A/N (big one!) :
Hello!
I'm mostly writing this for my newest reviewer, Miss Pineapple! Since she reminded me of informing you guys.
MissPineapple : Since I can't seem to send you a proper reply I'd like to tell you something about this story :)
I started this back in 2007 on the Flyff forums, I think, and finished it somewhere last year. However... I never finished uploading it here, mostly because of its sheer length and me being lazy. Also, I quit flyff, so I can't really continue while still sticking to the game :P Bespelled is also there, not finished yet but I'm still working on it.
Also... I know there is a lot of mary-sue action, hahah! But I was just starting out; it's been awhile :D I like to think that I improved over the years. Just keep in mind that chapter one was literally the moment where I started writiing, wrote my first fiction.. So I could probably proofread, but for the sake of nostalgia I'm keeping it this way. :)
If you (and any other ninja-readers, if they're around) want to read this, here is the link :
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If you search for a bit, bespelled should be further down the page. (if the link doesn't work, just go to the official forums and look at the fan fiction group of topics.)
I'd love reviews after you read it... Even posting it here is fine! I don't check the flyff boards very often anymore...
And now, seeing as I'm not allowed to JUST post this, I'm adding some flash-forwards! spoilers, so if you don't want em just to the forums and read there =D
Love,
Joby
PS : Darren has always been my favorite! ;) And always will, probably.
next chapter from here...
When they finally reached the sea, Joby saw an island far away. It looked way bigger then Flaris. "Darren, is that Saint Morning? " "Yes Jo, that is. And that island to the left is Darkon. I advise not to go there, since it's dangerous and very strong monsters live there. Well, lets go then I guess!"
Both Darren and Roland pulled out a blue Ignice board and stepped on. Joby hopped on the back of Darren's board and held on to his robe. It was a whole new experience to fly over sea, and she couldn't help but be a little frightened. "Darren? Please don't go too fast, Im kind of scared" she whispered.
& flash forward! :)
"Darren, why are you sitting here? Are you okay?" she asked, stroking his arm while he was sitting on the floor. "No, I'm not..." he said weakly "My head.." he said. He lowered his hand from his face and looked her in the eyes, and she saw a look of panic in his eyes she had never seen before. "Oh my god.. Darren?" she said after he didn't speak for a few moments. "Guys!" she then yelled, telling the others to come over. "There's something wrong.." "He has the same as I had.." Vanessa added in. That moment Darren blacked out...
"Who.. are you?" she said softly, clutching her staff in her hands.
"I have no name." he said in a deep, cold voice, and pointed his hand at her. "You will surrender, and give me my power back." he said, and she had the feeling he had been grinning the whole time. She jumped back, shaking her head in disagreement.
"No, I won't! Not to someone like you!" she yelled, her eyes wide in anticipation of the fight that was nearing.
"Well, well, hello Mr. Chosen. It's a bit cliche isn't it?" he said and laughed out loud. Darren's eyes narrowed, but he didn't say anything.
"Nice lady you found... I wonder though... how social could you have been after being isolated from the world for years..?" he continued, smirking.
"Leave that out of it!" Darren yelled, getting a flashback from some time ago. He squeezed the wood in his staff and casted Fire Bird ; Seneperus reflected it with his blade and laughed again.
"You're a lousy fighter when you're mad, aren't you, boy?"
'That feeling people have when something's watching them, looking for an opening in their defense...' she thought, shivering. But somewhere within her she felt a security, a knowledge that she was strong, and not just strong, she was one of the Chosens. And for once she really realized that; it wasn't an unpleasant feeling.
"Darren.." Joby started, unable to fall asleep properly. She was cradled against Darren's chest, and she felt his voice reverb through her when he asked her what was wrong. She looked up at him and smiled, touching a hand to his face.
"I was thinking back on things... Is this going to be hard? To win from Hell?" she asked. Darren fell silent, and gave her a thoughtful look.
"I don't think it'll be easy... But I'm sure we're able to win." he said with a smile. "We've grown a lot since the beginning, remember?"
"Everyone's in Mas Dungeon, they've put up the most powerful magical shield in history over there." Roland said, looking at her. Joby nodded. "Prepare yourself, get everyone here." she whispered.
...
She looked up at the sky and smiled. Darren was up there, fighting for the good of all of them. She could feel their bond through their rings, still as strong as ever, a sign that he was in good health. "Let's do this." she said quietly. She lifted herself into the sky, and spun around.
"METEOR SHOWER!" she shouted out for all to hear. And it rained.
