Hi everyone, Draco here

So while I was taking a break on working on "Keyblade Shinobi" and mowing the yard, I got an idea of a different kind of Naruto Fanfic

Where after an attempt at his life, Naruto ends up in land forgotten by time and raised by a pack of Velociraptor. Soon he came the new Alpha and lead small hunting pack to the outside world where he encounters Team 7 (Consisting of Sasuke, Sakura and Kiba) and Team 8 (consisting of Shino, Hinata and Yakumo) during the Land of Waves Arc

Note: Naruto wouldn't be all salvage-like to a certain extent. He's more mature do to being raised in the wild since he comes across an abandon tree house that someone from Konoha lived in

Also I know it sounds like Naruto is a bit over-powered since he has raptor pack under his controls but he doesn't. He does have trust in them and a bond but he knows not truly a raptor but has the respect of the other raptors to make him an Alpha. Yeah I got this part from Jurassic World which I'll show a couple of elements from for it.

So yeah that's the idea and I do have the first chapter done and posted a preview of it and dA and for some reason aren't liking it but I'm not getting any response on why, so here is a bit of a preview and maybe you people here can tell me what I did wrong in the review.

I was born into a world of hatred and fear. I tried to live there until I was six years old

A doe is running through the forest as her hidden pursuers are following her through the undergrowth of the forest, while hidden one is following from above

One night, they trapped me and tossed into the river with hopes that I would've drown and never been seen again. Until I was rescued by my new family

The deer runs out into a field of tall grass as her pursuers still take chase through the tall and inching closer to it as they were about to end it. Soon the Deer perform sharp left and heads back into the wood in hopes of losing her pursuers but fails as they still keep up with her and chased after her

They taught me how to live, hunt, train, and be who I am today after 6 years

The deer accidently trips over a stone and stumbles as it tries to get up again. Then it was surrounded by all sides by four human-size reptiles that are ready to strike it as they hissed and it manages to bolt through an opening.

But as it started to run, the deer was jumped by a hooded creature from the trees above and dragged it to the ground. The animal struggled for a complete of moments before it stopped moving. The hooded creature stood and pulled down its hood revealing a 12 year old Blonde spiked hair boy with 3 whisker like marks on each side of his cheek

The boy looked at the reptiles as they approached him without hesitation, as he signaled them and then the one with blue-like marking on its body barked at the other. Two of the reptiles picked up the dead deer carcass and the other followed behind as all five headed back somewhere

I am Naruto Uzumaki, the Alpha leader of the Velociraptors and protector of the Lost World

Naruto's camp

Naruto and his fellow raptors made it back to their campsite; the two raptors that were carrying the dead deer placed it on the ground. This was their farthest hunting trip outside of the Lost World since the Spinosaurus entered the Raptor's territory a few months ago and eating most of their normal meal and caused Naruto and few members of the pack to hunt for food outside of their protective underground cavern.

Naruto removed his make-shift fur cape and shown to be wearing a dark blue shinobi outfit that he tailored to fit his size, a pair of sandals and pack that carried Naruto's belongings. He found the outfit in an abandon tree-hut in the Lost World with the name of K. Uzumaki.

The raptors raised Naruto like their own after founding washed up in their homeland and brought him to the tree hut for him to live in, and that where Naruto learned to read and write as well learn about the world that he stumbled upon as he looked that journals written by K. Uzumaki as well some basic shinobi training tips and stuff.

After all the reading, Naruto had done there was one question in his mind 'Who is K. Uzumaki?', 'Was he related to Naruto somehow' and the most important 'Where is he now and why he didn't come for Naruto if he was related to this K person'

Soon Mizu, the raptor with blue markings and that grew up with Naruto with and as well Beta; started to let out deep chirping sound as she smelled something that got her attention and wanted to pursue it as the other, Ichi, Cho and Dosu started to perform the same sound.

"No Mizu, we can't be sure what it is. It could be trap" said Naruto as he managed to calm Mizu down and the others.

"If we go investigate this, we do this all together. We have to make it back home alive for Jiji and other members of our pack" said Naruto as he gave the signal and the raptor followed the scent and shortly afterwards Naruto leaped into the trees for aerial cover.

Soon Ichi found the target and sounded the alert to gather the others to his location, Naruto hurried through the tree branches as he feels something powerful nearby and saw Mizu below. He leaped down and signaled Mizu to call back and she performed the same sound that Ichi did.

Soon Dosu and Cho came to Naruto and Mizu's Location but not Ichi. "Aww crud, Ichi got him-self into trouble again. We better find him" said Naruto as he climbed onto Mizu's back and signaled them to go find Ichi's location.

The pack was on hot pursuit to find their lost member, and they managed to find Ichi's location. All of them hid in the brush to see where Ichi was. Naruto spotted Ichi confronting a group of humans as they were ready to fight each other over a dead rabbit carcass.

Most of the human had headbands on their foreheads with metal in the middle and a symbol of sort engraved into them, Naruto dug into his pack and pulled the same thing but his was old and battered from the years of it not being touched until Naruto fought his fellow raptors to be the new Alpha of the pack after Jiji, the former Alpha stepped down.

"Okay I got plan. Mizu, Cho and Dosu surround them but don't attack unless I say so. I want to ask them a few questions" said Naruto as he put on the headband and then signaled the pack into formation to surround them

So tell me what you think?

Also I should have the next chapter of "Keyblade Shinobi" either next week or in two weeks