Yup, the next chapter is already up.

Happy Labor Day!

Disclaimer: It is not Labor Day

~Spottedpaw13~


Cinderpaw sighed and got on ShadowClan's chatroom.

Tigerstar entered.

Cinderpaw entered.

"Yes, the first time I've appeared in this story!" -Tigerstar

"I needed to escape Firestar. He's following me, but he'll never find me here" -Cinderpaw

"You are a genius" -Tigerstar

"Thank you" -Cinderpaw

There was a silence for so long, Cinderpaw had to charge her Nintendo DS. Finally, Cinderpaw broke the silence.

"Blackstar, the Gathering is in the next chapter. I will join it too" -Cinderpaw

"Thank you" -Tigerstar

Flamer randomly entered.

"Cinderpaw, I'm taking you as my prisioner. If you don't come quietly, I'll tell Blackstar you're secret" -Flamer

"Don't tell him. Bye, Blackstar. I must go" -Cinderpaw

"Bye" -Tigerstar

Flamer left.

"MUHAHAHAHA! He actually believed me!" -Cinderpaw

"Cool" -Tigerstar

Cinderpaw has been forced to go to the ThunderClan chatroom.

"Darn" -Tigerstar

ThunderClan chatroom...

Flamer entered.

Cinderpaw entered.

"Nice try" -Flamer

"Thank you" -Cinderpaw

Cinderpaw drew a happy face.

"Stay here until the Gathering is over. We'll be alone" -Flamer

Cinderpaw drew a sad face.

Flamer left.

Cinderpaw left.

Due to the manager's orders, you cannot leave this chatroom.

"NOOOOO!" -Cinderpaw

Cinderpaw became idle.


Wow, I like my added dialoug. It not only makes the chapter longer, but it's more fun than the regular version, where Cinderpaw just goes to the ThunderClan chatroom and never tries to leave.

Note: On Pictochat, you cannot become idle.

Next up: The Gathering!

~Spottedpaw13~