Thank you for the reviews people. Ok this is a short chapter but I promise I will make the next one longer.

Chapter 8

Blazepaw, Beetlepaw and Petalpaw were heading out to camp to go to the river. " So um… you sure I won't drown." Blazepaw glanced nervously at Beetlepaw and Petalpaw. Petalpaw rolled her eyes and Beetlepaw said" It will be ok. We are excellent swimmers. And I will never let you drown." Blazepaw smiled at him but was still nervous.

They reached the river and Blazepaw looked at the black churning depths of it. She shuddered and dipped her paw in jumping back because it was freezing." You expect me to go in there." Petalpaw rolled her eyes as she said" Yep pretty much. Come on it isn't that bad." Petalpaw and Beetlepaw jumped right in and started to swim.

Blazepaw took a small step in. She tried her best to ignore the freezing water. She kept on walking till she was belly deep." Ok can we go now." Beetlepaw snorted" You haven't actually swam yet." Blazepaw glared at him" I am in isn't that good enough." Beetlpaw splashed her getting her soaking wet" Nope but now your wet so you might as well get the rest of the way in."

Blazepaw watched as Petalpaw swam further away. Blazepaw sighed and walked even further in up to her neck now. She could feel the water tugging at her waiting to take her away. Alarm spread through so she started to back up. She felt someone shove her behind her so she went even deeper were her feet couldn't reach.

She started to flail and she gasped for breath before she went under. She heard her name Sunpaw being called. She looked around as she was being swept away downstream. She was trying to get air but water just came in. She thought to herself this is it I am going to join Starclan.

Then she felt someone grab her scruff. She tried to see who it was but it was to blurry to see clearly. She closed her eyes again and let herself go limp. She was on land and started to cough out water. Then she passed out.

She woke up in Riverclan's medicine cat den. She looked around as her eyes adjusted to the dark." W-what happened." Duskheart came out of the shadows." Well you were swept away by the river but a apprentice called Magpiepaw saved you." Blazepaw purred softly making sure no one can here.

Dushkheart was about to leave when she turned back around" Oh and Sunpaw you will be not able to do training till I say so." Blazepaw nodded.

Hope you liked it. Btw I am going to clear this up with you so it won't be that confusing. I have not changed Blazepaw's name to Sunpaw because I am deciding wether to change it depending on were the story goes. So until that time comes her name will be Blazepaw.