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Rivergoddess16

DemonRaily

Empress Kiritsubo

Nao Hashiba

Liz-Kaguya

I'm so sorry this is so late, life has become so crazy it's been really hard for me to keep up with everything but don't worry I'm trying to keep up with everything.

For Desert.Moon

Who helped me find more good sue fics to use!

And I got inspired just talking to her!

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Today the author read a gripping tail of an AMAZING FMA oc all written in her point of view… of course the point of view was a bit off but she found it so amazing she is going to write like that for this chapter….

You smiled at Ed from across the train seating, if that makes any sense at all. Your beloved Ed looked up at you and smiled a sweet loving smile. Al sighed obviously bored cuz he didn't have a hot girl to stair lovingly at. He stood up,

"I'm going to do something that will take me out of this chapter so you guys can do morel things with out my innocent eyes watching." And with that he left.

"Soooo" Ed said turning slightly red.

"Soooo" You say also turning slightly red.

"How do you know Winry again?"

"Oh well you see…" and thus you go into a LONG tale on how you decide at the age of 15 that you wanted to learn Automale cuz you had already mastered everything there was to know about Alchemy. So board you wondered around until you feel (conveniently) half starving on Winry's door step. After that the very kind blonde took you in and fed you and taught you all she knew about her trade. Soon you and Winry became good friends and almost like sisters only you weren't really sisters cuz your parents weren't the same. Why you had to mention this little bit was kind of stupid but you did.

Anyway after your long tale you where slightly out of breath, so you snuggled next to Edward.

"I love you Ed" you whisper into this ear. He blushes lightly and mumbles something. "What did you say?" You ask

"I…I love you to…"

You smile sweetly then kiss him on the cheek "I know" you tell him. He takes your hands and looks deep into your now light purple eyes.

"I love you so much; I was so worried about you. Who was that guy anyway? Why did he want you?"

Around this time the author deiced to add some drunken guy so Hannahko's past can still be a mystery.

"Hy purdy ledy wana go out n g8 somethn gud to eat?"

"Sorry I don't speak chat speak" Hannah… I mean YOU say getting up. It was time to show of some of that amazing power you have. The guy laughed

"lol, u wan sum of thus?"

You clap your hands together the make a rope out of thin air, cuz who needs equivalent estrange?

"You're going down Bozo!" then throwing the rope at him you clap your hands again and the rope ties it's self around him. He falls knocked out from lack of air and everyone stairs in shock. Then they all clap.

"Good for you!"

"He was so loud and annoying"

'I didn't even know what he was saying"

"Hey can I have your phone number? You're hot"

"Such a sweet young girl!"

You sit back down in your chair slightly embarrass at the parse. After all you're a very modest girl, even if your clothes pretty much show off your perfect body. But then You can't help that you're so gorgeous.

Just then Al comes back with sandwiches. He took one look at the now dead drunk and stepped over him.

"Wow Hannahko that was amazing!"

Ed looked confused as he took some food

"You saw that?"

"Apparently since I'm praising her"

You just smile and sit back watching the scenery fly by.

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Bleck! These chapters just get lamer and lamer… must get rid of this writers block.

Anyway next time…

Author notes of DOOM!

Winry

The good old soap opera