hi again ok long time no see but i explained that in da last note

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Jesse POV

I woke up to find I was back in Susannah's room. It was strange, at first I thought id fallen asleep, however then I would be in the rectory wouldn't I?. I didn't have much time to ponder this because at that moment I saw a shimmer

"Elizabeth, is that you?" I asked, and it was. She ran over to me at such force that I almost fell over.

"Elizabeth what's the matter?" I soothed

She was crying now, "Jesse, its Suze. She's in really really big trouble"

And then I remembered. My Susannah was taken by HIM.

"Paul" I growled "Elizabeth you must take me to her" I could imagine what horrible and twisted things he would do to her.

"Querida" I whispered "how could I have let this happen"

And with that I disappeared to wherever Elizabeth would take me.

Suze POV

I could hear him getting closer and every so often he would make a point of this by shouting things like 'I will find you Susie' and 'you'll never escape from me' so I ran. It seemed like hours and there wasn't even the slightest trace of human life. Finally I collapsed behind a rock, I couldn't move any further even if I wanted to, my legs had ceased up and I found it really very hard to breathe. I was helpless. All of a sudden I wanted out of life, the sun was too hot, I was too dehydrated and it all became too much for me. I basically thought I had two choices die here or die with Paul and I knew I would never go anywhere near Paul.

So I laid back set my head down and went to sleep hoping that when I woke up I would be gone. I gave up and that never happens to Suze Simon.

Jesse POV

I reappeared in a forest. It was strange yet familiar as if somehow I knew it, and then it came to me; it was the forest I'd walked through so many times with Maria, back when I was a living man.

"Elizabeth where is Susannah? I must find her before Paul does" I was panicking now. Calm down Jesse Susannah's a smart girl she knows how to take care of herself…

"Jesse over here it's Susie" she said then she screamed. "Jesse she's not moving, she's not moving"

I rushed over and there was my Querida as cold as ice. No she couldn't be. Not her. Not my Susannah. But then I heard her,

"Jesse" she whispered "you came" and with a small smile she fainted.

Paul will pay for this. Pay for making my Querida like this. Pay for all the pain he has caused.


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