So listen up I noticed a lot of people don't read this story much can you like tell me what is wrong? I'm editing my chapters that I got done and I did notice a lot of mistakes that I have made so i changed some stuff.

If like just start reading this book and just stop can you please tell me what is wrong with it that made you stop reading it? I don't care if you say that this sucks, just tell me what is wrong.

Tuthfully more people are worried about favorites and all that stuff, truthfuly I could care less. I mean I preciate it but I much rather hear from you... i rather read to what you say more than anything...

that is what is on my mind... please don't ignore this...