Okay, so I'm updating chapters every other day now. But i have commitment issues, so if i ever happen to fall of the wagon and skip a day, do me a huge favor and PM me to tell me to get off my butt and write the next chapter. Pretty please? But if we're lucky, that'll never have to happen. So, here's chapter nine, if you have managed to read this far into my story, then, congratulations, you're not like me and you can actually sit down and do something worthwhile. Good for you. Oh, and I've noticed that in the last couple chapters i completely forgot about Rukia. My bad, I'm sorry, Rukia, you were there I just forgot to have you say anything. So sorry... Here, I'll make the first line yours..
"I have to say, I'm actually kind of impressed. You really found the door." Rukia said
"What? Did you think I couldn't?" Enrin asked angrily.
"Maybe..." Rukia trailed off.
"Unfortunely, this door seems to just run into another stone room." Izuru said, disappointed.
Sure enough, the hole left in the wall where Enrin had actually blasted through the door (he didn't have the patience to go for the doorknob.) led into a large dome room. Everything was still made of stone, just like the hallway.
"Gee, nice place. Just where are we though?" Ichigo asked for the umpteenth time.
"Some place underground. I think we can confirm that by now." Rukia said as she took a good look around.
"Well, yeah. I wonder how deep, though." Toshiro Hitsugaya pondered, looking at the ceiling.
"I don't really want to know." Enrin commented, "Let's go. There's a door on the other end of this room."
"Sure, let's get moving." Rangiku agreed.
Everybody began to walk straight across, until they got to the center of the room. Then Enrin stopped. and didn't say anything for a couple minutes.
"What's your problem, Enrin? Come on." Renji said.
"Well this is new." Enrin said quietly.
"What do you mean?" Ichigo asked.
"Really, usually when there's a big dome room, right when you get into the middle some big monster crashes down to block your path. It's classic. But there's no monster..."
"Then apparently your stereotypes don't fit here. Let's go." Ichigo said, rolling his eyes.
" Well, you've gotta give them points for the originality." Enrin murmured as he walked up to join the rest of the group.
They finished crossing the room and exited it, entering another one. This room was more like a square, and, unlike the others, it wasn't empty. Quite on the contrary, there was a huge dog-like beast about fifteen feet away from the door. Luckily, it was asleep, snoring like trucks on a highway.
"Ugh, take away those points for originality, sleeping dog? That's too classic."
"Ew, it stinks, too." Rangiku said, pluging her nose, "Disgusting."
"Doggy!" Yachiru giggled loudly, "It's kinda cute!"
"Sure, Rangiku says disgusting, but you? Nah, to you its 'cute'. That THING is so far from cute it's sad." Ikkaku muttered
"Well, let's try not to wake it up." Toshiro said.
"Oh, really, Toshiro? I felt like becoming mince meat." Enrin said sarcastically
"Very funny. Hurry up."
The group edged around the dog to try to get to its backside (it was guarding another door, sheesh doors, doors, doors, everywhere!). And eventually made it. They then faced the next dillemma, getting the door open with the dog's butt right there.
"I think he just farted." Rangiku said, still holding her nose.
"Oh, great." Renji replied.
"We need to move him." Toshiro wearily remarked.
"Um, no I don't think we have to." Ichigo said as he pointed at the dog. It was moving, much to the horror of those present. It slowly got up and turned around, facing them.
"Wuddya want?" It asked.
Okay, so I'm finally getting close to the end here, I'd say there's about five or six chapters to go, but I might be wrong, there's probably more. Why don't you press that little button down there? Make me happy. Oh, and I managed to write this chapter without deleting at all. I'm so proud of myself. lol review plz
