A little preview of one section of Book Two. I still have more work to do with it, but tell me what you think of this so far, even though it's not really much. ;)

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The television was on in the room, hanging in a corner, and the news was on. Lily looked towards the television, as Ethan and Mike continued to speak. Lily noticed that something odd was on the news.

"Hey Mike, can you turn up the volume on the television," Lily asked.

"Sure," Mike said, and he grabbed a remote on the counter and turned up the volume.

It was a news bulletin, and the anchor woman said:

"This just in. A Southern-themed restaurant called Allen Alligator's Restaurant has reopened after an inspection proved that the restaurant was indeed 'clean and stable.' The last time we checked in with this restaurant, people were complaining of 'strange banging noises,' and the former night guard complained that the place was 'too eerie and hostile at night.' Although the restaurant claims that it is 'family-friendly,' an inspection was made to ensure if it was indeed safe. The animatronics were also inspected, and the only complaint about them was to 'clean their teeth,' because they were 'red and rusty.' In other news-"

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