Okay people, here it goes! Under the allegiances...yeah. :) As you may have noticed, the title has changed so don't freak out. It will be okay. :P
ThunderClan: (Main Clan)
Leader- Hawkstar: Brown tom with fluffy tail and dark green eyes
Deputy- Icestorm: Beautiful white tom with a slight tinge of gray and dark blue eyes (sorry, I had to change her/his gender because I started writing and realized that Icestorm was a she-cat, so I thought it would be easier to change it here and not scattered through the prologue. Sorry!)
Medicine Cat- Wintersong: Fluffy white she-cat with deep blue eyes
Warriors- Brackenpelt: Orange tom with white spots
Larkflight: Cream colored she-cat with blue-green eyes
Pinetail: Rugged, reddish brown tom (mostly red) with a large body and wide-set shoulders. Pale yellow-green eyes that are constantly squinting and large paws
Poppysong: White she-cat with orange-yellow splashes along her back/head and on her legs. The splashes have slightly darker tabby stripes within them. Green, almost yellow eyes and a small build
Dustleap: Grain-colored tom with a blondish hint, especially on his back. Long features
Icejay: White she-cat with light gray patches
Lionflash: Ginger tom with streaks of orange
Cherryblossom: White she-cat with pinkish tint
Frostbreeze: Tiny she-cat with crisp white fur and large, pale blue eyes
Redclaw: Wispy ginger tom with leafy green eyes
Sparrowflight: Long-limbed tom with brown fur. Has significantly darker tabby stripes and sharp yellow eyes.
Foxstorm: Ginger tom with darker tabby markings. Green eyes
Brackenclaw: Brown pelt with distinct tabby markings. Long, hooked claws and flat head
Mosspelt: Brown tabby she-cat with vibrant green eyes
Willowlight: Gray she-cat with white paws and tail tip
Birdwing: Brown she-cat with black paws and one white ear
Thornfire: Golden tom with black dapples and gray eyes
Applefern: Light golden she-cat with soft pastel green eyes
Apprentices- Amberpaw(blossom): Long, golden furred she-cat with a lack of self-confidence
Falconpaw: Golden-brown tom with black flecks and yellow eyes
Brookpaw(song): Pretty calico she-cat with strange indigo eyes (Medicine cat apprentice)
Silverpaw(wind): Silver-gray she-cat with darker flecks and bright blue eyes
Hawkpaw(path): Beautifully striking she-cat with black fur and vibrant green eyes
Mistypaw(nose): Baby soft silver fur. She-cat. The color is consistent except for the small of her back, which is slightly darker. Relatively small body. Green eyes
Cloudpaw(step): White, long-haired tom with forest green eyes
Queens- Amberrose: Dark ginger she-cat with bright blue eyes
Emberflare: Small tortoiseshell she-cat with bright blue eyes and orange tipped ears
Snowstrike (had to change because snowstorm is one word): Fluffy white she-cat with amber eyes
Brambleear: Brown tabby she-cat with gray splotches and green-blue eyes
Lightwing: Pale golden she-cat with sky blue eyes
Whitecloud: White she-cat with tan paws and hazel eyes
Icefoot: Cream colored she-cat with amber eyes, white muzzle and long fur
Kits- (Future) Maplekit(paw/pool): Pale tabby she-kit (Mother- Cherryblossom)
Flamekit(fur): Reddish tom with pale green eyes (Mother- Emberflare)
Cloudkit(eyes): Blue-gray she-kit with unusual white eyes. Has a ring of blue on the outer part of her eyes. She looks it, but is not blind
Berrykit: Cream colored she-cat with light green eyes (Mother- Snowstrike)
Kestrelkit(wing): Brown tom with black paws and a black tipped tail
Lostkit(flower): Gray tabby she-cat with green eyes (Mother: Brambleear)
Moonkit(heart): She-cat with white pelt and blue eyes (Mother: Brambleear)
Stormkit(claw): Gray and white tom with amber eyes (Mother: Brambleear)
Frostkit(wing): Silver and gold tabby tom, twisted left front paw, golden eyes (Mother: Brambleear)
Sunkit: Golden tabby tom with amber eyes (Mother: Lightwing)
Elders- Volenose: Short-furred tom with mouse-brown fur and yellow eyes. Angular and defined features
(Approximately 2)
ShadowClan:
Leader- Lynxstar: Black she-cat with odd gold flecks and green eyes
Deputy- Falconfang: Light brown tom with darker tabby stripes and dark amber eyes
Medicine Cat- Grayfeather: Gray tom with darker spots and dull green eyes
Warriors- Raventail: Black she-cat with purple tabby stripes and red eyes. (Genetic mutation)
Lionfoot: Dark brown tabby tom with pale yellowish-green eyes. He has huge paws and a relatively large build
Ashflower: Pretty dark gray she-cat with all white paws and dark amber eyes
Darkstream: Lithe black she-cat with amber eyes
Tigerstripe: Dark orange tom with black stripes and bright blue eyes
Cardinalwing: Red she-cat with brown patches along her flank. Green eyes
Dreamheart: Cream colored she-cat with green eyes
Cloudfoot: Black tom with a white paw and green eyes
Mudfoot: Gray tom with a brown paw and dark green eyes
Rosefern: Pretty light ginger she-cat with deep green eyes and white spots
Marshstep: Dark brown tom with black, gray, white and ginger spots on his fur. Dark green eyes
Honeychest: Black, short haired she-cat with a honey colored chest and sea green eyes
Beetlefur: Black she-cat with gray eyes
Mintwhisker: Small white she-cat with blue-gray patches and light green eyes
Apprentices- Crowpaw(stripe): Completely black with red eyes, similar to his mother/mentor. (Mentor- Raventail)
Beechpaw(leap): Light brown tabby tom with pale, yellowish-green eyes. His left hind paw is white
Dovepaw: White she-cat with hazel eyes and a cream belly (Mentor- Jaysong Temporary mentor: Mudfoot)
Thornpaw: Dark brown tabby tom with green eyes and white paws (Mentor- Cardinalwing)
Darkpaw(leap): Dark ginger tom with jet black paws and amber eyes (Mentor- Honeychest)
Nutpaw(fur): Brown she-cat with pale yellow stripes on her flank and amber eyes (Mentor- Beetlefur)
Acornpaw: Brown tom with amber eyes (Mentor: Mintwhisker)
Queens- Jaysong: Blue-gray she-cat with yellow eyes
(Approximately 2)
Kits- Firekit: Orange tabby tom with cool blue eyes (Mother- Jaysong)
Duskkit: Sand colored she-kit with yellow eyes (Mother- Jaysong)
Stealthkit: Black tom with one silver paw. Tawny eyes (Mother- Rouge)
Elders- (Approximately 2)
RiverClan:
Leader- Otterstar: Dark ginger she-cat with white and cream stripes and misty blue eyes (5 lives left)
Deputy- Panthermoon: Black she-cat with unusual purple eyes
Medicine Cat- Littleblaze: Mottled ginger, brown, and white tom (NOT tortoiseshell. (-: ) with dark amber eyes and a sleek build
Warriors- Heronstrike: Ginger and white tabby tom
Robinflight: Dark red tabby she-cat with a white belly, paw, and tail-tip
Willowtail: Silver tabby she-cat with a white belly and tail tip. Front left paw is white as well. Icy blue eyes
Hawktalon: Brown tabby tom with distinctive tabby markings. Dark green eyes
Icefeather: Pure white she-cat with dark blue eyes and a plumed tail
Crescentshade: White tom with sea green eyes
Ashstone: Dark gray she-cat with lighter gray flecks and black paws. Ice blue eyes
Morningfur: Pale orange tabby she-cat with amber eyes
Molewhisker: Dark brown tom with amber eyes
Mousestorm: Brown and cream tom with amber eyes
Jayflight: Blue-gray tabby she-cat with white spots and green eyes
Bluelight: Blue-gray she-cat with white paws, chest, muzzle, ears and tail
Lionfang: Golden brown tabby tom with amber eyes
(Approximately 2)
Apprentices- Echopaw: Dark gray tom with a black muzzle, paws, and tail
Ashpaw(wing): Light gray she-cat with light green eyes
Smokepaw: Dark gray tabby tom with a black tipped tail and amber eyes
Queens- Sunheart: Cream and white she-cat with blue eyes
Shellsong: Glossy, deep orange pelt with a white tip on her tail. Dark blue eyes
Silvernight: Silver tortoiseshell she-cat with hazel eyes and dark spots on her sides
Featherflight: White she-cat with green eyes
Kits- Hawkkit: Ginger and white she-kit (Mother- Sunheart)
Mintkit: Tortoiseshell she-kit with mint green eyes (Mother- Sunheart)
Tawnykit: Brown tabby tom (Mother- Sunheart)
Rainkit(whisper): Pale silver she-kit with pale blue eyes (Mother- Shellsong)
Lilykit(pelt): Shocking white she-kit with dark green eyes (Mother- Shellsong)
Oakkit(tail): Pale brown tom with striking blue eyes (Mother- Shellsong)
Sweetkit(flower): Reddish she-kit with bright green eyes (Mother- Silvernight)
Fishkit(tail): Silver she-kit with a long tail and hazel eyes (Mother-Silvernight)
Echokit(light): Pale gray tabby she-cat with blue eyes (Mother-Featherflight)
Reedkit(foot): Light brown tabby tom with green eyes (Mother-Featherflight)
Elders- (Approximately 2)
WindClan:
Leader- Brookstar: Dark gray and white she-cat with piercing blue eyes
Deputy- Runningmist: Sleek, black tom with pale yellow eyes
Medicine Cat- Hollyfrost: Light gray tabby and white she-cat with blue eyes (Apprentice: Littlestem: Small long-limbed dark brown tabby she-cat)
Warriors- Foxstrike: Orange tabby tom with yellow eyes. Thin and lanky
Poolwhisker: Blue-gray and white she-cat
Chasingrabbit: Long-legged brown and cream tom
Meadowpelt: Long-furred white she-cat with dark gray "star" on her chest
Ashwind: Dark gray tom with long fur, stone colored dull eyes and a black nose
Bluefeather: Blue-gray she-cat with dark brown eyes and a black stomach and paws
Thornwhisker: Dark brown tom with black stripes
Echobreeze: Pure black she-cat with hazel eyes
Coalwind: Dark gray tom with brown eyes
Redfang: Reddish brown tom with long claws and blue eyes
Blackcloud: Black she-cat with dark gray splotches
Rainmist: Dark gray she-cat with blue eyes and a white-tipped tail. One toe missing
(Approximately 2)
Apprentices- Rockypaw: Dark gray tabby tom (Mentor: Poolwhisker)
Hollypaw(heart): Dark ginger she-cat with dark green eyes (Mentor: Bluefeather)
Minnowpaw(flame): Dark brown she-cat with a red chest and sky blue eyes (Mentor: Coalwind)
Shrewpaw(talon): Dark ginger tom with brown splotches and sea green eyes (Mentor: Echobreeze)
Queens- Dovecry: Tawny colored she-cat with a creamy underbelly, white paws, and pale blue eyes
Brightmoon: Long haired she-cat with calico fur and pale yellow eyes with green near the center
Raindream: Long furred white she-cat with hazel eyes and pale blue-gray splashes
Kits- Cherrykit(whisker): Tawny colored she-kit with cream underbelly, white paws, and yellow eyes (Mother- Dovecry)
Hawkkit(stone): Tawny colored tom with pale blue eyes. Extremely large paws
Mudkit: Long haired brown tom with a big splotch of dark brown on his back, tail, and top of head with a long tail and deep brown eyes (Mother: Brightmoon)
Morningkit(cloud): Silver tabby she-kit with amber eyes (Mother: Rainmist)
Elders- Lostsight: Pale tabby she-cat who lost her sight
Badgertooth: Grumpy black tom with a white stripe down his spine
Prologue
Icestorm trotted to the Half Tree with his head held high, a confident aura surrounding him. He sat and neatly curled his tail around his front paws, calling for the cats to assemble for dawn patrols.
"Pinetail, Larkflight, and Poppysong, you all will go hunting. Remember that the recent battle with WindClan has brought us more territory. Do not be afraid to take advantage. Icejay, Redclaw, and Sparrowflight, you will patrol the WindClan border. Brackenclaw, Willowlight, you two will collect herbs for Wintersong. Go talk to her about what she needs."
The gathered cats scattered when Icestorm flicked his tail to signal that he was done. Brackenclaw and Willowlight headed over to Wintersong who was talking a mile a minute, tail flicking and ears twitching. Icestorm smiled to himself as he walked over to his leader's den.
When Icestorm got to the mouth of the cave that was Hawkstar's den, he stopped dead in his tracks. A hint of ShadowClan scent hit his nose and he instinctively unsheathed his claws. He recognized this cat. It was...Ashflower! He thought of the cunning she-cat and bared his fangs.
Icestorm carefully padded into the den. "Hawkstar?" he called, voice trembling. "Hawkstar! Where are you?" He was practically whimpering, whiskers twitching, ears swiveling in all directions.
A tangy, iron smelling scent attacked his senses and he jumped back two tail lengths. He looked down and saw a bloody, gory pulp of a cat that faintly smelled of Hawkstar. A sharp intake of breath made him jump and turn, claws digging into the earth.
A wounded expression covered Applefern's face, making Icestorms heart freeze up. He knew Hawkstar's loyal mate would never attack him, and he felt a chill of pity crawl up his spine.
Before he knew what was happening, he was pinned on his back, Applefern's snarling face in his. "If you did this you will pay..." she growled ominously, claws tearing the thin layer of skin beneath his fur. Red drops of blood beaded up and slowly trickled down his chest.
"I swear to StarClan I did not do this!" he shouted frantically. Applefern's expression did not change, but her claws did stop and slowly retract. Icestorm was encouraged by this and kept going.
"I was coming in to tell Hawkstar that I just sent out the patrols. I smelled that ShadowClan she-cat—Ashflower, I think—but I thought nothing of it. When I walked in I was just as surprised as you, and now you're attacking me! We need to alert the Clan. As your deputy, I order you to get off me RIGHT THIS INSTANT." A new tone of authority seeped into his voice as Applefern's features softened and her eyes clouded with grief. Soon she was in tears, whimpering like a kit.
"It will be okay. I know you loved him, but we need to tell the Clan," Icestorm reassured her roughly. He wasn't good with comforting cats.
Applefern's light green eyes glittered with hatred and sadness and Icestorm shrunk back, frightened for a bit. "It will not be okay. We need to go to ShadowClan and kill Ashflower. Now." After Applefern said that Icestorm nodded and pelted out into the camp.
"All cats old enough to catch their own prey gather here beneath the Half Tree immediately!" Hearing the urgent tone in his voice, the cats of ThunderClan quickly clumped together, identical looks of confusion and fear reflected in their eyes.
"I believe Ashflower of ShadowClan has taken Hawkstar's last life." Gasps of shock interrupted him and a collected murmur passed through the camp. "Applefern and I have decided to ambush them. The ones who will be coming are Dustleap, Thornfire, myself, Applefern, Frostbreeze, Mosspelt and Foxstorm. The rest of you work on securing the camp."
How'd y'all like it? Please review! I need to know if I should continue. So...yeah! Constructive criticism is welcome!
