Chapter 9


A/N

So, between my last chapter and now I have watched Lucifer and now I understand the review mentioning him. I had no intention of creating a character like him as when I began this story I had never seen the show! Looking back now though, the similarities are uncanny. Hehehehe…


Deeks coughed as a splutter of blood escaped his lips.

"That all you got…?" he sarcastically replied, a cheeky grin spread across his face despite his wheezing breathes. The men continued to beat down on him, throwing punches left, right and centre.

Suddenly, the entrance swung open and Lucifer emerged through the light.

"You…" he began, rage evident in his voice. "Your team has taken everything from me." The powerful yet elegant man began to circle him once again.

He didn't notice the syringe within his captor's grip before it was too late. Lucifer swung his arm smoothly into Deeks' neck and forced a full bottle of poison into his body. A choked scream rung out through the building as a blind pain overtook the detective's senses…


The team pulled up to the autobody shop and moved swiftly from the vehicle, bulletproof vests and silenced weapons intact. Once in position, they entered the main entrance to the building, knowing that another team was making their way in the back, and took out three men.

Sam, Callen and Kensi continued to move through the building before seeing a large door, locked, with a guard monitoring it from outside. Kensi immediately recognised the man from the video she had just witnessed and stepping into the line of fire. Her weapon was up as she called, "NCIS drop your weapon. The guard reached for his gun as the female agent opened fire, taking out the threat.

Sam and Callen saw the shots and made their ways to the door as a bloodcurdling scream came the room within. Kensi's eye widened as she yelled, "Deeks!"


A/N

Okay so another small chapter but im looking to finish this story now. Cool cool cool cool cool. Enjoy!

Also, im uploading the next chapter in like two seconds so yea, here we go!

-K