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First of all, wow! I didn't know so many people liked my story! I'll have to update my computer so I can put all my other stories on here! Hell, I can't wait until my computer is back on! Yah!
PuckNofae = well, they're in college so they're around they're middle 20's. Wasn't Elizabeth around her early teens? Jack was hitting on her too ...
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Clueless-Patty = Jack's temper or Riley's?
Jess = There will be as many chapters as it takes! Which means, probably a lot cuz I love long stories!
Heykyra13 = 1) I have fans! 2)yes, there is no computer and believe me, I am suffering much more than you could possibly imagine! 3)in case you hadn't noticed, you're still girlier than me and you still have your damn annoying temper! But when you have it with a guy, it's really cute and I love to make fun of that!
Jack Sparrow's Only Love = I shall update as soon as I am done with all these comments! Thanks for the savvy review!
CHAPTER NINE
Where There's a Will, There's a Way
Riley clutched Kat's arm as they got off the rocking boat. On their trip to the dock, Jack had placed a few tricks on Riley to get even for their morning argument by causing the boat to sway back and forth. Too weak and possibly too frightened to even move, all Riley could do was hold on for dear life the whole trip.
"Riley, could you please let go of my arm while I still have blood circulating through it?" Kat said as she tried to pry Riley's tight fingers off. Riley smiled weakly and let go as soon as she stood on the dock.
"Ahh, it's good to be back on solid land again!" Riley stretched out her arms into the sky and yawned. Blinking her eyes from the harsh sun, she turned her gaze to the town.
Port Royal was a small but quaint town with a large fort to the side. The dock stretched down the beach where other ships had stopped. People were walking everywhere with other people and kids were running around.
"Just as I left it," Jack murmured, tying the little boat up. He stood up and then extended his arms to the two girls. "Shall we make a stop to Will's before going to the pub?"
"I think we shall!" Kat said, excitedly while grabbing his left arm.
"How about we ride a carriage there?" Riley asked, taking Jack's other arm. She was still pretty mad at him but she decided to harbor the anger on a revenge plan instead of just being pissy and bitchy.
"Well, I suppose but I might be a bit costly—"Jack started, a little uneasy about Riley's calm temper, especially after the boat ride.
"We have enough to ride to the Blacksmith, I'm sure." Riley then looked up at Jack and smiled her sweetest. "Don't you think it would be nice to let someone else do the work, Sparrow?"
"She's right, Jack," Kat said before turning the other way and muttering, "For once."
"Hey, I heard that!"
"What?" Innocently tilting her head, Kat gave a small grin. Riley just shook her head and turned back to Jack.
"C'mon, what could it hurt?" Riley asked, leading him to a carriage by the dock.
"My pride," Jack raised his lip in disgust but decided to not go against it. After all, if Riley was warming up to him after just a couple minutes, what could one little carriage ride do?
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A pair of chocolate brown eyes lifted up at the sound of moving wheels. A tan and rough hand dropped the hot poker and a pair of legs rushed to the door, swinging it open.
Will smiled as he watched Jack come out of the small black and silver carriage. His old friend usually came down once in awhile to see how he was doing, to ask him if he wanted to come along and to have a couple mugs of rum as well.
Jack swept off his hat and waved it dramatically at Will who waved his own hand back. It felt to see a friendly face again. Ever since he had left Elizabeth, life had gotten lonely and dull.
Then, a young woman with long red hair came out from behind Jack. She stepped down without the aid of Jack or the coachman and even hiked up her dress when she walked over a puddle instead of waiting for someone to cover it for her.
The soft lavender captured the light, sending shivers of colors over the dress and across the girl's face. Too impressed to say much of anything, Will just stood there and muttered a 'good day to you'.
"Good day to you, Mr. Turner." The girl answered with a smile. "My name's Kat—"
"Well, actually it's Katherine!" Another girl came out of the carriage, except with a little less grace and balance.
She had short black hair and a dark blue dress that hung around her loosely. When she stepped down, she lifted her dress and Will caught a glance of a pair of oddly colored pants. He also noticed how Jack was trying to help her out of the carriage but instead of flirtatiously taking his hand, the girl pushed it away and descended down the small steps. She came over and stood next to Kat.
"And I'm Riley," The girl extended her hand and took Will's hand in a friendly handshake. "Nice to meetchya!"
"Technically, the term is Kitten." Kat said smugly, taking revenge for the 'Katherine' thing. Riley just smiled through gritted teeth at her. Kat just smiled right back.
"Well, miss Katherine—"
"Just Kat ... please!"
"Miss Kat," Will smiled at the girl and then went on, "And Miss Riley, why don't you both come in and have something to drink?" Will led them inside. He let Jack close and lock the door while he went to the back of the Blacksmith shop and cleaned off a small table.
"As long as its not rum or any alcohol, I'll be fine." Kat said while sitting down. She sat cross-legged in the large cushioned chair and Riley sat on the arm since there was no other place to sit.
"Well, I guess you'll have to help yourself, Jack." Will said, pulling another chair out of a pile of wood. He set it down for Riley but she shook her head. He raised an eyebrow and then sat down in the chair. "So what are you ladies doing with Jack?"
"Besides the obvious of coming down to see you?" Riley leaned over and leaned against the top of the chair. "We're just taking an ocean cruise."
"Ocean cruise?" Will rested his face on his chin, tilting his head in confusion.
"What Riley means is that we're just sailing along with him because we love the ocean so much. We wanted to see what it was like." Kat answered quickly, with an uneasy smile on her face.
Will noticed her nervousness but didn't push them any further. Riley leaned down and whispered 'Nice save' in her ear. Kat just smiled and then grabbed a mug that Jack had set on the table for them. She took a drink, hoping that someone else would start up a conversation.
"So Will, whats 'bout you join me? It'll fun to have aboard the Pearl again."
"You?" Will glanced at Kat. "What about them?"
"Them? They're just here for the ride."
"And only the ride, may I add!" Riley commented while stealing a sip from Kat's cup. She swished the dirty water in her mouth before swallowing. –and this is clean water?-
Jack just glared at her and went on. "So what do you say, Will? Do we have an accord?"
Will looked around the back of the shop. His dark brown eyes shifted to the window that lead up to the Swan Mansion. It had been awhile since he had closed the window and there would never be a time where it would be opened again. He looked over at Kat and then to Jack.
"We have an accord."
END OF CHAPTER NINE
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Well, so now that Will is going to join the trio on their long boat trip, what is going to happen next? You all should already know that Kat and Will are going to pair up but the Riley/Jack thing is still looking a bit rocky but if you're into this fanfic than you should be eager to read to the next chapter = Chapter Ten ~ The Bond That Unites Us
First of all, wow! I didn't know so many people liked my story! I'll have to update my computer so I can put all my other stories on here! Hell, I can't wait until my computer is back on! Yah!
PuckNofae = well, they're in college so they're around they're middle 20's. Wasn't Elizabeth around her early teens? Jack was hitting on her too ...
Heykyra13 = Camoflauge has no affect on me! - looks around with paperbag on her head - Honestly
Jack Sparrow's Only Love = thanks for the savvy comment! I'm updating as you read this!
Jess = wow, didn't you comment before? Cool! I'm trying to make sure that Jack still acts like Jack!
Clueless-Patty = I luv the aw's you pple send me! It's so kawaii! (that's cute)
Mizzy = Cliffhangers are my specialty! (BTW, if I have already commented back, sorry! You get commented back 2 times!)
Chapter Eight Reviews
Clueless-Patty = Jack's temper or Riley's?
Jess = There will be as many chapters as it takes! Which means, probably a lot cuz I love long stories!
Heykyra13 = 1) I have fans! 2)yes, there is no computer and believe me, I am suffering much more than you could possibly imagine! 3)in case you hadn't noticed, you're still girlier than me and you still have your damn annoying temper! But when you have it with a guy, it's really cute and I love to make fun of that!
Jack Sparrow's Only Love = I shall update as soon as I am done with all these comments! Thanks for the savvy review!
CHAPTER NINE
Where There's a Will, There's a Way
Riley clutched Kat's arm as they got off the rocking boat. On their trip to the dock, Jack had placed a few tricks on Riley to get even for their morning argument by causing the boat to sway back and forth. Too weak and possibly too frightened to even move, all Riley could do was hold on for dear life the whole trip.
"Riley, could you please let go of my arm while I still have blood circulating through it?" Kat said as she tried to pry Riley's tight fingers off. Riley smiled weakly and let go as soon as she stood on the dock.
"Ahh, it's good to be back on solid land again!" Riley stretched out her arms into the sky and yawned. Blinking her eyes from the harsh sun, she turned her gaze to the town.
Port Royal was a small but quaint town with a large fort to the side. The dock stretched down the beach where other ships had stopped. People were walking everywhere with other people and kids were running around.
"Just as I left it," Jack murmured, tying the little boat up. He stood up and then extended his arms to the two girls. "Shall we make a stop to Will's before going to the pub?"
"I think we shall!" Kat said, excitedly while grabbing his left arm.
"How about we ride a carriage there?" Riley asked, taking Jack's other arm. She was still pretty mad at him but she decided to harbor the anger on a revenge plan instead of just being pissy and bitchy.
"Well, I suppose but I might be a bit costly—"Jack started, a little uneasy about Riley's calm temper, especially after the boat ride.
"We have enough to ride to the Blacksmith, I'm sure." Riley then looked up at Jack and smiled her sweetest. "Don't you think it would be nice to let someone else do the work, Sparrow?"
"She's right, Jack," Kat said before turning the other way and muttering, "For once."
"Hey, I heard that!"
"What?" Innocently tilting her head, Kat gave a small grin. Riley just shook her head and turned back to Jack.
"C'mon, what could it hurt?" Riley asked, leading him to a carriage by the dock.
"My pride," Jack raised his lip in disgust but decided to not go against it. After all, if Riley was warming up to him after just a couple minutes, what could one little carriage ride do?
---**---**---**---**---**---**---**---**---**---**---**---
A pair of chocolate brown eyes lifted up at the sound of moving wheels. A tan and rough hand dropped the hot poker and a pair of legs rushed to the door, swinging it open.
Will smiled as he watched Jack come out of the small black and silver carriage. His old friend usually came down once in awhile to see how he was doing, to ask him if he wanted to come along and to have a couple mugs of rum as well.
Jack swept off his hat and waved it dramatically at Will who waved his own hand back. It felt to see a friendly face again. Ever since he had left Elizabeth, life had gotten lonely and dull.
Then, a young woman with long red hair came out from behind Jack. She stepped down without the aid of Jack or the coachman and even hiked up her dress when she walked over a puddle instead of waiting for someone to cover it for her.
The soft lavender captured the light, sending shivers of colors over the dress and across the girl's face. Too impressed to say much of anything, Will just stood there and muttered a 'good day to you'.
"Good day to you, Mr. Turner." The girl answered with a smile. "My name's Kat—"
"Well, actually it's Katherine!" Another girl came out of the carriage, except with a little less grace and balance.
She had short black hair and a dark blue dress that hung around her loosely. When she stepped down, she lifted her dress and Will caught a glance of a pair of oddly colored pants. He also noticed how Jack was trying to help her out of the carriage but instead of flirtatiously taking his hand, the girl pushed it away and descended down the small steps. She came over and stood next to Kat.
"And I'm Riley," The girl extended her hand and took Will's hand in a friendly handshake. "Nice to meetchya!"
"Technically, the term is Kitten." Kat said smugly, taking revenge for the 'Katherine' thing. Riley just smiled through gritted teeth at her. Kat just smiled right back.
"Well, miss Katherine—"
"Just Kat ... please!"
"Miss Kat," Will smiled at the girl and then went on, "And Miss Riley, why don't you both come in and have something to drink?" Will led them inside. He let Jack close and lock the door while he went to the back of the Blacksmith shop and cleaned off a small table.
"As long as its not rum or any alcohol, I'll be fine." Kat said while sitting down. She sat cross-legged in the large cushioned chair and Riley sat on the arm since there was no other place to sit.
"Well, I guess you'll have to help yourself, Jack." Will said, pulling another chair out of a pile of wood. He set it down for Riley but she shook her head. He raised an eyebrow and then sat down in the chair. "So what are you ladies doing with Jack?"
"Besides the obvious of coming down to see you?" Riley leaned over and leaned against the top of the chair. "We're just taking an ocean cruise."
"Ocean cruise?" Will rested his face on his chin, tilting his head in confusion.
"What Riley means is that we're just sailing along with him because we love the ocean so much. We wanted to see what it was like." Kat answered quickly, with an uneasy smile on her face.
Will noticed her nervousness but didn't push them any further. Riley leaned down and whispered 'Nice save' in her ear. Kat just smiled and then grabbed a mug that Jack had set on the table for them. She took a drink, hoping that someone else would start up a conversation.
"So Will, whats 'bout you join me? It'll fun to have aboard the Pearl again."
"You?" Will glanced at Kat. "What about them?"
"Them? They're just here for the ride."
"And only the ride, may I add!" Riley commented while stealing a sip from Kat's cup. She swished the dirty water in her mouth before swallowing. –and this is clean water?-
Jack just glared at her and went on. "So what do you say, Will? Do we have an accord?"
Will looked around the back of the shop. His dark brown eyes shifted to the window that lead up to the Swan Mansion. It had been awhile since he had closed the window and there would never be a time where it would be opened again. He looked over at Kat and then to Jack.
"We have an accord."
END OF CHAPTER NINE
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Well, so now that Will is going to join the trio on their long boat trip, what is going to happen next? You all should already know that Kat and Will are going to pair up but the Riley/Jack thing is still looking a bit rocky but if you're into this fanfic than you should be eager to read to the next chapter = Chapter Ten ~ The Bond That Unites Us
