Story:
Gumball Season 1 Episode 1 The Girl by EvelioandZgroup
Star Rating: 3.5 out of 4 stars
Review: It seems like Evelio can tackle any genre. With horror he went with The First Blood; with romance The Circle; mystery in I Killed Penny Fitzgerald; science fiction with In Time, We'll Lose Him; superhero Black Cat; and even holidays with Maybe this Christmas. But now he has a comedy series that is crazy good. I'll say it, not because he's my boss, but it's funny. It's a comedy about nothing, focusing on topics in school with funny characters, random, and you can't get enough. This is one of the best stories released in a long time. Let's begin:
We have Gumball wanting a change from his original personality to try something new. He decides to become the opposite of who he is. Along with that, Rachel is now in the picture when demoted and back in middle school for the party and failing. Gumball even stops loving what the creator planned for them as true love. He decides to date Carrie, someone he barely had any contact with, in front of Penny. This pulls out random and comedic gestures too good to pass out.
I can barely find grammar errors and he has improved better. He created a wacky story line that has redeem the genre of slapstick on what stories have failed to do so in the entire archive alone. He has reinvented humor and recycled some elements to keep us entertained. I honestly can't hate this story. It's a phenomenon of Gumball. It's a show about nothing and it pulls off Gumball in a performance like never before. You can't call yourself a true fan of his without reading this story.
Summary: I know why Evelio is one of the best of the archives; he nails the scale on any given genre. This story succeeds slapstick and comedy to a level Gumball has never been able to pull it off. I praise the cast and its storyline for connecting to topics and can't be ignored.
~ I'm Fan Fiction Critic/Reviewer Henry Peters.
