BOOK 7
He'll be fine after a few chapters of melodrama!
The whole cliche of Lincoln getting hurt in a fight is honestly making me start to roll my eyes when I see it, we all know everyone is just gonna play the blame game, cry a little and then make everything better with an apology. If I wanted to see this then I'd babysit children because that's the exact same shit little kid's do.
This is the cardinal sin of not having any ideas but striving for a popular story.
Please have *Blank* do *Blank*
This is to reviewers who obsess on certain characters and type the same thing on every story, shut the fuck up. I mean really, if we wanted to have that happen in the story it would happen. The only thing you can do is point out what is there.
If you want to see something specific be written then do it yourself and quit being lazy.
If this doesn't get 1 Billion Reviews I'll cwy and delete the stowy.
Some authors are such babies if a story doesn't get the popularity they want. If your whole goal is to write something that catches on with the lowest common denominator, rather than trying to be good. Popularity will follow if you do something well enough then popularity should come.
If you write for the sake of popularity you are a capital B Bitch.
It's what the author intends!
People who get obsessed with a story usually justify some flaws over the fact that everything is intentional, well no shit it is, doesn't mean it's good. Everyone needs to learn that if you like something you don't have to go through the pointless endeavor of trying to change someone's mind over the internet or blatantly insulting someone for feeling differently.
Everything has flaws, some people really need to get over the egos and feelings of supremacy for liking something.
Reference Jokes
Don't steal jokes from the show and implement them in fan fiction, it's honestly terrible. It would either be something you've heard before and doesn't pack the punch an original joke would, or I don't get the reference and the joke seems out of place.
Donald Trump Insults
Using a story to smear any political figures when it's not even of relevance to the story needs to stop. All it does is remove any immersion from the story as you either piss people off, and then you have the people who will fight and completely derail the reviews from the story.
Most of these are towards Trump, and immediately if I read his name it personally makes me skip that section of the story because I know it's just some asshole trying to fling his political standpoint down the throat of an audience that ranges the complete political spectrum.
Luna/Sam stories
Instead of demonstrating a relationship between two characters, the fandom has completely focused on the coming out part of the relationship. It's always that or the whole courtship process, which you know will end up with Luna getting the girl.
The only stories where Luna fail have long since died. People here don't seem to think that we find value in people taking a blow to the chin and getting back up again, which I have previously stated is one of the most relatable things people go through in this life.
I still taste the bible
Some people completely dedicate stories to shoving Christianity or any other religions down people's throats. I respect your faith, but really dedicating stories to a religion that has little to no impact and pretending the Loud's are all hard core Christians? Even moreso with characters who have no reason to put any stock into religion being turned into living zombies for no reason other than some vain attempt at spreading religion.
Bodies litter the Loud House as a single standing figure stands amongst the carnage. The person standing was Lucy Loud as she breathed rapidly with an axe in hand. "Face Stealer! Grant me my wish, the work is done!" Lucy calls to a figure who wasn't there with her. All of a sudden Lucy feels a cool breeze blow through her hair and a wide smile stretches across her face. "They're dead, all of them," she turns to look at a tall man wearing a burlap sack over his face.
"Not all of them." The man walks towards Lucy as she looks at him with confusion, "You told me if I killed my family I would have any wish I asked for? Are they not all dead?" A dark sinister chuckle drains the blood from Lucy's face as she realizes that her deal has gone wrong.
"The deal required that you kill all of those who intrude on my home and bring me their faces, a deal which you forgot to complete, for this you will be the one added to my collection."
The Face Stealer removed his mask and gazed upon Lucy, the girl threw her hands over her eyes, "I will not look! You will not take me!" Lucy heard...moaning? "You killed us Lucy! You gave us to him!" The girl screams in agony as her conscious bit back at her again. "Look at what you did Lucy! Look at us now!"
"FINE!"
She removes her hands from her eyes, unable to handle the guilt anymore. Immediately Lucy fell back once she saw the face of the Face Stealer, her eyes fall shut, never to be opened again. Lucy's heart had failed, leaving her to die.
"And so the cycle of violence repeats." The Face Stealer mutters to himself as he looks at the fool who brought him so many souls. Greed for knowledge on the supernatural lead her right into his hands and now he had more faces.
