SAPPY LITTLE LOVE POEM
This poem goes with my story HPSBGC. It's basically Harry's feelings of Hermione after they've been together for a month. You can interpret it another way if you want but this is how its supposed to be. Hope you like! Onward!!!!
I'm laying my eyes on you- I am, I am
Listen to me now- just listen, listen
As I tell you a little something,
A few things on my mind
It may not be perfect, it my not rhyme
But it's my thoughts and feelings on paper and I hope you oblige…
When I see you, all I can think about is how brilliant you are
And how I seem to reach to you from afar
When you hold me, baby- I want you to never let go
When you embrace me in your arms,
You block out the never-ending nightmare that is my future
When you talk to me I want to record your voice in my head word from word
And as we walk, we walk hand in hand
As we flaunt, we seem to do so in our fantasy land
This may sound too serious- too final
We haven't even been together for a while
But it seems like it's meant to be, this was fate knocking on our door
Fate brought you to me and me to you
Fate is what's making us so happy, so happy.
You never let me weep over my cruel fate
You make up for all the years I had living in pure hate
These feelings are just too great too great.
I know this sappy little love poem is as low as it could get,
You're going to laugh I'm dead sure.
But I hope that you do just so I could see that radiant smile again
But I do hope you get a glimpse of how I feel
This past month has been incredible, unreal,
And I want it to proceed onward.
So would you do me the honor of making a vow?
That this perfect love we seem to share will never be broken?
That we will always be? Will you?
I'm ready to take that next journey with you,
We'll be holding hands and we'll be walking,
Walking onward again.
Well there ya go! My first love poem on here! I hope you liked. I have a few more to put up that I think are better. Its funny, I have never had a boyfriend in all my life yet I seem to be able to write a pretty good poem about young love. My sis thinks so too, it's odd. I guess I just know what every young person out there is feeling without actually feeling it myself. I do like to observe things… I think that's it then. I was surprised to get a couple reviews from my last one already! It takes forever to get a review for my poems. Thanks a lot for the reviews!! The good thing about poems is you can't pick at things that are wrong because poems can be just about anything in the world and can be written however you want. So I hope to never receive a bad review because it's pointless. Haha, Kaleidoscopepicpic, you're so right! You can tell me to update on here because I only have nine poems on here in almost a year!
Okay, don't wanna type no more. Damn…not good if I want to get back to my story…ah well there's always tonight...
Love and magic: Rose, 1/19/08
