Chapter 9: Cloudsdale gets Attacked

DISCLAIMER: I DON'T OWN MY LITTLE PONY FRIENDSHIP IS MAGIC. MY LITTLE PONY FRIENDSHIP IS MAGIC BELONGS TO LAUREN FAUST/HASBRO

A/N: The only thing I do own though is Twilight Sparkle's cousin Golden Flames and her brother 'Bobby Wilikins'.

"normal talking"

'thoughts'


Narrator's POV

When Lonely Shadow saw 'Bobby's' secret she had ran out of the library as fast as she could. She ended up at a cottage and decided to calm down for a bit. She didn't realize that there was another pony there.

Lonely Shadow's POV

After I saw what he was I couldn't help myself and ran out of there as fast as I could. I got to a cottage on the edge of the Everfree forest and I decided to relax in there. I walked in and saw a pony there that, thankfully, didn't have any terrible secrets. She had mint-green coat with a brown mane and blue eyes. Her cutie mark looked like a golden feather.

"Who a-a-are y-y-you?" I stuttered

"My name is Lulu?"

"Why is y-y-your cutie m-m-mark of a g-g-g-golden f-f-feather?"

"That means that I can call for any birds and they listen to me. It also means that I can talk in their language."

"T-T-That's neat." I managed a weak smile.

Jamie's POV

When I saw Golden black out I ran into the basement to see if I could find anything that could help. I couldn't so when I came back up I resolved to sit next to her and watch her again. She looked cute when she was asleep. I was astonished when I saw her horn glow bright blue and a stream of white flames with rainbow sparkles came out of it. She wrapped it around herself and her eyes opened.

Golden Flames POV

I opened my eyes to see Jamie there again. I got up and ran towards Twilight's room remembering why we were here in the first place. I got there to see my brother there leaning over her.

"Hey, Starcover! Why's Twilight like that?"

"I don't know. When I got here I saw her wrapped up in a cocoon and then another Twilight appeared …" Starcover told us what had happened. But it sounded like he was keeping something back. I looked out the window and I saw a Pegasus come flying straight towards us.

"GET DOWN!" I screamed. The Pegasus crashed in moments later. Luckily we all ducked in time. The Pegasus was lying down on the floor and I saw that he had a cobalt blue coat, his mane and tail were dark blue with red lightning streaks through it and his cutie mark is of a red lightning streak with a cone of sound surrounding it.

"Ugh. What happened?"

"You flew in through the window and crashed." Starcover said absently. He was still checking on Twilight.

"Why?" Jamie asked.

"I was fleeing from Cloudsdale! A whole swarm of Changelings are there attacking!"

"Well then let's go!"

"You can't! Only Pegasus can walk on the clouds."

Rainbow Dash's POV

I was napping on my favourite cloud, a cumulus, when I heard a weird buzzing sound. I looked up to see a whole swarm of Changelings fly over and go towards Cloudsdale. I was about to go and help when I saw a streak of red lightning go all around Cloudsdale. 'Eh. I'll go help anyway.' I zoom off towards Cloudsdale and that same red lightning streak came towards me. I ducked and he sailed straight over my head and hurtled down towards Ponyville. I shrugged it off and continued on my way towards Cloudsdale. I got there to see every Pegasus there in a panic. I a saw that same swarm of Changelings and I started knocking them out with all my worth. Left, right, front and centre.

"Come on! Who else wants a piece of me?" I taunted. They all parted to reveal her. Queen Chrysalis. Queen of the Changelings.

"Now what do we have here hmm? The Element of Loyalty has come to defeat me? How quaint. Where are your friends?"

"They can't come up to Cloudsdale because they aren't Pegasus."

"Bu the Element of Kindness can. Can't she?"

"She's grounded at the moment. And I mean that in the literal sense." I charged at her. She quickly put Twilight's form up but I kept going.

"Oww!" I bashed into Twilight and she screamed in pain.

Golden Flames POV

We saw Twilight disappear in a flash of black magic.

"Where did she go?" We turned around to see Flutter Night there.

"We don't know Flutter Night. She just disappeared."

Back on Cloudsdale …

Twilight's POV

I remember sleeping then ending up here and crying out in pain. After a rainbow blur knocked me off the cloud I fell down and I managed to teleport myself just before I hit the ground. I teleported to Ponyville Medical and, due to the velocity at which I teleported, I landed pretty heavily on the floor of the hospital. I fainted.


Phew! Did you like that? I know I did when I was writing this. Until school starts up again I'll be updating regularly.

This is my current list of OCs:

Flutter Night – Flutter Night

Jamie – DarkDarsi

Lonely Shadow – E

Sun Splash – pinkie pie

Lulu – Masterpony 117

? - Mintmaddog

This is my current list of flame-colours:

GOLD – Turns anything to dust instantly

WHITE – Able to repair anything

SILVER – Able to see into the past/future of anypony that gets hit

RAINBOW – Able to teleport

WHITE W/RAINBOW SPARKLES – Able to revive anyone that's knocked out