Dragonlord-ex: I hope this is better and I am sorry to say what I said in the Note but it is true I am trying to sit down and work on this story
Anonymous: Thanks for the grammar lesson I hope this is better
RiseofDeath: Thanks for the advise I'll try to work on it
Archontic: don't bother with flames(if that was what it was), and I am sorry for short chapters I just never was much good at thinking on a story I took over I was suppose to take over Naruto and Hinata's Paradise but I couldn't think for it
Hiroshima Namikaze: sorry for taking so long
wiseman: I was honored to take part in continuing the story
Diablo Snowblind: wasn't my idea was already there I just copied and pasted it from the original till this chapter which I wrote myself
Reviewer's & reader's: this is my first OrC(original Chapter) plan on adding some jutsu that I have not put in Kitsune Guardian nor will, and I plan on adding the Raiton: Rasengan(one of my trademarks on a story sadly), Oh and I am not that good with the fights I know so sorry for the bad writing, and sorry for the delay this will sadly be a short chapter
Legend:
'...Thoughts...'
"...Japanese..."
"...English..."
'...Biju Thoughts...'
"...Biju Talking in Japanese..."
"...Biju Talking in English..."
...Song Lyrics...
Jutsu
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The Return of The Bijus:
Chapter eight:
The Final Exam first match full match:
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Hanabi was in the juuken stance, waiting for Kouji to attack her when she was hit suddenly from behind with Shuriken, 'Damn! I should have activated my Byakugan at the beginning of this match!' she thought as she pulled the shurken out of her back, now behind a tree she had gotten to.
"I see you underestimated me Hanabi-chan" taunted Kouji as he canceled the bunshin he had standing in front of her, it had been a fake the entire time.
"No, just seeing what Uzumaki-san had taught you" she lied. At that moment, up in the stands, Naruto chuckled, "Not likely" he mumbled.
Kouji smiled, then in an instant was face to face with his foe, "You want to see what he had taught me?" he asked with a smirk that caused Hanabi to paled. 'If he was taught by a demon, then he would fight like one, could he not?' ran through her mind in a small panic, "I'm guessing you know part of Naruto-sensei's secret from the look on your face" said Kouji grimly. Naruto paled himself, had Hyuuga-san had told his daughter(s)?
Kouji smiled, "Not like I care about that though" said Kouji as he had walked up to her, "but you on the other hand I have to because you are my opponent" Hanabi cringed before attacking him with all her skill... Kouji was knocked back as he dodged the strikes to his chakra points and he finally landed a hit on her and he smiled, "Kage Bunshin No Jutsu!" said Kouji making a familiar handseal making five clones appear, and Naruto smiled it took them a while to get that jutsu down.
Hanabi felt like she was in Neji's place when Naruto had the match against him, 'So this is how he felt' thought Hanabi as she blocked a strike to her head. "Kouji you really are well trained" said Hanabi as she tried to go for his chakra points again only to miss by mere inches, "I know Hanabi-san" said Kouji and he threw a punch at her hiding the intent to throw a kick right after but both were blocked, "It seems so are you" he finished jumping away causing Hanabi to miss his chest just bearly.
"Going for killing blows?" asked Kouji raising an eye brow before smiling, "looks like I should kick it up a notch" he added landing and then sanding straight like someone whom is relaxed. "It doesn't matter, you can't win I have to win!" said Hanabi and Kouji chuckled, "From what Naruto-sensei told me, you aren't spouting off about fate so you are not to far gone" at that Hanabi charged at him and Kouji out his hand out in front of him palm up and a swirl of static started to appear, when Hanabi was close enough he grabbed her arm and drove the sphere towards her stopping inches from her chest, "Proctor this match is over" called Naruto as he jumped down and separated the two and then bumping his student on the head, "Baka what did I tell you?" he asked and Kouji rubbed his head and said, "Not to reveal my team's secret attacks, but this is mine, the Raiton: Rasengan".
Naruto blinked, "You improved it as well" he said surprised not many realized that his Ryusei no Jutsu was an improved version of both of his father's personal jutsu, "Yeah all I did was try to make a piercing version of it but it came out like that" said Kouji as they headed towards the combatant's stands...
"Will Katayama Daichi,and Ichijo Sigure come down to the arena" called the Proctor...
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I finished it...
I need to go check in to a hospital now to find out what is wrong with me now.
R&R I finished it if I continue you're lucky cause I am not that certain that I will be continuing it
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