This whole story will be revised in order to match the semester dates in Japan. I will not update as soon as I can, but definitely after I'm done revising.
Black cat revision notes: (general)
-change everything to be 3rd years.
-change dates. Her trip will be after they graduate in late March. -Birthday will change to march 31.
chapter 1:
-change "it's already May" to "it's already February" when they are in the court for the first time.
-"it's to shield me eyes" after she runs back inside and eats.
Chapter 2:
-"left it home for the spring season" to "left it home because I didn't want a jacket."
-"Mu lowered my head" to "I lowered"
-Izuki encountering dog. Change, bc he has a dog.
Chapter 3: special notes- Izuki's moment when they ask about high schools. Note his observation skills. Note the "different kind of warm"
-right after falling ill, "breathed in warm air of May." To "cold air of Feb."
Chapter 4: note OC's choice and reason for choosing Izuki(a lie)
-add in missing letters of the conversation. Make note that it is filled in.
-"fumbled with food." Before that, write that he looks up and sees her.
-"clumsily act" to "clumsy act"
Chapter 5: note that this is now early/mid March.
-get rid of washing the dog.
-phone call: "visiting this summer?"
Chapter 6: IMPORTANT FIX. REREAD MULTIPLE TIMES. REWRITE ALL OF IT.
Chapter 7/8/(9)
-every detail about training wi be eliminated. Shorten time frame.
-this will now be before they enter Seirin in early April. Summer break will consist of something else.
