HEY ANOTHER UPDATE FROM YOURS TRULY!!!

XD ok reviews

Vampwriter: yeh since seymor goes from weak to strong every time we see him in the game it will go for that. he'll die no worries.

Chigatana: well my thing was only 1!!! more girl with naruto besides hinata. it's a naruXhinaXFEMkyu write so no other girls are in it. i hope you continue reading. and like i said before i am one if not THE biggest naruhina only fans in the USA. i just think i'd be nice to naruto and give him more then 1 girl to love because of his hard past. anyways i hope you read to the end.

S-wanderer:this is going with the game but then again with twists. the sphere thing you'll see what happens. and yeh i meant for kakashi to be with Lulu, haha, did i trick everyone? XD GOOD!!! that hint i gave for kakashi entering everyone was too sharp. and for the naruto hianta kyu thing you'll see what happens

Spiritwolf:yeh, which is why i did the constant author notes so all of you knew i was gonna update. i won;t leave you guys hanging in the wind till the story finishes. and i said i was gonna THINK about the nother crossover. it won;t be an ff8 one because i only got to the fire cave in the very begining with it and there are no copies around town. either ffx-2 or ff12. i haven't decided yet.

Wow thx for the reviews KEEP EM COMIN!!!...although if chigatana is not gonna read he'll be missed...thx for reading this long chigatana if your not going to anymore.

XD on with the stroy!!!

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Soon everyone was ready to leave, rikku finally calmed down enough to cross the plain better. As they crossed they decided they would talk out a few things.

Naruto spoke first. "Hey yuna, i got a bad feeling that the sphere you got is part of the reason you said no. I'm also betting that the sphere holds lord jaskals final words. With it we could put seymor away, am i right?" Yuna nodded. "Yes, i will not let crimes be commited."

Naruto smiled. "Good, but i have a feeling that the sphere won't last with the guado. so let me have it ok?" Yuna smiled and noded before giving it to him.

They were near the macilania woods, hinata decided to talk with naruto. "Who's the other girl naruto? i want to speak with her." Naruto sighed. "Kyuubi...he is a she, and sorry you can't meet her. i've been trying for ages to make kyuubi into a solid form before us, not sealed within me. the only way is to break the seal, and i can't do that until i gain control over the final tail."

Hinata pouted at him. "No fair, it will takes years." Naruto kissed hinata. "i hope not." They finally got to the wood, soon enough the big lug barthero came running without his summoner. Naruto knew something had to be wrong.

Barthero stopped to catch his breath. "Have any of you... seen... lady donna?" They all answered no. "Damn, she was kidnapped, you have to help!" Naruto sighed. The world he was in knew peace. the only thing to ruin it was sin himself, and he wouldn;t kidnap, he'd kill.

"Look if you say she was kidnapped she's probably fine. the only thing that could happen is sin attacking her and he would kill her not kidnap. So unless you can back up some proof on if she's safe or not i don't think we should meddle in the buisness of others." The others were surprised yet not so surprised.

Barthero said his bye's and ran off once more. Yuna smiled at lulu. "So lulu, who's the blonde you like so much?" Lulu looked like she would have jumped out of her skin. "n-n-n-n-no i-i-i-i-i just-just thought i'd cheer you up back there is all" Yuna giggled. "You can't fool me Lulu."

Lulu gave in. "Kakashi..." Yuna smiled more. "It takes a guy who has most of his face masked behind cloth in order to make a Lulu fall in love again? Who knew?" Lulu was now blushing madly with embarrassment. "Oh yevon spare me..." Yuna decided to giggle mroe and leave the conversation at that.

Tidus and Rikku were talking it out after the fight they had with the machina...Tidus was in some mess. "Never argue with a woman. they can always beat you in words and mental knowledge, unless you have the nack for it you won;t have the slightest chance" When they made it almost to the lake, auron stopped the group.

"Tidus, follow me, i wish to show you something jecht wanted me to show you." He then slashed his way through a tree and vines, leading to a small body of water and a solatary tree. "He wanted me to show you this place, where our journey lead us." Tidus looked around. he never known his father to be into the secluded sparkling crystal forest thing.

Suddenly the place started to quake, and a large ball of water floated up into the air. Naruto ent through a few handseals and charged a chidori, blasting a blade form the lightning straight at the body of water. Once that lightning hit it, the lightning vanished. "What the!?!"

Auron looked carefully, and saw the small ruin inside the monster water. "The ruin inside it must be giving it different elemental strengths. if we find it's weakness we can hurt it." Naruto thought carefully, "ok, so lightning won't work, so it can't be water." He took a closer look at the surface and saw a slight spark that would otherwise be invisible to unfocused eyes.

"THAT'S IT!" He charged a few seals and and a large dragon formed and strick the monsterball, hitting it full on and the monster looked as if it was freaking out. "I'll work on finding it's elements, hinata, lulu, get ready." They smiled. he figured it out.

The creature glowed a bit, naruto knew it changes elements and looked, small bits of fire roamed around it. "Damn it, i have no ice jutsu! LULU!" She remembered his lesson at the inn.

FLASHBACK!

Naruto smiled at lulu as she used chakra to form an imperfect and small chidori. "Very nice Lulu, it seems you have chakra control and chakra capacity enough to handle a small chidori. Though it is great you caught on in only a week or two since training, it would be wise to make your own elemental jutsu." Lulu was confused

"I know water, lightning, fire, earth,and wind jutsu. the five elemental chakra element affinities. but sadly i cannot control wind and water together to make ice jutsu. you will have to find out how to make those jutsu, not only that but also find out how to combine all elements together with another. fire and earth make magma, water and electricity make a surge, and so on. i know you can do it, make jutsu of your own."

Lulu nodded, she understood what he was saying and would do her best. ice, magma, surge, wood, mist, and many others. she would do her best for the one she loved, kakashi.

END FLASHBACK!

Lulu quickly did a few hand signs and blew a giant impossibly huge and disasterous blizzard from her own mouth at the monster. The creature froze instantly. Naruto took this as a sign to finish it off and without the use of clones, created the wind shuriken rasengan, his own personal jutsu. He thrust it at the monster.

As soon as it hit three things happened. one, the ice shattered. Two, the monster shrieked loudly. Lastly, the monster shrunk until it was no more. Lulu collapsed from her blizzard breath, but before she hit the ground a blue of speed and a face she could not see caught her. The last thing she was was the blackness around the man, except for the hair showing.

The last thought in her mind before she passed out was simply this. "Kakashi..." and she blacked out. Naruto hugged and kissed hinata as the group cheered. Wakka walked over to Lulu. "Her trainin' over ya? she used an attack not from this dimension like naruto."

Naruto smiled at him. "I never taught her that technique. I don't know any ice jutsu, but it looks as if she done well using one she made herself. Wakka train with her to get ready for MY training. your gonna need it." Wakka smiled bright and nodded.

Auron gave tidus a small sphere like the one yuna had with jaskal. After awhile tidus was shaking and crying. Naruto knew it must have been from his father's adventures. Yuna hugged tidus tightly and he did the same for her. Naruto sighed and looked at hinata. "Guess those two are becoming a second us huh?" Hinata giggled and nodded.

They set off once more and stopped at an inn right next to the frozen lake. Kakashi had carried lulu the whole way and laid her in a bed inside one of the rooms. Naruto gone back into his own mind.

When naruto got there he saw Kyuubi sleeping in her human form, laying against the bars of the cage. He decided he should have thought of changing the inside of his mind sooner. "better late then never" He soon concentrated on what he wanted his subconcious to look like.

Soon a grassy field with all types of flowers, cherry blossom tree's and a lake with a dock and cabin right at the shore's edge appeared around him. Kyuubi had fallen from her sitting laid back position on the bars of her cage to hitting the grassy ground hard enough to wake her and make her sit right back up.

Her eyes went wide as she looked around, standing as she does. "Wow, naruto-kun... it's WONDERFUL!" She soon spotted the cabin and ran at light speed to it. There she found the typical living room with couch, fireplace, coffee table, and storage space. The next room was the kitchen with a brick oven coal heated stove, a water faucet for dishes, a refridgerator full of food for her to eat and a tea kettle.

She hurried into the next room, the bathroom complete with sink, shower, and toilet with comfortable cusions bathroom materials for cleanliness and rugs where they needed to be for a master bathroom. The last room gave her a near heart attack, the master bedroom with a double queen sized bed with silken and bed warmer sheets and blankets and pillows, a coffee table and dresser with every clothing known to women.

Naruto came in behind her. As soon as he came into the door of the bedroom he was tackled hard to the floor by the demon as she cried and screamed while kicking her feet. "THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" He chuckled as he hugged her.

She jumped up and helped him up. "I thought i'd come in to talk and also change the layout of this place. You like it?" She was shaking with excitment, almost squealing. "Not like, LOVE!!! I LOVE IT NARUTO-KUN!!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I LOVE YOU EVEN MORE IF IT WERE POSSIBLE!!!!"

He chuckled more. "Glad to hear it. Hey kyuubi, i was thinking, is there any way i can have hianta come into my subconsious to meet you? i know you might not know but i still think it;s worth a shot to find out." Kyuubi went into thought mode.

"Hmmmm, now let's see. OH! of course! the mating mark always allows a mental link, and if the two are connected through mental thoughts then it would be easier to have hinata come and go if she chose to if she concentrated hard enough." Kyuubi smiled. "Of course naruto-kun! although it will take some time. it's a mating thing" At that naruto promptly went dumbstruck.

Of all the things he could do, mating with hinata was not an option till they were both comfortable. "No way, i can't do that. not now. By the time we're comfortable for that you'd be out of my body and mind. no longer sealed within me." Kyuubi giggled. "I knew you wouldn't i just wanted you to know just in case you two did get comfortable before i get unsealed."

After a little walk with kyuubi through his mind, and a few new things, he decided to leave. "Bye kyuubi, i'll check in as soon as i can." Kyuubi kissed him full on the lips before he faded away. "The sun will shine and be in the sky whenever he is awak, and will fall when he is asleep or unconsious in any form. A sudden and VERY brief breeze that lasts only a second means he visits conciously. i'll remember that" She giggled.

Naruto opened his eyes to a giggling hinata. He realized he was blushing ftom the kiss kyuubi gave him as he left. "The fox is a tricky one..." Hinata giggled more. "I suppose she gave you a quick kiss? well whenever will i meet her?"

Naruto chuckled. "Well you have to wait till i release the seal. she said the only other way would be." He blushed and gulped down his nervousness. "Mate" Hinata blushed madly at that. "oh my..."

Soon lulu woke up and the guado servant of seymor from the mansion showed up to escort them, they were ready to leave. As soon as they left the inn, Al-bhed riding machina came onto the lake. Rikku tried to talk to them to leave them alone but they didn't listen. Yuna and the guado who had come to escort them left for the temple alone while the group dealt with the al-bhed.

The al-bhed had activated a large battle machina. The group were now about to face it down. Naruto saw the little drone hovering above it. "Must be to stop our magic and jutsu. We must hurry to yuna!" Naruto got an idea. "Kakashi, give auron a boost!" Pointing to the drone. Kakashi nodded as he and auron ran towards the machina.

Kakashi stopped and turned around ready to boost auron in the air. As soon as his foot landed in kakashi's hands he was sent flying at the drone, cuting it in half before tring to cut the battle machina. he failed as it parryed his sword. Auron laid his sword down before doing a few hand signs. "CHIDORI!?!" naruto recognized those signs.

Kakashi charged one up as well. As soon as they were both ready they hit both chidori's together, making a much bigger chidori for them both to hold. They charged at the bot ready to shove the chidori into it. Right before they did, Hinata and naruto kicked eachothers feet, launching naruto with his own chidori straight through auron and kakashi's chidori right at impact.

"TRIPLE CHIDORI IMPACT!" The battle bot exploded instantly and the three wee blown backwards. After regaining their breaths and knocking out a few al-bhed, they ran to the temple. "You think she's already praying to the fayth?" Naruto asked.

Wakka chuckled. "You bet, her duty as a summoner is to finish her summoner's training ya? she has to immidiately after she gets to the temple and through the trials." Naruto sighed. they could be too late for them to stop seymor.

They got onto the machina for a faster ride to the temple. They got off and threw the machines into the canyon before continuing along the bridged path to the temple. "Do you think seymor's going to use his magic to make Yuna into his bride?" Naruto thought the same as tidus.

Seymor was a powerful maester and that meant he could do many things. even control others if they didn't suspect it. "I beleive so if we don't hurry." Tidus forgot about walking and sprinted as fast as he could to the temple. soon the group followed. Naruto grabbed tidus right before he could reach the door.

"HOLD IT!! Tidus, we all know you love yuna but we can't just barge in! so be quiet, be calm, and lastly be smart!" He let tidus go, tidus stood still. "We head in ask about yuna and seymor go into a room she might have put her stuff, and listen to lord jaskals sphere. we leave it behind and get yuna. i have a feeling that this won't be easy." The group agreed before entering the temple.

Tidus walked to the servant of seymor. "Where's yuna?" The servant smiled. "ah, there you are. she is with lord seymor inside the temple at the moment. we kept the trail doors open for you if you want to see her. her room is right there if you wish to put you stuff down." The group went in and put everything but their weapons down.

Naruto pulled out the sphere and laid it on the table. "Ok, i hope this works." The group soon left and headed into the temple. Naruto sighed once more. "Guys be ready. Seymor may not like the answer and may try to force us into a fight." They agreed.

They entered the chamber and saw seymor standing there looking at the door to the fayth. "I see yuna's guardians and friends have made it here. Yuna will be out shortly." Tidus could barely contain his rage. Yuna finally walked out and gasped before smiling. "your here!" Tidus smiled back, his rage drawing down.

Yuna walked past seymor and to her friends. "Lord seymor. i came to take you to prison! i will not allow you to hurt anyone for your fun any longer!" Seymor got a little miffed that he got rejected. "FIne! you shall all serve the same fate!!!" Two guado guards stood by seymor.

Tidus and naruto sped to the guards and after a few slashes and dodging magic from seymor finally got rid of them. Naruto charged a giant ball of spinning water in his hands. "WATER RASENGAN!!!" He sped to seymor and it shot right through his shoulder.

Seymor gasped in pain before chuckling. "HAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!! that power...I must test it!" Soon he summoned the creature from the stadium. "COME FORTH ANIMA!!!!" Naruto looked at it's size. "Oh shit..." He concentrated hard. "Kyuubi, are you there? i need two tails this time around." Kyuubi nodded. "Go get him."

He shifted into all fours, two tails shot out his back along with a few fox like features and the whiskers becoming more defined. He roared before blasting a giant red ball of energy at the monster. IN one hit the creature fell and there stood seymor. "WHAT POWER!!! I MUST HAVE IT!!!" he didn't have the chance as naruto slashed a claw straight through seymor's heart.

Naruto reverded back to his normal self, pulling his arm out of seymor. "It is finished." Thr guado came in to see seymor...dead. "What have you done!?!" Naruto sighed. "He was a murderer and a cold hearted man. he deserved this." The guado were carrying him out.

"He was our leader! you took away the second best thing to ever happen to us guado. You shall die here!!" As he left he reset the trials. The group camly and carefully got through the trials as fast as they could. as they headed out thy gone to get their things. The servant held the sphere in his hands.

Naruto smiled. "Just as planned" Yuna gasped. The servant turned around. "I see... so this is why you killed lord seymor." IN a second he smashed the sphere to peices. "Lord seymor was better then jaskcal ever was." The group got their stuff and hurried out. followed by guado soldiers.

Naruto finished them off as soon as they got close. They finally made it to the lake before something roared loudly. Naruto and the group froze and looked at the figure. "Shit"

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I had to revise this and make it longer for the last 2 days, and i don;t want to break my 3-5 day deadline. also i thank those who reviewed even after my late update last time. thank you all. also i need ideas and reviews more plz. the more the faster and longer it shall be.

NEXT CHAPTER!!! The wedding crashed, tidus' act of love!!

Naruto:What the hell is this thing!?!?!

Hinata: Seymor doesn;t give up does he?

Yuna: TIDUS NOOOOOO!!!!!!!

oh and the calm lands arc after the next chapter is a poll!!!

Should i have naruto take tidus' celestial sword?

Yes-0

No-0

Both (tidus and naruto gain 1 each of the same sword)-0