will help out my fire jutsus…" Naruto said laughing once more at the gimpy little midgets approaching him.
You don't have fire jutsus yet… we still have to master the pyro sages training…
"Shut up damned fox! I was trying to make the demons feel weak! Now there just confused!" Naruto said as he started to dodge the spears being thrown at him from all angles.
Whatever… I don't care… continue the fight…
Naruto used an earth wall jutsu and made his very own tower like spiral that he stood atop of. He quickly made water appear at the palms of his hands and squirted water down below.
Man the water looks like he's sweating out of his palms… hey kid! You look like a computer geek that just saw a girl for the first time in 5 years…
The fox laughed manically as Naruto unusually took it with good humor.
"What's a computer?" Naruto said dumbfounded as he looked at the fox for an answer.
Shit… err never mind… in the world of Naruto there are TV's, speakers, c.v cameras and even robots… but we don't have p.c's… never mind the phrase…
"Ehhh? World of Naruto?" Naruto said even more confused.
Ehhh… never mind… damned lazy creators… can't be bothered to come up for a more appropriate name for an anime than the name of a character… the fox thought the last part to itself as it didn't want to be question further of the flaws of his world and all the plot holes…
Naruto, not bothered with all these weird phrases and ignored the fox and all he had said and turned the water on the floor to ice. The creatures inside frozen solid.
"And if I do this…" Naruto said as he swished his hand together as all the bodies in the ice suddenly imploded in on themselves as the ice crushed their bones to nothing.
"Hahaha! From here I can just keep on throwing ice attacks at my opponents until the dark chakra is mine…" Naruto said smugly as he grinned a cheesy grin at the mortal fox.
Well… I think some you will find that they will be able to get you up there and then there will be no safe place to hide…
"We will see fox… remember you didn't see all of my toad sage training now did you?" Naruto said as his grin surprisingly got bigger.
Well no I didn't… I guess I will have to see now wont I? Bring in the next lot of so called demons!
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One week later west of whirlpool village
4 girls were in a spa on a mission as they were relaxing from a hard day's work of protecting their client. Hinata, Sakura, Tenten and their client Kushana (Kushana not Kushina so no... this is not Naruto's mum) were all soaking up in the spa west of whirlpool village. It was all fairly silent until Hinata spoke up.
I.. I wonder if Naruto-kun is alright… it's been 7 months 0 weeks and 1 day since he left… not that I am obsessed and been counting!" she quickly said as she blushed crimson and tried to hide her face as far as it would go under the water without covering her nose.
All the girls laughed at her outburst. "Its ok Hinata-Chan it will be fine… Naruto will return to us and he will have plenty of stories to tell us… and plenty of new moves to show us too!... but… I bet he will be the same hyper nutcase ninja we all befriended…" Sakura said as her head hung and she sweat dropped saying the last part.
"So who is this Naruto you speak of? He sounds quite important to me" Kushana said as she looked at Sakura with a questioning look.
"well are generation is famous as the konoha 12… the number 1 most successful ninja from our era… not to blow my own horn or anything… and Naruto was one of us… he left one day because he was abused by the villagers he laid his life down to protect… not all hate him… but the majority do. He also left because I was a little… angry you could say…" Sakura said as she looked down into the water as she was trying not to look too sad.
"No… It wasn't your fault… it was those bastard villagers… they should be sick with their selves… but they just seem to celebrate Naruto leaving… it sickens me!" Tenten said as she instantly looked pissed.
"Is that the only reason he left?" Kushana said as she doubted that a ninja would just leave his village because he was bullied into leaving.
"No… you see Naruto's mind was set on being Hokage… so he can protect his precious people. And he left to train to become strong!" Sakura said as she looked thoughtful for a minute.
"Well that I can understand… I thought he left just because he was bullied into it…" Kushana said as she admired the name. "Naruto Uzumaki…" she thought to herself…
"So what is he training? Where is he training? How strong is he?" Kushina said as she watched the others look at her then look down simultaneously to the floor of the water.
"last we heard he had mastered the toad sage… and we don't know who he is training from now… we saw him once… he was training with this hillbilly… and that was the last we saw of him… and by all we know he is probably as strong as his sannin sensei…" Hinata said as she looked proud for a minute then sad again.
Kushana's face resembled shock and disbelieve. "S..So he has mastered a sage already? He's already as strong as a sannin?" Kushana's face dropped as the girls nodded in response.
"Hey Kushana what's up with your tattoo?" Sakura said as she pointed to a strange tattoo on Kushana's right thigh. the tattoo resembled a fire symbol. (Think the fire emblem off of avatar… and if you can't just think of a flame…)
"Err… oh that no it's nothing… I did it one day as a spur of the moment thing. My err... boyfriend thought it was kinky…: Kushana said as she blinked then blushed at what she had just said.
All the other girls in the ninja squad blushed a beet red before looking away uncomfortably.
"I do hope Naruto is fine and happy… I'd hate to think he would be abused any further…" Hinata said as she started to fight back tears.
Sakura saw this and quickly rushed into an embrace to let her cry on her shoulders. "Don't worry Hinata-Chan, I am sure Naruto-kun is sitting down to a nice meal of ramen like he always does."
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Meanwhile in hell…
Naruto had just been thwacked by a giant club as 3 giant ogres like beings twice the size of an average house wobbled towards him. He landed on a column of earth he had created to keep the smaller demons away from him.
"Damn it… these ogres's are pretty strong… I misjudged the behemoths…" Naruto said as he rubbed his back where the giant beast had hit him.
"Well it looks like I will have to take one down at a time…" Naruto said as he followed his words with some hand signs. "Earth cripple no-jutsu!" Naruto shouted out as spikes from the earth raised up to their opponents. Some of the earth spirals snared them, others impaled them. Whatever their form they had a purpose to the battle.
The ogres cried out in pain as the earth pierced the skin and continued to travel as far as they could. Some of the spirals went all the way through to the other side and twisted around again to stab them from the other end as well, others went in and out again hitting a different point.
All 3 of the giant ogres fell to the floor as their blood started to fill the room. Naruto escaped the wave of blood by jumping up on his half destroyed pillar he created earlier.
"Well Uzumaki Naruto is victorious yet again!" Naruto shouted as he lifted both his hands in the air in triumph. The crowd of demon on lookers either looked scared, interested, excited or gob smacked.
The crowd was a mumble of "the boy can beat ogres that easily?" and "the chosen one is already this strong?" of course Naruto didn't pay attention while he looked at Fana with an excited look on his face.
Well boy… how do you feel? Because you only have one more battle left until your training in hell will be at an end… besides jutsu training… Fana smirked widely behind his full helmet. Of course no one saw this.
"You mean…? If I beat this next round I get the darkness element?" Naruto said as his grin got wider and wider.
Yes boy… this next opponent will be very fearsome indeed… prepare yourself boy… my very own kit!!! Hahaha!! This will be interesting. Naruto Uzumaki vs. Gelbe! My first offspring!
Naruto's jaw dropped at the sentence. "So I have to fight a demon fox? Don't they have like almost infinite chakra and the power to destroy mountains with a swing of their tail? Are you crazy?!" Naruto yelled as things started to look desperate for him.
No… you see I have reached godhood. And you see that is where my god like chakra comes from. Just like my mate… she is also a god… I am the king of hell and she is queen. My son although being a prince but that does not make him a god yet… only when I am done with my control over hell then and only then shall he become a god too. But in saying that. Nobody dares mess with a Myobi. No matter if he is at god level or not.
"well I guess I can try and see how strong your son is… let us begin the battle of the century!" Naruto said this arms in the air… but his confidence wasn't to last as a miniature version of fana with green fur walked into the room. Twice the size of Naruto and great chakra radiating from the beast. It had four tails.
So you are the boy I am meant to fight? You hardly seem worth the effort to even get here… I mean a small morsel such as yourself belongs on a toothpick! The fox seemed to mean business as he slashed at where Naruto once was.
"Well I find your criticisms pathetic and childlike… but if you wish me to teach your ass some manners I got plenty of em in ma fist bitch!" Naruto shouted as he screamed and charged at the beast.
Gelbe slashed Naruto sending him back many feet and crashing him into a wall. Suddenly Naruto puffed into smoke.
Damn… shadow clone… this kid is prepared… I misjudged him
"behind you son of Fana!" the fox tried to turn around but Naruto had already slammed a level 5 rasengan into Gelbe's back, Gelbe went flying through the air and slammed into the wall of the coliseum sending a giant crack going up into the spectators stands.
Fana stood there pleased with Naruto's powers. Gelbe was frustrated that he could be taken off guard like that.
Well if you want me to get serious then I guess I have no choice… let's get it on pup…
Naruto grinned as he created mass shadow clones around himself. The clones circled the fox, the fox seemed to smile an evil smile.
Well let's see the limit of what you can do huh?
The fox suddenly leapt into the air and barked a sonic boom of sound towards Naruto.
All of Narutos clones vanished and Naruto lay on the floor twitching… the fox landed and was about to walk away when the supposed real Naruto vanished into smoke
Shit it was a clone too! How come it didn't disappear when I blasted it?
The fox's question went unanswered as Naruto trapped the fox in an earth coffin (think sand coffin except earth…)
Let me out human or you will be truly sorry! The fox yelled out in anger. Not appearing to be trying to escape
"Well I say why don't you make me fox?" Naruto chuckled as he looked at Fana. "Hey Fana can you announce me the winner so I don't have to kill your kit please?" Naruto continued as he was still chuckling trying hard not to turn it into a full force laugh.
Well I would like to but… he isn't done just yet… and plus you won't kill him because I will stop the blow that would kill him… you just get to injure him very much. The fox seemed to laugh at the fact that his kit was about to get pissed…
Right that's it! I have had it being controlled by a damned human!!
The earth coffin surrounding the fox suddenly glowed a blood red as pieces of earth flew everywhere, and there stood a very pissed looking demon fox.
"Oh… shit…" was all Naruto could utter before his body was sent flying through the air. The fox had made a chakra hand fly into the air and slam Naruto into the wall of the arena creating another giant crack going all the way to the bystander's platform.
This is as far as you get boy! This is as far as anyone will ever get again!
The fox's words of pure anger made Naruto laugh. Naruto created 200 clones that surrounded the entire arena. Some were on the walls, some were on the floor and others were on top of the demon fox.
"This is where it ends fox!" Naruto and all his clones activated the enhancement jutsu. At this point the enhancement jutsu allowed Naruto to perform up to 20% of his muscle strength. After activation all of his clones created a hollow cylinder of water all around the coliseum.
Oh so you plan on wetting my fur? Well let's just see then… hit me with what you got boy!
The fox said this recklessly and foolishly as he begun to laugh.
"Water to ice| torpedo no-jutsu!" Naruto exclaimed as giant shoots of water came from the cylinder like shape surrounding the arena. The water turned to ice as it flew. The fox screamed in agony as the shoots of ice hit him and stuck through him.
Ughhhhh… shit this hurts…
The fox began but quickly silenced in fear as a charging Naruto held a level 6 rasengan in his hand as he pushed it forward, escape was inevitable. But the kyuubi no-kitsune made a red barrier between the two.
Well done young Uzumaki...
Uzumaki!?!... Gelbe thought to himself as he looked at the young blond knucklehead in front of himself so this is Uzumaki Naruto I presume…
There is no shame in losing to him my kit… he is a great ninja… and a great warrior
Naruto blushed lightly as he giggled a little whilst rubbing the back of his head. "Hehehe! Stop it sensei your making me blush!" Naruto said as he giggled uncontrollably
Hehehe… so my son… we will need you one day when the time comes but no n… the fox demon couldn't finish his sentence as he felt great chakra being given off nearby…
The two fox demons and all the hellish demons watched as the final part of the dark element sunk into Naruto. "The power! It feels kick ass! Come on let me try this out!"
Calm yourself pup… there is a time and place for everything and to go around shooting your chakra around meaningless is not now.
"Fine… so does this mean we get to start on demon sage jutsu training!?!" Naruto said with a wide eyed, wide grinned expression while he leant forward hands clenched.
Yes… now is the time for jutsu training!
Naruto leapt into the air and did a 360 turn; while in mid air he did a punch to the air.
"Come on this is going to be soooo cool! So what do I learn first?
Well I was thinking ultimate shadow clone jutsu, or oni gyoushi no-jutsu… but I thought they could wait… you see the first thing I want you to learn is the shadow leap jutsu… it is perfect for sneaking around or outmaneuvering opponents.
"Yeah you told me a little about that earlier on in my training… it sounds awesome! Let's get to training!
The fox and the boy left the room as the creatures and demons began to leave also. The two stepped out of the coliseum and headed for a room that seemed to be empty except for a bench at the far end.
I will sit down here and I will teach you all that is needed of me. The fox said as it sat on the bench in the room
"Thank you sensei… now what do I need to do?" Naruto said as he got into the centre of the room and looked towards the fox who sat down.
Well here is the first step… you need this knife… it is a strange prolonged kunai knife with three blades… its reason for that is that it could be used to create the seal needed. Now watch me…
The mortal version of the fox created a seal on an ordinary knife and threw it across the room. He then activated the seal and appeared 5ft away from the kunai.
Once you get better at it the faster you can activate the seals… and the faster you can teleport… of course, the far away seals you will have to add chakra and make the seal activate when you say a certain phrase after you activate the seal… now try it out pup…
"Ok I will try it now! This is gonna kick ass!" was all Naruto said as he took the prolonged kunai from the fox and wrote the seal onto an ordinary kunai he carried with himself.
Naruto threw the kunai at the wall, as the kunai stuck to the wall Naruto activated the seal and teleported 3ft away from the seal. "This is cool fox! I will train hard to perfect this!
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Three days later in hell
It seems you have mastered the shadow leap jutsu… now let us get onto more jutsus that will be needed for you to call yourself a demon sage!
"Good, good… what's next?" Naruto said as he placed his new kunai into a strap tied to his trouser leg.
Well what I have next installed for you is this… the oni gyoushi no-jutsu! Allowing the person with the eye trick to see chakra… to send him to hell and to see a glance of what the opponent might do… I have already explained this but I thought I would refresh your mind a little…
"Ok so let's get to training… what do I need to do?" Naruto said as he stood ready and he looked on, a big grin on his face.
Well first you will need to sense the chakra in the back of your eyeballs… do you sense it? Naruto quickly nodded. "I have never felt that chakra point there before… I wonder if it awakened when I finished my training…" Naruto thought to himself. Well ok now what I want you to do is activate it… bring the chakra to front of your eyes and this should activate the eye trick.
Naruto brought the chakra to the front of his eyes and was amazed at what he could see. He saw chakra points… he saw chakra… he saw further on ahead a little… he could feel he could predict what people could do… "Hey fox does this look cool or what?" Naruto asked as he looked around further.
Naruto's eyes were as dark red as jam and it seemed to flicker a little just like the magma underneath him.
Well now that you have learnt it… only in time and practice of use will make it more affective… so I guess we can get onto the next instantly!... the fox bellowed a laugh as it grew more excited
"Cool what's next!" Naruto didn't ask, it was more of a demand.
Well this one will interest you. Ultimate shadow clone jutsu. Allowing you to pump chakra into clones while they take damage and survive. Normally they would poof if they got hit good enough but here your chakra can heal the clone!
"Cool! So I guess first I create a bunch of clones?" Naruto asked as his fingers got ready to do the seals, but awaited Fana's answer.
Yes my boy… create some clones and then as another one of your clones hits it have yourself or another clone pump some chakra into it… that should stop the clone from poofing.
Naruto created 30 clones and had a 10 teams spread out around the room as they tried to do as there sensei asked of them. Naruto trained… his clones vanished the first few times instantly but he was getting the hang of it and his clones were lasting slightly longer than usual.
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One week later in hell training
Well Naruto it seems that you have finished your training in hell. You have mastered the ultimate shadow clone jutsu, oni gyoushi, the shadow leap jutsu and all the other jutsus of the demon sage… I now announce you master demon sage. Please take this ring and wear it with pride… you deserve this ring kid… you have trained long and hard. The ring was pitch black but in the middle was a white symbol of someone's shadow.
"Thank you sensei… I will wear and treasure it like I do with all the rest of them. So shouldn't we travel back to earth now? And how did we get here? We didn't teleport or travel… so how did I get here?" Naruto asked as he remembered the night they came here
Umm well… you see… your body is still on earth… the ring, the kunai all your experience down here will be brought to you so do not worry… I think it is time to wake up young kit…
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Naruto tried to open his eyes but the light was to strong so he squinted them a little as he took in his new surroundings, as he tried to sit up somebody put a palm on his chest and sat him back down.
"Hello? Sir are you awake? Well I am thankful you are… who are you anyway?" the young nurse asked as she put on a questioning look
"Huh? Oh my name is Naruto Uzumaki… where am I? What happened to me?" Naruto asked as he laid their eyes fully open now relaxing on a nice warm bed.
"well you were in a coma I am told… you were out for 1 month and 2 weeks… do you feel ok?" the young nurse asked as she handed him some water.
Naruto quickly drank the water. "One and a half months!! Oh my god!! I have to get back to training!" Naruto shouted as he got out of bed.
The young nurse pushed him back into bed and stroked his head. "it would be best if you slept young one… you are too young to be jumping around like this… we will talk more in the morning" the young nurse said as she continued to stroke Naruto's hair.
Naruto just shut both eyes and fell asleep on the bed… his last thoughts. "I can always train tomorrow"
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So how was my ninth chapter… I know you all hate me I haven't updated in like 3 days… I had my reasons… research for Thursday and Saturday and part of Friday. And on Friday it was leaving day so I went out and got drunk… pretty fun actually… and I want to hear those reviews!! I want to know what you want me to do to make it better… also spoiler keep an eye on that Kushana woman… she is interesting… end spoiler also next chapter is gonna be really cool for you Naru/Hina fans that want to see a small reunion peace out guys!
Next chapter reunion and let's get pyro!
