Mayonaka Ok, so I didn't update on Saturday cos I've been busy getting inspiration and good news! I found some! Dunno if I put a disclaimer in other chapters so I am now I HAVE NEVER OWNED GH AND NEVER WILL!
Info for this chapter: IMPORTANT!
Ya know Mai's screen in episode 20 or 19 at the very beginning? (Urado case) Yh well that's Mai's scream for now, because honestly that scream chilled me to the bones I literally jumped cos I also skip the intro but damn that scream my height before scream- 5 ft, during scream- times that by 10!
Shout outs!
Ok I will be doing for the reviews cos your all awesome I will give a shout out for 1 person per chapter but since this is the first I'll start from chapter 1
Chapt.1= Gally615 with 'Such a tease!' OMG I was like ya know it girlfriend! Basically I was lmfao
Chapt.2= fairy tail-cedes with 'Its so good! Please update some more! Hopefully daily! This is going to be an amazing story!' I just love when people put humour or like write as if we know each other for like eve's.
Chapt.3=silvrpheonx with 'i liked this chapter. Mai kicking butt at the start. then telling Naru's feelings to everyone was great. can't wait for the next update.' I'm glad someone noticed and commented on that cos I wasn't sure if you'd like it.
Chapt.4=Socat14 with 'I bet that teacher was surprised and will never again call on Mai. ;p' Omg, just like I pictured the scenario like where Mai knows something and puts her hand up when no one else does and the teacher is like "Anyone?" with a pleading look on her face, happens to me all the time!
Chapt.5=The Wolf's Knight with 'Oh PLEASE! Never do songs like that it was hard to read without laughing LOL and why did she have to wink at Naru I laughed so much I fell off my bed... But otherwise I love your story lol' Now I don't know wether your kidding or being serious about the never do it again thing which makes it difficult to act on so plz let me know so I can act on it!
Chapt.6= Circus Monster 2002 with 'In the next case are they going to figure out Mai is a missing princess! !? Good chappie! Update soon please' Cos cool name used that song in Dancing Doll might wanna check it out, and also Chappie I was like OMG I LOVE IT! And as I re read this page to continue it was playing lol!
Chapt.7= Wow….none of you reviewed -.- MEANIES! JK anyway I'd like to know your opinions that's why I took so long to update
Chapt.8= Alexia1993 with 'Lol that's fantast! I love how you added in some of the Barbie movie stuff! I'm 21 (22 this year) and I'm always being teased cos I like Barbie, own all the DVD's and have all the songs I could get on iTunes.' Because Girl you are awesome and don't let anyone tell ya different and also grown-up but kid at heart love it cos I am too!
Naru's POV (ok I think I got this down)
A scream echoed through the palace (do I write palace or castle, oh well same thing) Me and Lin shot out of bed and ran towards Mai's room. When we got there , Mai was thrashing in her bed whilst strange marks were appearing on her, the markings were in a different language that I couldn't understand but by the paleness of Lin's face, he knew, and it wasn't good. The girl with blonde hair, I think her name was Lacey was crying. The princess were surrounding Mai, and the king, Genevieve, and Derek had just come through, Genevieve went to Mai's side and sat down, she started stroking Mai's hand whilst saying comforting things to her, Mai's screams had turned into a whimper. I looked around after getting a feeling of foreboding, and in the corner a shadow grew to the shape of an archer. He looked over at Mai, and smiled. At that moment Mai starting screaming again as the marks were glowing red. "Lin pin her down." I held the bridge of my nose "Why does this always happen to her?" Ayako and Masako came bursting through the doors with Monk and Yasu, Ayako went to Mai and started slapping her. "God damn it girl, wake up!" Unfortunately that didn't do anything. "Monk, Yasu pin her down, Lin go get me a bottle of water." Masako answered with a sleeping kimono over mouth with "It's fine I have one here." She handed me it, I walked over to Mai as Monk and Yasu pinned her arms and legs in place whilst Lin help her head. I held up the bottle and poured a little bit over her face. She immediately shot up with eyes wide and dilated. She shot out of bed and went to these strange markings on the floor with flowers on (The portal but he doesn't know that!) we looked at her strangely as she looked at certain flowers in the same pattern over and over again. She looked around, then we noticed her eyes were glazed over; she was possessed. "I see you maids still haven't been taught properly" She sneered. Ashlyn stood up and said "Papa says we don't need it, we are princesses in our own way" Her sisters nodded in unison. Lacey looked out from behind Blair. 'Mai' (Air quotations) sneered as she looked at her. "You're the runt of the family, you will cause them all to fall". Mai slapped herself. "You wench (she's meant to be refined, proper ladies do not curse blah blah blah)!" She screamed. "Lacey is not the runt of the family, there is none, they are all poised and refined, you would've known if you paid attention instead of trying to gain the throne, Duchess Rowina" True Mai spat the name. At the name the princesses and prince glared at Evil Mai.
and had a slap fight as they tried to get the other out of the body, but the fight turned unexpected when grabbed her throat as if strangling her, simply closed her eyes and smiled. "You would give up your life for these animals? You barely know them!" She screeched in disbelief. smiled and said "I may not know them that well, but I feel as though we are connected as sisters, so I would gladly give up my life for theirs". just growled then unpossessed Mai, as she did so Mai fell to her knees and rubbed her neck. "Why does this always happen to me?" She asked to no one. Lacey slowly crept over to Mai. "Mai, are you okay?" Lacey asked, she looked as if Mai would hurt her. Mai must have seen this as she smiled and said "No, no one will hurt you." She opened her arms a bit sensing Lacey's fear, she ran into Mai's arms and cried as Mai rocked her back and forth. The sisters looked at the scene with sympathy and small smiles on their faces.
TIME SKIP COS IM LAZY! NEXT MORNING/THAT MORNING AS IT WAS LIKE 2AM LAST TIME
Mai's POV
After that little episode last night Naru decided to look at the history of the castle for Rowina, but when he couldn't find much he went to the princess's, they all said they knew nothing whilst secretly glancing at me. We were all sat in base when Naru spoke. "Masako, how many spirits do you feel?" Masako held her sleeve over her mouth and said "I sense two spirits, both female, one has a gentle, loving aura and the other has a murderous, confused aura." She replied. Naru went into his thinking pose and said "The one with the murderous aura has to be Rowina, and she must be confused because of what happened last night." The rest looked at im in confusion, he merely glanced at me, this sent them looking at me. I just gave them a 'ill tell you later' look and they nodded. "But then who is the other spirit?" Asked Ayako. "I don't know, I don't know, there are too many pieces missing from this case." Said Naru. I gave him a sad look and thought 'Sorry Naru, but this is a case I need to solve myself'. I was brought out of my thoughts when Naru asked me if I had any dreams recently. I told him about the duchess but left the dying, and the magic out and just said they escaped, but then I stopped midsentence and thought about my last dream.
FLASHBACK BTW THIS IS Y SHE SCREAMED!
I was in a castle at a banquet, the room was huge and glittered gold, there was food of all kinds placed upon the table. Every so often I would get a compliment from one of the nobles, I merely blushed and thanked them as I was only around 3. The table went as so.
Royals+me
Nobles Nobles
Clergy Clergy
Church men Church men
Guests
We had knights surrounding us for protection when I heard something. "Aren't the royals so stuck up, look at them putting on a feast to show their wealth" One of the Clergy men 'Whispered' Several others nodded in agreement. Oh if only they knew, all this food was a present from the townsfolk as a gift, we just couldn't eat it all before it would have to go to waste. Still it angered me greatly, so much that I accidently let my PK slip and a knife went up to the clergyman's face, he must have known it was me as he shouted "Monster!" Before falling off his chair and running out. I broke out of the trance I was in triggered by my anger in time to hear what he said. I broke down into tears and ran from the room, many shouts followed me. My parents told everyone that it was because I hadn't a full grasp on my power and it would sometimes slip, though this rarely happened, many guests understood as they were used to PK as my parents would often do PK demonstrations, or help build massive structures such as walls to defend kingdoms, it made it much quicker.
BACK TO THE PRESENT!
'OMG I 'held' a knife to a guys throat, he was right, I am a monster. I looked over at John and nodded my head towards the door, he seemed to understand. We both stood and walked out as Naru had sent everyone else out to do a job, he was turning to me when we both walked out. We got out and I turned to him. "John I need your help." He smiled and said "What with?" I moved from one foot to the other and said "Would you be able to keep Naru distracted for like 3 days, 2 days?" I asked "Sure, if I may ask, why?" I looked him dead in the eye and said "I can solve this one on my own, but you can't tell anyone." He nodded and said "When do you want me start?" "Now would perfect, I won't be around for 3 days be careful, please." He nodded and walked back to base. I went in after and said "Ne, Naru, I'm going not going to be around for 3 days, I'm getting some information from town tell Genevieve if you need me" I said then ran to the room I was sharing. I walked in and saw Ashlyn on her bed reading. "Hey Ashlyn, who's the cobbler?" She looked at me questioningly and said "The prince why?" "I need 3 pairs of dancing shoes stat." She seemed to understand and said follow me. We walked outside to the stone pavilion where we saw Genevieve and Prince Derek dancing. "Oh Derek!" Ashlyn shouted. The couple stopped dancing and turned to her, "I need three pairs of dancing shoes for this young lady stat" Derek nodded and asked me to follow him. We went to a room with a wooden desk and moulds. "Take a seat please." I did as he asked and took my shoes off. He got some things from a shelf and said without looking at me "So, you and Naru huh?" I gave him a shocked looked, he chuckled and said, "Word gets around fast here" I gave him an Oh face. He put my feet into moulds and asked me my favourite colour. I told him and hen he said "So I guess you know?" I nodded and said "Yup, I know the whole story." He laughed and said "Well good luck getting the information" I thanked him and by that night I had three pairs of dancing shoes made.
THAT NIGHT
After singing another lullaby to Lacey, and making sure everyone was asleep, I danced on the magic stones and went through the portal…
Sorry It took so long, I decided to make this chapter really long to make up for it!
